Need revise

Date Posted: 04/12/2011

Category: Philosophy
Due Date: 06/12/2011

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IvyleagueGirl 15 years, 4 months ago
Rated 9.46 earned 175872.95 around 3838 assignments.

Hi Afae, i can definitely revise the paper for you. but it seems like your paper needs to be rewritten rather than revise. let me know if you need my help but i wont be able to do it for less than $30.

$25.00

please can you make it 25 at least this time? do not make any discount for me in the future.
User_1385 | May 12, 2011, 05:24 AM
i changed it to $25. what time do you need it by tomorrow?
IvyleagueGirl | May 12, 2011, 05:59 AM
since you were easy with the price i want to have it after tomorrow. how is that ?
User_1385 | May 12, 2011, 08:23 AM
cool... i should be able to get it to you later tomorrow night. can you please assign me the bid
IvyleagueGirl | May 12, 2011, 08:27 AM
done
User_1385 | May 12, 2011, 09:30 AM
Thanks! I'll be in touch
IvyleagueGirl | May 12, 2011, 10:39 AM
what time do you need this by for today/ Wednesday? I'd like to know when you have to hand it in.
IvyleagueGirl | Jun 12, 2011, 20:45 PM
today midnight.
User_1385 | Jul 12, 2011, 04:41 AM
please make sure that there is no plagiarism in the text. thank you
User_1385 | Jul 12, 2011, 17:24 PM
No Problem! I'm actually just finishing off at the moment.
IvyleagueGirl | Jul 12, 2011, 17:29 PM
Also, for some of the parts where your teacher agreed i'm not changing them since she thinks that they are good.
IvyleagueGirl | Jul 12, 2011, 17:35 PM
also there are a couple of places where your teacher mentions a few articles that you should've added to your paper and i dont know what she's referring to. I'm guessing its the readings from class. do you want to add those in yourself....i can put the places where she wants you to add them?
IvyleagueGirl | Jul 12, 2011, 17:39 PM
Also, your teacher say that John Hick's criticism part is not necessary and it does not prove your argument. I will just take it off if thats okay with you, because it is useless if it does not prove your point.
IvyleagueGirl | Jul 12, 2011, 17:58 PM
yes, do what you think it is best. and I'm not going to add from the reading because i did in a another paper. thank you
User_1385 | Jul 12, 2011, 18:03 PM
Hey, i just uploaded the paper! i tried my best to tweek it and change what she wanted. I really hope that it has made a difference in the eyes of your teacher. Some of your problems were fundmental to your topic rather than grammatical. I tried to learn as much as i could about your topic.
IvyleagueGirl | Jul 12, 2011, 18:50 PM
ok thank you a lot, it is great.
User_1385 | Jul 12, 2011, 18:56 PM
i'm glad you like! please do leave me a feedback when you get a chance.
IvyleagueGirl | Jul 12, 2011, 18:59 PM

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