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redited a essay that someone really screwed up on,

Date Posted: 19/06/2015
Category: English
Due Date: 20/06/2015
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redited a essay that someone really screwed up on, It only needs five paragraphs and not 8, It did not really go in order of the thesis statement.There were some grammar, was confused as to where your points started and ended. There were some grammar, and spelling issues. I think you should revise the statement to be more clear. Also you need the title on the first page of essay. The conclusion is very short and needs more details and examples. Lengthen the very short paragraphs
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  • hallo, where is the work am supposed to edit
    phoniextutor | Jun 19, 2015, 16:35 PM
  • ok.. thanks
    phoniextutor | Jun 19, 2015, 16:36 PM
  • I uploaded it, it has grammar issues and doesnt make sense, needs to be cut down to five paragraphs not 8, It only needs five paragraphs and not 8, It did not really go in order of the thesis statement.There were some grammar, was confused as to where your points started and ended. There were some grammar, and spelling issues. I think you should revise the statement to be more clear. Also you need the title on the first page of essay. The conclusion is very short and needs more details and examples. Lengthen the very short paragraphs
    User_7273 | Jun 19, 2015, 16:36 PM
  • I uploaded the instructors format outlining how it should be
    User_7273 | Jun 19, 2015, 17:01 PM
  • OK.. Thanks.
    phoniextutor | Jun 19, 2015, 17:02 PM
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