I need someone to correct the errors my teacher found. I am sending her comments, I need for you to correct them.

Thank you for assigning, I am going to work on it and let you once I complete earlier tomorrow
TalentedTeacher | Jul 19, 2015, 22:25 PM

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Thank you for assigning, I am going to work on it and let you once I complete earlier today
TalentedTeacher | Jul 19, 2015, 22:25 PM

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check the work, I have complete...I have also added thesis..its Gender differences"...confirm it on the first paragraph's last sentence or on the last paragraph's first sentence "in conclusion section"..If any little issue let me know..
TalentedTeacher | Jul 20, 2015, 10:30 AM

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You have some good ideas, but I don't need a new essay I need for this essay to be corrected per the instruction from the professor. This is a Literary English, so everything have be analyze. I uploaded the outline so you can get an ideas of how my paper suppose to outlined. Please correct all errors that my professor pointed out on the upload that I send you. I like my essay I just need the following errors corrected.
User_6850 | Jul 20, 2015, 16:03 PM

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yes.....hold on...I check that file you have uploaded
TalentedTeacher | Jul 20, 2015, 16:10 PM

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Can I ask you....do you need your assignment to be presented in MS Word or powerpoint?..The outline you ahve uploaded has instruction about "PowerPoint Presentation Guidelines"
TalentedTeacher | Jul 20, 2015, 16:11 PM

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I did not make big change..but I answer/corrected your professor comment about thesis.."Gillie: Grade: 8 out of 10. Good summary and ideas; however, there is hardly any analysis, and you have not: stated a thesis and topic sentences that address the question clearly;.....I am checking the paper again..please hold on
TalentedTeacher | Jul 20, 2015, 16:23 PM

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MS Word.. Look at the paper I uploaded with the teacher's comment on the side. It actually tell me what I did wrong, And all I got to do is correct it. Comment are on the side and at the end of the paper. Look at the comment on the side and correct. That our basic outline that we use for all papers. Powerpoint and MS Word.
User_6850 | Jul 20, 2015, 17:04 PM

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Fine...thank you for responding..Hold on, I correct the paper and remove the new sentences which I had added..
TalentedTeacher | Jul 20, 2015, 17:07 PM

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Check it please
TalentedTeacher | Jul 20, 2015, 19:04 PM

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Still not correct, In the second line you wrote"women were not supposed to vote and they had no right to make speeches" That is incorrect. You did not look at the outlined I sent you where I have to put the author full name in the introduction, in the same introduction paragraph, you took out the name of the main characters(see outline or see comment 3 made by professors on the upload I sent you) it like you re-wrote my whole essay, I only want you to correct what the professor say that I had errors on. If you have any question please refer back to the outline or see professor notes on the side of the paper. Remember the way I written it have I want it, I just need you correct the error that are noted. I made 8 out 10 on this paper, I just need the error corrected to get the 10.
User_6850 | Jul 20, 2015, 20:55 PM

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ok..
TalentedTeacher | Jul 20, 2015, 21:00 PM

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Confirm it again. I have corrected and used outline as reference
TalentedTeacher | Jul 20, 2015, 21:52 PM

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Please! do not change my essay, please just correct the comment that the professor left. I have my paper in the basic outline that i need to use.Explain quotes, Put Quotes around "Trifles,. I am uploading your paper you sent me with errors in yellow.
User_6850 | Jul 20, 2015, 22:43 PM

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I have not changed your essay. I corrected the sentences. Remember what you have told me here "You did not look at the outlined I sent you where I have to put the author full name in the introduction, in the same introduction paragraph, you took out the name of the main characters(see outline or see comment 3 made by professors on the upload I sent you) ". You told me to put authors names and characters. I have already done that. I have looked at the paper you have just uploaded now, you highlighting the authors names and characters while are the one you have told me to put them.
TalentedTeacher | Jul 20, 2015, 22:49 PM

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Please tell em I remove them now and send you the paper without authors names or characters.. because this is the only change made in your paper?
TalentedTeacher | Jul 20, 2015, 22:49 PM

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In your revise paper, i don see none of my literary element, when i use conflict,point of view,self-deprecating sarcasm,. when i say the main character, i needed you to put Henry peters(sheriff) and so on.(that introduction of the characters).i need you to leave "For example" after i states,. During the 1900's women were viewed as objects or property of men.( That is when i have to give an example. i think that we are having a break down in communication somewhere. My paper have to start like this:During the 1900's women were viewed as objects or the property of men. For example, they were not allowed to vote and could not voice their opioions. Susan Glaspell in her play "Trifles" examines male and female relationship.( an so on.) I basically need you to proread this and make changes that my professor cited on my paper.
User_6850 | Jul 20, 2015, 23:49 PM

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Hello Friend. its clear now. download this file "TalentedTeacher-EDITED". Just read through and let em know if you need any change. About in-text citation, here is how I have added "society leaders (Glaspell, 4). Men" If you don't like this form of citation let me know so that I change
TalentedTeacher | Jul 21, 2015, 03:57 AM

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