Revise these paragraphs by addin

Date Posted: 08/11/2011

Category: English
Due Date: 09/11/2011

Instruction

Revise these paragraphs by adding, deleting, and moving material around. Check that they are carefully and correctly documented (MLA or APA). Note all of your revisions and write a paragraph or two explaining the changes. I just want changes made to these paragraphs regarding the topic, writing style, etc.. whatever changes you make, make sure you document that in a paragraph or two

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Homework_Nerd 15 years, 1 month ago
Rated 9.64 earned 198461.97 around 1228 assignments.

Hey there! I'd like to revise your paragraphs for you. Please let me know when its due exactly and i'll get it done for you in time. Thank you

$30.00

I would like to have it by Wednesday 11/09/2011 8:00pm (PST) time...
User_1448 | Aug 11, 2011, 14:56 PM
Hey there, i'm done with it already thanks
Homework_Nerd | Sep 11, 2011, 17:54 PM

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