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I need someone to revise and add to my story where you think there should be more details

Date Posted: 26/10/2021
Category: English
Due Date: 26/10/2021
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I have a story that was written and just need some detail that makes sense to be added in some spots after reading the excerpt.
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  • do you understand that this is just a revision to my rough draft? if you need help as of what to add I will describe more in detail once you respond to this message and I know that you understand.
    User_35087 | Oct 26, 2021, 14:37 PM
  • Okay
    Robert_d_308 | Oct 26, 2021, 14:38 PM
  • Working on it.
    Robert_d_308 | Oct 26, 2021, 14:42 PM
  • Basically just elaborate more on the police situation and what ends up happening in the hospital. add what you want but make it make sense. the story is supposed to based on something realistic but adding some fabrications to it to make it a short story. also can you correct the grammatical errors and punctual.
    User_35087 | Oct 26, 2021, 14:48 PM
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