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Correction/ Edit Innovative tool proposal document.

Date Posted: 04/05/2021
Category: Health Care
Due Date: 06/05/2021
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Follow 7th edition APA, please correct all citations and references Correct gramatical errors Read through Rubric carefully Attached proposal word document, rubric, and evaluators notes on what needs to be corrected. Do not make up any new information. Needs corrections only.
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  • Please try to finish it today or tomorrow. If paper is done fast and will pass I will pay bonus.
    User_34791 | May 04, 2021, 19:08 PM
  • Hello, sounds good. Which is your timezones?
    User_5522 | May 04, 2021, 19:10 PM
  • *timezone*
    User_5522 | May 04, 2021, 19:10 PM
  • Pacific time
    User_34791 | May 04, 2021, 19:15 PM
  • Paper is done, only complete what ever is missing based on attachments A-I
    User_34791 | May 04, 2021, 19:16 PM
  • Alright, I hope I am not touching anything in the areas where you are marked competent
    User_5522 | May 04, 2021, 19:20 PM
  • Just follow the rubric, letters are correlating with evaluation.
    User_34791 | May 04, 2021, 19:24 PM
  • Now that I am not adding any new information, what should I do to the areas where you are told to, say, give specific examples
    User_5522 | May 04, 2021, 19:33 PM
  • I just uploaded additional notes from instructor. Please use them as well. very helpful.
    User_34791 | May 04, 2021, 19:45 PM
  • thank you
    User_5522 | May 04, 2021, 20:04 PM
  • I asked about adding examples and the other areas which need additional explanation.
    User_5522 | May 04, 2021, 20:16 PM
  • Which area is that? what letter?
    User_34791 | May 04, 2021, 23:23 PM
  • You can add new information to areas where it is nessasary. Clinic is a med spa with nurses, NP, PAs, MD, managers, call center and front desk
    User_34791 | May 04, 2021, 23:25 PM
  • I meant that previous writer made up a hypothetical hospital, when I included info that needed to be used in Rubric document.
    User_34791 | May 04, 2021, 23:31 PM
  • Hi, I am finalizing the work. I got you, you will be getting it shortly
    User_5522 | May 05, 2021, 16:01 PM
  • Hello, I uploaded the work. Please check.
    User_5522 | May 05, 2021, 21:20 PM
  • Can you please check in text citation rules. I think you have to write everyone names first time and then after that you have to write first authors name and et al.,?
    User_34791 | May 05, 2021, 21:52 PM
  • It is done correctly. I checked Purdue OWL guidelines
    User_5522 | May 05, 2021, 22:11 PM
  • Or where exactly is the mistake done? Which paragraph? I can as well check.
    User_5522 | May 05, 2021, 22:36 PM
  • Starting page 3 of the paper. I attached the APA 7th edition screenshot for 3 authors or more. I am not sure but I think that's what is the new rule.
    User_34791 | May 06, 2021, 05:04 AM
  • I am already checking it. I will get back to you.
    User_5522 | May 06, 2021, 05:45 AM
  • I think this work is just fine that way. We may end up adding more problems.
    User_5522 | May 06, 2021, 06:10 AM
  • I confirmed with instructor, it has to be changed. I changed it and submitted.lets see what they will say. thank you.
    User_34791 | May 06, 2021, 21:06 PM
  • It came back for revision. Please see attached , A4, A6, G, I has to be fixed. I attached it along with paper with corrected citation.
    User_34791 | May 06, 2021, 23:46 PM
  • I am checking it right now. Thank you
    User_5522 | May 06, 2021, 23:49 PM
  • Attachment 11,12,13
    User_34791 | May 06, 2021, 23:51 PM
  • Hi, I am still fixing the paper. on professional communication, how can I really fix it? Because I don't know where exactly, for instance, the content is poorly organized or the part that is difficult to follow. Please clarify.
    User_5522 | May 07, 2021, 05:20 AM
  • How much time is left for the revision?
    User_5522 | May 07, 2021, 05:23 AM
  • Hello, please check this.
    User_5522 | May 07, 2021, 07:58 AM
  • Hello, so try it was night here. I do not know, what exactly they mean. Did you fix the other areas? I previously attached " additional tips from instructor" it describes how to whiteout smart goal. I just attached it again.Pease fix whatever they ar asking for and I will send it to my instructor. There were notes on grammar as well. I will fix it too. Please try to get it done today, so I can submit it this weekend to instructor.
    User_34791 | May 07, 2021, 14:55 PM
  • Did you check the document I sent? I had fixed all the other areas. You can confirm first.
    User_5522 | May 07, 2021, 15:56 PM
  • there is only 1st version attached. I don't see the second download.
    User_34791 | May 07, 2021, 16:19 PM
  • please upload the revised version
    User_34791 | May 07, 2021, 17:35 PM
  • Sorry, I don't why it had failed to upload. I have resent it.
    User_5522 | May 07, 2021, 18:11 PM
  • Smith, I. J. (Ed.). (2005). The joint commission guide to improving staff communication. Joint Commission on. Thomas, T. W., Seifert, P. C., & Joyner, J. C. (2016). Registered nurses leading innovation changes. OJIN: The Online journal of Issues in Nursing, 21(3), 3. these 2 don't have links. can you send it to me via message, do not revise the paper.
    User_34791 | May 07, 2021, 18:38 PM
  • Thomas, T. W., Seifert, P. C., & Joyner, J. C. (2016). Registered nurses leading innovation changes. OJIN: The Online journal of Issues in Nursing, 21(3), 3. Journal:http://ojin.nursingworld.org/MainMenuCategories/ANAMarketplace/ANAPeriodicals/OJIN/TableofContents/Vol-21-2016/No3-Sept-2016/Registered-Nurses-Leading-Innovative-Changes.html Smith, I. J. (Ed.). (2005). The joint commission guide to improving staff communication. Joint Commission on. https://www.jcrinc.com/-/media/deprecated-unorganized/imported-assets/jcr/default-folders/items/gisc09_sample_pages1pdf.pdf?db=web&hash=AFF6716C42110A67559F74B5295517DB
    User_5522 | May 07, 2021, 20:23 PM
  • Smith, I. J. (Ed.). (2005). The joint commission guide to improving staff communication. Joint Commission on. https://www.jcrinc.com/-/media/deprecated-unorganized/imported-assets/jcr/default-folders/items/gisc09_sample_pages1pdf.pdf?db=web&hash=AFF6716C42110A67559F74B5295517DB
    User_5522 | May 07, 2021, 20:24 PM
  • Thomas, T. W., Seifert, P. C., & Joyner, J. C. (2016). Registered nurses leading innovation changes. OJIN: The Online journal of Issues in Nursing, 21(3), 3. Journal:http://ojin.nursingworld.org/MainMenuCategories/ANAMarketplace/ANAPeriodicals/OJIN/TableofContents/Vol-21-2016/No3-Sept-2016/Registered-Nurses-Leading-Innovative-Changes.html
    User_5522 | May 07, 2021, 20:24 PM
  • thank you
    User_34791 | May 08, 2021, 05:13 AM
  • I submitted it, will let you know
    User_34791 | May 08, 2021, 05:14 AM
  • Alright.
    User_5522 | May 08, 2021, 06:00 AM
  • it came back for poorly written language and grammar.
    User_34791 | May 10, 2021, 02:31 AM
  • i had to purchase Grammarly program to fix the errors. Thank you for your help. I think I have to do this myself now.
    User_34791 | May 10, 2021, 02:33 AM
  • Thank you for the payment.
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