Instruction
A full academic edits for a document which is my graduation thesis and I have not time for this. The edit includes checking the grammar, sentence structure, making the sentences as short as possible, using coma or period in the proper place and re-writing whatever you think it needs to be re-written as long as you do not change the meaning.
It is 10,000 words but they are all paraphrased and mostly are in good shape. Please I need a good quality of work.
User_6126 added on 03/16/15 at 06:50 AM (PST):
Please read again what I have asked you to do. Also, please whatever changes you make, put it in the red color so that I would know what you have done or changed. PLEASE take a deep look for the last 7 tables and check them perfectly. LAST THING, there is one table at the appendix DO NOT DO TOUCH IT as well as the references.