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Amendment assignment look at below where the changes need to be made on the topics the question and the assignment has been attached on document i will send question when we have spoken
Date Posted: 03/04/2021
Category: Other
Due Date: 04/04/2021
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1- The introduction paragraph is too general and wide. 2- examples of Indian and Japanese examples must be supported by ref. academic writing must be supported by ref. 3-Most of your references have no relevance to the fact cited e.g vijaraman on GDPR what is the relevance! revise-as I have just explained this in class. 4.answer are too general and you must to your experience and support with ref. 5-3e- is insufficient to attract marks- expand 6- check the font size and spacing and alignment in your answer. 7- work is too general and advised to revise and improve.
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  • Hi will you be able to do it?
    User_31824 | Apr 03, 2021, 00:31 AM
  • yeah friend,
    tectutorz | Apr 03, 2021, 00:34 AM
  • Please assign
    tectutorz | Apr 03, 2021, 00:35 AM
  • I need to send you the question after I have assigned but I need to make sure you know what you are doing so that after I have assigned as i have had problem the person said its long or excuses
    User_31824 | Apr 03, 2021, 00:39 AM
  • Ok, I know what needs to be done
    tectutorz | Apr 03, 2021, 00:41 AM
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    User_31824 | Apr 03, 2021, 01:39 AM
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    tectutorz | Apr 03, 2021, 01:45 AM
  • Hi I have updated my own assignment that i have done that needs amendment and also the question relating the answer and if you look on the induction there is the issue that needs fixing is this clear?
    User_31824 | Apr 03, 2021, 02:31 AM
  • 1- The introduction paragraph is too general and wide. 2- examples of Indian and Japanese examples must be supported by ref. academic writing must be supported by ref. 3-Most of your references have no relevance to the fact cited e.g vijaraman on GDPR what is the relevance! revise-as I have just explained this in class. 4.answer are too general and you must to your experience and support with ref. 5-3e- is insufficient to attract marks- expand 6- check the font size and spacing and alignment in your answer. 7- work is too general and advised to revise and improve.
    User_31824 | Apr 03, 2021, 02:32 AM
  • i have put here also the issues that needs fixing on the assigment
    User_31824 | Apr 03, 2021, 02:33 AM
  • thank you friend
    tectutorz | Apr 03, 2021, 02:33 AM
  • noted
    tectutorz | Apr 03, 2021, 02:34 AM
  • how is the work going
    User_31824 | Apr 03, 2021, 14:08 PM
  • still working on it
    tectutorz | Apr 03, 2021, 16:03 PM
  • are you okay need anything from me?
    User_31824 | Apr 04, 2021, 00:03 AM
  • i'm ok right now
    tectutorz | Apr 04, 2021, 00:05 AM
  • are you nearly done?
    User_31824 | Apr 04, 2021, 16:25 PM
  • Yeah, I'm nearly through.
    tectutorz | Apr 04, 2021, 16:27 PM
  • is it done????
    User_31824 | Apr 04, 2021, 23:21 PM
  • i'm currently going through the document to make sure that everything is done correctly.
    tectutorz | Apr 04, 2021, 23:25 PM
  • how long do you think it will take to be updated as i need to update in 3 hours
    User_31824 | Apr 04, 2021, 23:27 PM
  • ok, i will be through in 3 hours
    tectutorz | Apr 04, 2021, 23:31 PM
  • hellooooooo?
    User_31824 | Apr 05, 2021, 02:53 AM
  • nothing been uploaded i need to upload my work
    User_31824 | Apr 05, 2021, 02:54 AM
  • its been 4 hours and i am still waiting?
    User_31824 | Apr 05, 2021, 02:55 AM
  • going through the last 5 pages and then upload.
    tectutorz | Apr 05, 2021, 02:55 AM
  • how long? can you give me time
    User_31824 | Apr 05, 2021, 02:56 AM
  • sorry for the delay, i lost power when i was almost through, and i had not saved some changes.
    tectutorz | Apr 05, 2021, 02:57 AM
  • okay just can you give me time as i need to upload if you can give me time as i need to know
    User_31824 | Apr 05, 2021, 02:58 AM
  • ok, i'm through. let me upload
    tectutorz | Apr 05, 2021, 02:59 AM
  • Hello Friend! I'm through with your project. PLEASE CHECK AND RELEASE THE PAYMENTS!!!!
    tectutorz | Apr 05, 2021, 03:01 AM
  • great thanks just wanted to know have you just put the changes in word so i need to add it to my original one?
    User_31824 | Apr 05, 2021, 03:03 AM
  • Yeah, I made the changes
    tectutorz | Apr 05, 2021, 03:05 AM
  • thank you
    tectutorz | Apr 05, 2021, 03:11 AM
  • thanks
    User_31824 | Apr 05, 2021, 03:28 AM
  • Hi i have received this massage from university saying work has not been referenced Including short extracts to illustrate an answer is perfectly proper provided that it is correctly referenced. Including large sections, even if referenced, is of little benefit since the marker will ignore it as not being your own work. Where work is not properly referenced then there is the risk that you have committed plagiarism, which is a breach of the Universities regulations. If you are found to have done this then your work will be penalised.
    User_31824 | Apr 22, 2021, 16:51 PM
  • Ok, let me fix
    tectutorz | Apr 22, 2021, 16:56 PM
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  • Hi i will have to give you the questions relating to the answer that I have done this is an amendment that needs to be high standard and also i want to make sure you know what you are doing?
    User_31824 | Apr 03, 2021, 00:57 AM
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