essay 8 pages compare and contrast two literary works which is " I Used to Live Here Once (Rhys)" " and " Because I Could Not Stop for Death (Dickinson)" due 23rd at 9 pm

i know and im sorry its a rough draft due tomorrow double spaced sorry its 6 not 8 pages. We had to call the family in on my father in law and its rough around here right now..
User_1830 | Jan 22, 2012, 19:17 PM

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there. I'm sorry to hear about that. I've changed my bid to reflect six pages. i can't do any lower, but I'll write you a complete paper, not just your draft. So I'll make revisions in the future too if needed. Thanks, and good luck
Homework_Nerd | Jan 22, 2012, 19:24 PM

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The paper should be organized around your thesis (argument), which is the main point of the entire essay. When developing a thesis for a comparative paper, consider how a comparison of the works provides deeper insight into the topic of your paper (i.e., think about why you have chosen to look at these particular works in relation to one another). In your analysis, consider the relationships among the following elements: Content Form (e.g., short story vs. poem) Style Assignment Requirements Topic: Must address one of the topics in the guidelines Length: Your draft should be eight to ten double-spaced pages in length (excluding title and reference page) Sources: Utilize at least six scholarly sources to support your thesis (including the course text and at least two sources from the Ashford Online Library). APA: Your draft must be formatted to APA (6th edition) style. Separate Title Page: Must include an original title Separate Reference Page Proper Citations: All sources must be properly cited, both within the text and in a separate reference page. Elements of Academic Writing: All academic papers should include these elements. Introduction with a thesis statement Supporting paragraphs Conclusion this is the assignment?
User_1830 | Jan 22, 2012, 19:25 PM

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which i can do the title pages if your still interested
User_1830 | Jan 22, 2012, 19:27 PM

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sorry i have never done this im lost a little bit.
User_1830 | Jan 22, 2012, 19:28 PM

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No problem. I'll do the lot. This is all basic apa standard. Ill include everything
Homework_Nerd | Jan 22, 2012, 19:30 PM

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by tomorrow? wow how do I pay you?
User_1830 | Jan 22, 2012, 19:32 PM

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It's alright. I've done a lot of this as you can tell from my feedback. I'll make sure you'll get a good paper
Homework_Nerd | Jan 22, 2012, 19:32 PM

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how do I get you the money? im trying to find where to read it at
User_1830 | Jan 22, 2012, 19:37 PM

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i got it figured out. Oh my goodness your a life savor thank you and GOD bless.
User_1830 | Jan 22, 2012, 19:42 PM

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Got it thanks! Can you tell me when it's due exactly? Time and timezone
Homework_Nerd | Jan 22, 2012, 19:44 PM

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its 943 pm here now im on central time its due by 10 pm the 23rd so I can get it posted in class.
User_1830 | Jan 22, 2012, 19:46 PM

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i know 24 hours is such a short notice but i know i cant get it done. I have a 3.6 GPA will all A's and 1 b im failing this class Its English literature 125
User_1830 | Jan 22, 2012, 19:48 PM

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Here you go, let me know what you think and any changes you need. Thanks! Its uploaded!
Homework_Nerd | Jan 23, 2012, 09:23 AM

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I think its great i have a quick question for my final paper i need 8 pages where can i add it to so i dont mess the paper up?
User_1830 | Jan 23, 2012, 12:24 PM

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you did an awesome job. Its truly a really great paper more then i expected. I just dont know where to start to add the other two pages, i dont wont to mess it up I wish I could leave it at that its so good.
User_1830 | Jan 23, 2012, 12:42 PM

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Hey there, sorry I responded so late, I was resting after getting the paper out :/ I hope you were able to make the changes you needed
Homework_Nerd | Jan 23, 2012, 20:07 PM

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its ok sorry for bothering you i know it was rough.. I didnt get it yet. The rough draft was due last night which was 6 pages. You did all that and a dam good job at that. I have till Feb 3rd.th to make it 8 pages. Which is only a 1 1/2 left. I just didnt know where to throw something in there at? I dont want to add a bunch of crap to it and mess up what you done. I may post one more assignment due Monday.
User_1830 | Jan 24, 2012, 07:42 AM

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Hey babygirl. Yeah no problem, did the instructor grade it? Is there any feedback?
Homework_Nerd | Jan 24, 2012, 08:47 AM

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not yet I will know my Monday and I will let you know the grade.
User_1830 | Jan 24, 2012, 12:28 PM

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I uploaded the markups on this. I know it was short notice but paying 90 dollars I still have a failing grade. This paper counts as 25% of my grade. Earned: 6.88 % Possible: 10 % Amanda, while you have a start on the final paper, there is still work to be done. Plus one more page of text. 8 pages total. Please apply the literary terminology and concepts learned this semester directly to the works you are discussing, rather than talking about them in vague generalities. More time should be spent on developing strong thesis and topic sentences for each body paragraph and then supporting them with concrete examples from the text and secondary sources, as well as from your own voice before submitting the final draft. I highly recommend study of the 2 attachments under `Resources for Weeks 3 & 5 Assignments` in the `Ask your TA` Discussion Board on 1/18/2012. These resources will give you a clear idea of how to utilize and integrate sources to their fullest effect and give you a demonstration of the type and level of analysis required for the assignment.
User_1830 | Jan 26, 2012, 20:30 PM

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Assignments 40% Final Paper 25% 67 is my grade
User_1830 | Jan 26, 2012, 20:46 PM

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we had 8 people to go to the dean last night because everyone is failing this class. The teacher is hard core as you can tell by the markups on the paper. With this final paper and the two discussion I posted if someone helps on those, hopefully i can come up to a B average.
User_1830 | Jan 27, 2012, 08:16 AM

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Hey there. I'm surprised the grade was so low, but I figure that lacking 2 pages is probably a big hit on the grade. What do you propose we do now? It's pretty harsh of her to grade so badly on what supposed to be a "draft."
Homework_Nerd | Jan 28, 2012, 01:53 AM

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i know the draft was 6 pages which it was. You seen her markups They have to be fixed and I have to add a page of text to it. I told you everyone is failing cause of her. I thought the paper was good. Can you fix the markups she is talking about? My understanding a draft is supposed to be like that and you take their remarks and fix it. But they are being to hard on everyone and failing everyone. A rough draft is not to be perfect but to them i guess it is suposed to be. Its bs if you ask me. Can you please help me finish it. I promise I will work with you more if you want me to in the future. Im sorry I was new at this . I got one more week of this class then its finally over.
User_1830 | Jan 29, 2012, 15:59 PM

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i dont want you to think im being an ass cause i swear im not i think it was great. I hope you will help me fix what she is saying. Cause you did the paper for me and I have no clue what to do.
User_1830 | Jan 29, 2012, 16:12 PM

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Hey babygirl, sure i'll fix the issues stated. I just needed to know what you wanted done
Homework_Nerd | Jan 29, 2012, 18:49 PM

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whatever you can do to it. If you see her markups she tells what needs to be done. like I said I wouldnt know where to even try to start cause you did the paper. I appreaciate all your work and all your help. If they wouldnt be an ass about it it would be ok. Cause to me it was a great paper. Anything you can do will help soooo much. I trust you on it.
User_1830 | Jan 30, 2012, 06:51 AM

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Hey i've uploaded the revisions. Please check it out on the highlights, let me know what you think thank you
Homework_Nerd | Jan 31, 2012, 12:09 PM

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thank you very much. Like I told you before I think its a great paper. They just being asses. No one has a average above a D in this class regardless of what we do. Thats fine cause we have to leave feedback for them and I promise mine wont be to good. You did a great job regardless of what they think. Im happy with your work. :)
User_1830 | Jan 02, 2012, 07:15 AM

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