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I created my lesson plan but unfortunately I didn't follow the right directions. However, I need an expert who can edit it and change it to lesson plan about writing or short story with concentrate in the adaptation part about students who are weak in capitalization. The grade is 8th grade in New York state.

Date Posted: 16/04/2015
Category: Education
Due Date: 18/04/2015
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I created my lesson plan but unfortunately I didn't follow the right directions. However, I need an expert who can edit it and change it to lesson plan about writing or short story with concentrate in the adaptation part about students who are weak in capitalization. The grade is 8th grade in New York state. You can see my lesson plan, sample of the lesson plan and rubric in the attachment.
Please follow the comments in my lesson plan and rubric
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    harvardtutor | Apr 16, 2015, 20:24 PM
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Essaymasters 11 years, 5 months ago
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  • change the price because it is only editing for my lesson plan.
    User_5059 | Apr 16, 2015, 20:28 PM
  • Actually I have to write it a fresh because the documents you have uploaded are in pdf ........
    Essaymasters | Apr 16, 2015, 20:32 PM
  • I upload it in word document
    User_5059 | Apr 16, 2015, 20:35 PM
  • ok I will make it $30....is that ok
    Essaymasters | Apr 16, 2015, 20:38 PM
  • Have you ever write a lesson plan?
    User_5059 | Apr 16, 2015, 20:39 PM
  • Have written a lot of them but it depends of what is expected of one.......
    Essaymasters | Apr 16, 2015, 20:42 PM
  • There is a student who have problem in capitalization. The doctor asked us to teach the whole class for example, writing or short story. The lesson is 55 minutes long. In the individualized adaptation, we should focus on how we help student to overcome this problem, I mean capitalization. The grade is 8th in New York state. We should differentiate the instruction part between teacher and students. Please follow the rubric and her comments in my lesson plan. Also, you can see the sample of the lesson plan attached.
    User_5059 | Apr 16, 2015, 20:47 PM
  • Yes I will follow it and make it perfect...........................thanks
    Essaymasters | Apr 16, 2015, 20:52 PM
  • change the price please
    User_5059 | Apr 16, 2015, 20:52 PM
  • Don't forget the attachment within my lesson plan and try to indicate to them as mini-lesson for that student who is weak in capitalization. Go ahead and I need perfect paper. If you need any help, don't hesitate to contact me.
    User_5059 | Apr 16, 2015, 20:58 PM
  • ok
    Essaymasters | Apr 16, 2015, 21:01 PM
  • please read the direction many times till you understand the required.
    User_5059 | Apr 16, 2015, 21:02 PM
  • go ahead and be on time. Contact me if you need help
    User_5059 | Apr 16, 2015, 21:04 PM
  • I hear you......
    Essaymasters | Apr 16, 2015, 21:04 PM
  • How's working my friend?
    User_5059 | Apr 18, 2015, 02:07 AM
  • Can I get the paper which you submitted for marking this one is giving me a lot of formating problems see how the final copy looks I need...the document you submitted for marking that one will assist me very much...thanks
    Essaymasters | Apr 18, 2015, 09:33 AM
  • I upload it
    User_5059 | Apr 18, 2015, 17:03 PM
  • ok ill use it ...thanks
    Essaymasters | Apr 18, 2015, 19:24 PM
  • Please check the completed work and release the payment....thanks
    Essaymasters | Apr 18, 2015, 21:31 PM
  • you didn't follow the directions at all. I told you to create a lesson plan for 8th grade in writing. In the adaption or individualization, you can go through and focus on Capitalization for the weak students. Do you understand?
    User_5059 | Apr 18, 2015, 22:37 PM
  • go back and read the directions carefully
    User_5059 | Apr 18, 2015, 22:38 PM
  • waiting to hear from you
    User_5059 | Apr 18, 2015, 23:34 PM
  • I will cancel the assignment cuz you didn't respond to me at all and your work was far from what I expected
    User_5059 | Apr 19, 2015, 16:38 PM
  • I am checking on it ,,,please give me sometime I see whether I can correct it...thanks
    Essaymasters | Apr 19, 2015, 16:42 PM
  • I said that you have to change the lesson to writing for 8th grade and you didn't at all. I said you have to change all the instruction and the whole lesson and you didn't. I asked you to focus about students who are weak in Capitalization to solve this problem to them and you didn't
    User_5059 | Apr 19, 2015, 16:45 PM
  • Hello friend, I upload a sample of lesson plan. Kindly check it and write my lesson plan about writing in 8th grade. I individualized adaptation, focus on the students who are weak in capitalization. I hope this work and you get the point
    User_5059 | Apr 20, 2015, 02:09 AM
  • I will check on it....thanks
    Essaymasters | Apr 20, 2015, 02:28 AM
  • don't forget to read my direction carefully
    User_5059 | Apr 20, 2015, 02:30 AM
  • How's working? And when are you going to deliver it?
    User_5059 | Apr 20, 2015, 19:22 PM
  • check the work I have considered what you told me ...thanks
    Essaymasters | Apr 20, 2015, 19:40 PM
  • what about the content? I asked you to choose a story that is suitable for 8th grade and through it you can teach them capitalization. Second, you didn't change a lot of thing just you repeat my writing in the previous lesson plan.
    User_5059 | Apr 21, 2015, 02:32 AM
  • waiting for you
    User_5059 | Apr 21, 2015, 02:52 AM
  • I will cancel the assignment cuz you are late in response and the lesson plan that you delivered were not god. I'm sorry.
    User_5059 | Apr 21, 2015, 16:41 PM
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    User_5059 | Apr 16, 2015, 20:32 PM
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