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Religion Paper on Social Welfare System of Ancient Israel

Date Posted: 16/03/2020
Category: Religious Studies
Due Date: 19/03/2020
Instruction
Four sections of different topics to be answered. I uploaded the guidelines.
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Thetutor 6 years, 6 months ago
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  • Hi, any questions?
    User_25440 | Mar 16, 2020, 14:28 PM
  • No questions
    Thetutor | Mar 16, 2020, 14:29 PM
  • Perfect, I'll be waiting
    User_25440 | Mar 16, 2020, 14:30 PM
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    Thetutor | Mar 17, 2020, 18:26 PM
  • Thanks :)
    User_25440 | Mar 18, 2020, 19:08 PM
  • welcome; let me know when you have a new task
    Thetutor | Mar 18, 2020, 19:09 PM
  • Hi, can you tell me how you wrote it? My professor is asking, please respond
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 17:07 PM
  • Hello, does he suspect that was not your work?
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 17:09 PM
  • He wrote me an email saying: Your Rel 121 Social Welfare System Paper is interesting. Is there anything you’d like to tell me about how you wrote it?
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 17:10 PM
  • What should I say?
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 17:10 PM
  • He suspects that is not your work
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 17:11 PM
  • Also, its the first paper I turn in so I don't think he should suspect of my writing
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 17:11 PM
  • What should I say?
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 17:11 PM
  • Tell him you planned the work, you began with an outline, looked for sources from secondary sources on the topic, then started the draft using all the sources and finalized with compiling the final copy
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 17:12 PM
  • Please do not say you got any assistance.
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 17:14 PM
  • And that means you have to keep with the same level throughout; ypu cannot under perform in the coming essays.
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 17:15 PM
  • I'll use you for the next essay, would you still want to work?
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 17:17 PM
  • Okay I'm going to send this: For my Rel 121 Social Welfare System Paper I planned the work, began with an outline, looked for sources from secondary sources on the topic, then started the draft using all the sources and finalized with compiling the final copy.
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 17:17 PM
  • does that work?
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 17:17 PM
  • You are right; you can also add by saying that you used the Bible as a reference tool
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 17:18 PM
  • and yes I will be available
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 17:18 PM
  • I'll let you know if he asks for something else, please be alert for a new message
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 17:27 PM
  • I am available
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 17:28 PM
  • Could you please show me where to find the following item in your bibliography. Saxena, A. (2009). Israel. Global Media.
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 17:32 PM
  • He just asked for that
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 17:32 PM
  • The third reference
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 17:33 PM
  • It is cited in the first paragraph
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 17:33 PM
  • is that what he is asking?
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 17:34 PM
  • On their part, some other Christians think that it is biblically unfit to have welfare systems which are funded by taxes under the control of the put in place laws. Importantly, God expects rulers as well as the nations to provide for the poor, and He strongly condemns those who do not (Saxena, 2009).
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 17:34 PM
  • check first paragraph; I cited it
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 17:34 PM
  • I think he is asking were we have cited it and it is in the first paragraph
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 17:35 PM
  • I send it to him
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 17:38 PM
  • now let's wait what else does he ask
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 17:40 PM
  • He said: No, I know where it is in your paper. I would like the website where you accessed it or the library catalog page.
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 17:41 PM
  • send it as soon as you can please
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 17:45 PM
  • are you there?
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 18:07 PM
  • Tell him you got it from cite for me website but there is no copy of the source.Thank you
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 18:11 PM
  • what do you mean? you don't remember where you found it?
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 18:12 PM
  • i don't think he will believe that
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 18:13 PM
  • I do; the website is called cite for me; but it does not provide the reading to be downloaded.
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 18:13 PM
  • He knows there is that website.
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 18:13 PM
  • cite for me is just to get a website, didn't you have to enter a website so it could give you a citation?
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 18:15 PM
  • was it a website?
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 18:16 PM
  • he asked about the website; and that is why I said "cite for me" but it is not possible to get a copy of the source
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 18:17 PM
  • so what should I say?
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 18:18 PM
  • I used the source from cite for me website but there is no a copy of it to be sent to you.
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 18:19 PM
  • To cite the source I used "Cite for Me", a website that gives you a citation, but it does not provide the reading to be downloaded.
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 18:23 PM
  • is this okay?
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 18:23 PM
  • this will be enough "To cite the source I used "Cite for Me", a website that gives you a citation".Thank you
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 18:27 PM
  • The prof is provoking you to see whether you will give in that you did not do the work.
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 18:28 PM
  • i think he wants the link to read it, not the source I use
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 18:28 PM
  • Normally the website does not provide all that; after you get content; it is automatic and the correct citation is given
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 18:30 PM
  • you can check the website online
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 18:30 PM
  • I know how they work but before citing something, you need a link and then it gives you the citation, could you please look for that link you used.
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 18:31 PM
  • when you were looking for information on which website did you use for getting that knowledge to write the paragraph. Do you understand now?
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 18:33 PM
  • The main content was from the first two sources and the Bible; so when doing citations, cite for me given additional citations from relevant sources; and gives the reference; unfortunately some are not available online
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 18:39 PM
  • so there is nowhere you could find it?
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 18:41 PM
  • cite for me given additional citations from relevant sources what do you mean with this?
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 18:42 PM
  • provides references which are relevant to topic
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 18:46 PM
  • but not by necessarily giving the links
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 18:47 PM
  • Now i get it
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 18:49 PM
  • I'm sending this: The main content was from the first two sources and the Bible; so when doing citations, cite for me provides references that are relevant to the topic and gives the reference; but not necessarily giving the links.
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 18:50 PM
  • should I offer to remake the introduction or wait what he says?
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 18:50 PM
  • if there s an issue; we can revise the essay and use a different source.
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 18:54 PM
  • i'll say that to him
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 18:54 PM
  • or wait until he responds?
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 18:55 PM
  • we wait for his response
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 18:55 PM
  • I may be wrong, but I don’t believe the Saxena reference exists. I haven’t been able to find it on the web, in library catalogs, or at the Global Media company website. Again, I may be wrong, but I think it is a fiction you made up. The Gal and Haber references which you have in the bibliography, and which you cite in the paper in support of certain ideas, do exist, but they have nothing to do with anything in the paper, or anything about the Bible. (One of them, for example, is on electricity and water utilities in modern Israel.) And large portions of the paper are plagiarized from a website.
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 19:16 PM
  • that's what he wrote
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 19:16 PM
  • had he provided any sources to use besides the Bible?
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 19:18 PM
  • Also, ask whether we can use external sources
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 19:18 PM
  • do you also have class text for the course?
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 19:19 PM
  • Also inquire whether we can redo the work
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 19:19 PM
  • In the guidelines, he said we could use the Bible and the internet but it was not necessary. And we don't have a book for this class just the bible.
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 19:20 PM
  • What should I do?
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 19:22 PM
  • just as him whether we can redo it and question whether we we should use outside sources other than the Bible.
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 19:36 PM
  • I did notice you sited a lot in the paragraphs maybe he wanted more to see my writing rather than just citing the bible with the information.
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 19:39 PM
  • what does he mean plagiarized from a website? is there a website with the exact information you gave to me?
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 19:47 PM
  • he means we did not use the correct citations for some content.
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 19:52 PM
  • So, using outside sources other than the Bible was not an option? Is there a chance I could redo the work? is this okay?
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 19:53 PM
  • Yes it is.
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 19:55 PM
  • I don’t think you understand. One source in your bibliography appears not to exist. You have two references in your bibliography that you use in your paper to support things that you say. But those two references have nothing to do with the Bible, with ancient Israel, with the ancient Israelite social welfare system, or with the ancient world. Nothing. And at least half your paper is lifted verbatim from a website. Verbatim. Word for word. It is plagiarism. People have lost jobs for doing this sort of thing. Careers have been ruined. It is academic dishonesty.
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 20:35 PM
  • just got this
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 20:35 PM
  • did you copy your work from a website?
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 20:37 PM
  • Nothing was copied; the prof sounds malicious; and to support that you copied nothing, let him know that you have the safe assign report which does not show any similarity.
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 20:40 PM
  • what is a safe assign report?
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 20:41 PM
  • Plagiarism report
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 20:42 PM
  • do you have it?
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 20:42 PM
  • Yes I just uploaded it and it does not show anything copied.
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 20:43 PM
  • okay i told him that, now I'm waiting for his response
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 20:48 PM
  • It is like today he had planned to deal with you
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 20:49 PM
  • is the course online?
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 20:50 PM
  • no before all of the corona it was not, it is now
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 20:51 PM
  • how did you submit the assignment; on blackboard?
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 20:53 PM
  • no, by email
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 20:54 PM
  • You made up a reference, cited two references that have no relevance to the topic, and lifted half your paper from a website, and you trusted a plagiarism check website? That’s remarkable. Send me what you have saved.
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 20:54 PM
  • his response
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 20:55 PM
  • From the look of things, he would think that you are fighting him; just to avoid conflict; just request for a chance to redo it.
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 20:59 PM
  • For now, there is no evidence that you copied the assignment; he is just convinced that the language used is not yours.
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 20:59 PM
  • i also used grammarly and it appeared a 1% of plagiarism.
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 21:00 PM
  • but he keeps repeating a website
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 21:00 PM
  • just request for a chance to redo it and ask whether we can use outside sources; from there we will get the way forward.
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 21:01 PM
  • i asked him again
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 21:03 PM
  • How do you explain making up one reference? How do you explain misrepresenting the content of two references, and attributing material from a website as being from those misrepresented references?
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 21:23 PM
  • he responded this
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 21:23 PM
  • could you please help me here?
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 21:34 PM
  • Tell him you might have misinterpreted the information and that you are requesting for a make up task is possible.
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 21:36 PM
  • don't you have answers for the questions?
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 21:37 PM
  • what about this question, attributing material from a website as being from those misrepresented references? he keeps bringing up the website.
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 21:38 PM
  • could you please do your best in looking for that reference he is killing me with that question, could you go back and make the same steps to find the reference
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 21:38 PM
  • He is already saying the information is wrong and that is the reason I am telling you to give the excuse that you might have interpreted the information wrongly and that you are requesting to redo it.
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 21:40 PM
  • which information?
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 21:41 PM
  • he is also saying the information presented in the paper is wrong.
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 21:43 PM
  • As I said before the cite me page provided references that are relevant to the topic and gave me the reference; but not necessarily the links. Yes, I understand it looks like a made it up but I'm saying the truth. Religion for me has just started to grow and misrepresenting the content of the two references is the reason I didn't understand the content. At the end, I checked my plagiarism in Grammarly and received 1% percent and proceed to turn it in. I could say in my records I have never plagiarist my school work.
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 21:52 PM
  • does this work?
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 21:52 PM
  • I feel if i just say that" I might have interpreted the information wrongly and that you are requesting to redo it." he would think I'm accepting i plagiaze
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 21:53 PM
  • yes it does work
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 21:53 PM
  • Let us wait
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 21:54 PM
  • should i said what i told you or your option?
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 21:54 PM
  • use your option
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 21:57 PM
  • i'm waiting for his response
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 22:00 PM
  • What “cite me page” are you talking about?
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 22:27 PM
  • he respond it this
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 22:27 PM
  • This is the link : https://www.mybib.com/#/projects/EJd575/citations
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 22:29 PM
  • You can tell him you have been using it for generating references and citations and you did not know it is not credible.
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 22:30 PM
  • I am now rushing for work; I will check the response later.
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 22:32 PM
  • I'm looking at the page and it says that all the citations are saved. He would not believe since he will ask me to show him the saved one
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 22:48 PM
  • are you sure you can't find the website, it will help a lot? He clearly doesn't want to give me a second chance
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 22:53 PM
  • Hello, I am held now; anyway, the prof wants to press us to the end and it is unfortunate I am unable to get the link ;so the best thing is to ask him the way forward and get back to me; I am so sorry for the mess. Let me know what he says.
    Thetutor | Apr 13, 2020, 23:10 PM
  • the way forward?
    User_25440 | Apr 13, 2020, 23:18 PM
  • Okay so he didn't let me do the second paper but he said: So what I’ll do is this. I won’t count this paper. The second paper you write I’ll count twice towards the final grade.
    User_25440 | Apr 14, 2020, 00:08 AM
  • Be careful next time, for your future papers
    User_25440 | Apr 14, 2020, 00:09 AM
  • That is better.
    Thetutor | Apr 14, 2020, 04:49 AM
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