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HUMAN DEVELOPMENT FAMILY STUDIES PAPER PEER REVIEW NEEDED. ATTACHED IS THE TEMPLATE AND RUBRIC OF THE PAPER. DUE 3/5/20 5PM

Date Posted: 04/03/2020
Category: English
Due Date: 05/03/2020
Instruction
attached is a rough draft paper but needs to be peer review and edited. The instructions are as followed : need a APA style,12-point font (Times New Roman, Cambria, or Calibri), double-spaced, with 1-inch margins on all four sides (top, bottom, left, and right), 6 pages long including the title page and reference page, OVER AT LEAST TWO ARTICLES NO MORE THAN 5 YEARS OLD IN REGARDS TO 1) explaining how family members may influence one another and the family as a unit, 2) explain how the environment can influence the family unit, Then, describe a specific family process (some aspect of how the family members interact) that you have observed in the family. Provide examples of how the family process is illustrated in this particular family. Incorporate research related to the family process that you select. Rough draft review response was : I feel like you had a lot of great information in your paper but I don't think you followed the template in some areas. I gave you a 1 on the description of your family because you didn't really give me a good picture of the specific family you are talking about you just gave me instances. I gave you a 3 in your discussion of external influence because your 10th paragraph didn't really give as a strong argument for and environmental influence. I think you should consider another environmental influence because when I think of environmental influence I think of traffic, weather, work or the economy. Your conclusion starts off really good but I think it should summarize your topic as a whole instead of repeating your introduction.
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