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Just wanted to let you know that these documents came out good except for a few comments. I will do it the same way I did the previous one. Since you have the document, I will indicate the heading and type the line item. Then the comments will come last. 1. Under Problem statement: While the problem of gun abuse hasnt Comment: Do not use contractions in your writing. 2. Under Problem statement: "been the only challenge affecting" COMMENT: If the problem in gun abuse is the issue, then say so clearly and distinctly as noted in Simon's example. 3. Under Problem statement: "the concord of states" COMMENT: What does this mean? Do you mean all of the states? If this is the case, say so. 4. Under Problem statement :( Committees of Correspondence, 2013). COMMENT: I DO NOT BELIEVE THAT THIS IS A SCHOLARLY REFERENCE SOURCE. ONLY USE SCHOLARLY REFERENCE RESOURCES. 5. Under Purpose Statement: "The purpose of this qualitative research study is to understand comprehensively the events." COMMENT: WHAT TYPE OF EVENTS? REMEMBER THAT THE PROBLEM STATEMENT AND PURPOSE MUST ALIGN AND THAT DOES NOT SEEM TO BE THE CASE HERE. 6. Under Purpose Statement: The gun crimes Comments: What types of gun crimes? Do you mean homicides, attempted homicides, robberies, etc.? This is unclear 7. Under Purpose Statement: . Evaluations on the quality of problem statements will be done in conjunction with questionnaires and interviews analysis to provide an understanding on the most appropriate strategies and methodologies of formulating these problem statements. Comments: I am not sure what you mean by evaluations of problem statement. Or how questionnaires and interviews will provide what you are looking for. This is not clear and very confusing. I believe it is different from what you stated in other work. 8. Under significance Statement: existential Comment: What do you mean by this? 9. Under Purpose Statement: development of problem statements on the struggle for peace in the states via examinin
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