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topic approval paper feedback

Date Posted: 04/09/2021
Category: English
Due Date: 08/09/2021
Instruction
Read the Sample Topic Approval Papers attached here and provide some formative feedback for both writers. In one document, include: 1 paragraph explaining what Sample A author should do to revise the document. 1 paragraph explaining what Sample B author should do to revise the document. 1 paragraph on what techniques you want to emulate from either of these samples 1 paragraph on what you want to avoid based on either of these samples. (hint: a paragraph is no less than 4 sentences)
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  • 1 paragraph on what techniques you want to emulate from either of these samples 1 paragraph on what you want to avoid based on either of these samples. (hint: a paragraph is no less than 4 sentences)...................got you buddy
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  • I posted the topic approval paper separately... I need a rough draft, wait for professor feedback, then the final.
    User_17168 | Sep 04, 2021, 14:41 PM
  • Alright, thanks
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  • You got it?
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  • Sure, almost uploading
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    surrogatewriter | Sep 08, 2021, 18:21 PM
  • Hi, I uploaded the assignment that I turned in. This is what I was looking for and the thoughts that I have about the sample papers. I used a bit of your analysis, but changed it to what I thought the professor was looking for. Please take a look at it before continuing.
    User_17168 | Sep 09, 2021, 15:38 PM
  • okay
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