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Need an essay written about "Profiling" someone. You pick someone you know and write an essay about their lives.This needs to be very well done. There is step by step guides and how to format your paper i will give to the highest bidder.

Date Posted: 25/12/2014
Category: English
Due Date: 30/12/2014
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Need an essay written about "Profiling" someone. You pick someone you know and write an essay about their lives.This needs to be very well done. There is step by step guides and how to format your paper i will give to the highest bidder.

User_6110 added on 12/25/14 at 07:23 AM (PST):

I have attached the "instructions" page to you. This has all the information you need. THANK YOU AGAIN! If you have any questions please feel free to contact me.
Bidders
bishoplampz 11 years, 9 months ago
Rated 9.2 earned 29248.80 around 749 assignments.
Hello. Kindly allow me to take the assignment and I promise to deliver according to the given instructions. You can rest assured have checked on the assignment requirements and am well versed and competent to deliver on the field subject. I guarantee an A graded paper, plagiarism free and of timely delivery. Thanks in advance for your faith in me.
$35.00
  • If you will lower your price to $30 i will do it. I don't really want to pay $50. Also, if you do good, i will have a term paper to write, and i will be happy to pay you to do this as well. Let me know.
    User_6110 | Dec 25, 2014, 06:59 AM
  • Also, i just want to make sure you know what this paper will entail. Here are the instructions i was given. There is MUCH more information, and a couple samples to go off of. But this is basic info on the essay........ Now you begin! Begin your profile by answering these questions: Who will you profile? Why? Is this someone you can actually interview? If not, pick another person! What questions will you ask him/her? List 7-10. Who else can you actually interview that knows this person? What questions will you ask of him/her? What problems do you anticipate & how might you take care of them? As you think about who to profile keep this in mind: Choose as your subject someone whose job [or experience] is so important or so interesting or so unusual that the average reader would want to read about that person. In other words, choose someone who touches some corner of the reader's life. When it comes to interviewing someone, you may wish to look at these two websites in order: Structuring the Interview and Conducting the Interview. Here are some other tips: #1:Take notes during the interview. If you have trouble keeping up with your subject, just say, `Hold it a minute, please,` and write until you catch up. #2: Use a combination of direct quotations and summaries. `If the speaker's conversation is ragged, . . . the writer has no choice but to clean up the English and provide the missing links. . . . What's wrong . . . is to fabricate quotes or to surmise what someone might have said.` #3 To get the facts right, remember that you can call [or revisit] the person you interviewed. Grading Criteria Each of the following will be worth 10 points. #1 Focus: Make sure to profile someone carefully and thoroughly. Use a strong HOOK to catch our attention and focus in on the message/purpose of writing the profile. #2 Development: Use quotations, examples, and anecdotes to create a VIVID PICTURE of the subject. #3 Organization: Have a implied thesis that connects to the hook. Make sure the connections to larger issues are woven throughout the essay. #4 Style: This MUST be written in third person. Practice those elements of clarity from Task 7. #5 Mechanics: Proofread carefully. When using dialogue, punctuate correctly.
    User_6110 | Dec 25, 2014, 07:03 AM
  • To be fair on both sides...lets work with $35 but am promising to stick to your guideline and deliver nothing less than an A graded paper
    User_4523 | Dec 25, 2014, 07:16 AM
  • Ok, That is more than fair. I also have 3 other papers that will be due by Jan 5th. If you go a good job on this, and would like to do these other ones, i would be more than happy to work out something with you and pay for the other 3.
    User_6110 | Dec 25, 2014, 07:20 AM
  • ok. thanks for the offer
    User_4523 | Dec 25, 2014, 07:32 AM
  • Hey, just checking to see how this is coming along. This is the first time i've ever done this, and just nervous about it. Thanks
    User_6110 | Dec 27, 2014, 13:02 PM
  • uploaded the completed work. please do check on it
    User_4523 | Dec 29, 2014, 19:53 PM
  • I have been going over this, and wanted to ask about it. I am supposed to have interviewed this person, who is he? Also, you mention him and i grew up in the same town, where is that? I am from Oklahoma, so i hope that i can pass that off as believable, also there is supposed to be a works cited page. You used quotes from him, and did not cite them, that is part of the whole point of writing this paper. Part of the instructions even said to make a vivid picture of him, which was not done in this paper. I also just want to make sure you actually wrote this and didn't plagiarize it. There is one part where you put the same sentence back to back like you could have copied it, and my school submits all papers to Turnitin.com to make sure non of it is plagiarized.
    User_6110 | Dec 29, 2014, 22:42 PM
  • hello.let me recheck the work to revise on the missing parts.thanks
    User_4523 | Dec 30, 2014, 03:36 AM
  • Please check the documents have just uploaded. thanks
    User_4523 | Dec 30, 2014, 16:47 PM
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