I need someone to correct my pap

Date Posted: 01/11/2011

Category: General
Due Date: 01/11/2011

Instruction

I need someone to correct my paper, see If there is any grammer mistakes, punctuation, sentence structure.
If you need to change any sentence with your words, be free to do that but don't change the main idea of the sentence.

There are 355 words in the paper, I want 500 words in the paper so, you can add it on any paragraph you want.
the topic is (Intelligence)
I need it today before 11:00 pm U.S.A TIME

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Homework_Nerd 15 years, 8 months ago
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Hey there same_sa. I'd like to help you out with your paper. When you say USA time, you do realize there's a 4 hour difference between the coasts right? :D EST? I can definitely help you out here. let me know thanks

$25.00

ooh, yes you right :D .. I live in California.
User_1430 | Jan 11, 2011, 11:01 AM
Ok yeah well that works for me. I have enough time to work on it when i get back from work. I live in NY, so I should be able to do it. Please assign the work and i'll get it done for you. I'll get the paper above 500 words and proofread and edit your paper. Thanks
Homework_Nerd | Jan 11, 2011, 11:03 AM
It's done
User_1430 | Jan 11, 2011, 11:13 AM
hey there same_sa. I'm done with the paper. I had to change a fair amount because a lot of it did not make sense. You should read through the paper and understand it just in case. thanks! You can download it there
Homework_Nerd | Jan 11, 2011, 13:51 PM
hi there!, are you willing to do an English work, I have a topic and I need you to find 3 sources minimum. and those sources need to be trusted. use good websites " don't use Wikipedia " .. using your own words write down "3 paragraphs" about the facts that you find it related to the topic. Each paragraph should be academic in content and style. and I need it ASAP! so what you think!? .. by the way it is an easy topic
User_1430 | Feb 21, 2013, 19:31 PM

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