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I wore an essay, but I need someone to fix it. I need someone to organize each paragraph around one main idea/ rhetorical aspect ( ethos, pathos, logos). I will post the essay and the link. http://tribune.com.pk/story/946594/why-25-million-children-are-out-of-school-in-pakistan/ 1- Less summary, more analysis. 2- Organize each paragraph around one main idea/ rhetorical aspect ( ethos, pathos, logos) 3- Include specific support (reference to the article) in each paragraph. 4- Sample vocabulary 5- Due Date: Tomorrow afternoon

Date Posted: 10/11/2015
Category: General
Due Date: 11/11/2015
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I wore an essay, but I need someone to fix it. I need someone to organize each paragraph around one main idea/ rhetorical aspect ( ethos, pathos, logos). I will post the essay and the link. http://tribune.com.pk/story/946594/why-25-million-children-are-out-of-school-in-pakistan/ 1- Less summary, more analysis. 2- Organize each paragraph around one main idea/ rhetorical aspect ( ethos, pathos, logos) 3- Include specific support (reference to the article) in each paragraph. 4- Sample vocabulary 5- Due Date: Tomorrow afternoon
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    User_5694 | Oct 11, 2015, 03:39 AM
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  • Hello, are you native English
    User_8124 | Oct 11, 2015, 03:44 AM
  • Yes i am friend
    User_5293 | Oct 11, 2015, 03:46 AM
  • yes friend
    User_5293 | Oct 11, 2015, 03:47 AM
  • Okay I will assign the homework for you. I just need you to fix the essay. Less summary, more analysis and show me ethos, pathos, logos. Follow the steps. Thank you
    User_8124 | Oct 11, 2015, 03:54 AM
  • okay assign me friend so that i may start working on it right away.
    User_5293 | Oct 11, 2015, 04:07 AM
  • Hi
    User_8124 | Oct 11, 2015, 18:00 PM
  • Did you finish?
    User_8124 | Oct 11, 2015, 21:25 PM
  • hi
    User_5293 | Oct 11, 2015, 21:28 PM
  • i am about to finish friend.
    User_5293 | Oct 11, 2015, 21:29 PM
  • Okay Do not forget to show me pathos, ehos , logos.
    User_8124 | Oct 11, 2015, 21:30 PM
  • Okay friend i will do it.
    User_5293 | Oct 11, 2015, 22:05 PM
  • Check the attachment friend,i have place some paragraphs in order,corrected grammatical errors and gave one reference
    User_5293 | Nov 11, 2015, 10:53 AM
  • Let me know if i never did some part
    User_5293 | Nov 11, 2015, 10:54 AM
  • Hello, You did not change ethos, pathos and logos. I think you still summarising the article like what I did. As you know this is Rhetorical Analysis. Ethos: How does he use them to argue his point? For example, did he use Pakstan government statistic or did he analyze from his own experience? Logos: How is the essay organized? Does it make sens? are there alternate explanation not addressed? Unanswered questions? Any thing left out? Is there disagreement and do they mention? Is it convincing? Pathos: Does it make an emotion? Does it work if so, in what way? For example angry or sad. Thank you
    User_8124 | Nov 11, 2015, 16:42 PM
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    User_8124 | Nov 11, 2015, 17:01 PM
  • i will friend.
    User_5293 | Nov 11, 2015, 17:03 PM
  • Now check the attachment friend,i made addition to what you had already done
    User_5293 | Dec 11, 2015, 05:25 AM
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    User_5293 | Dec 11, 2015, 05:28 AM
  • Thanks it looks much better, but you still summarising the article in some points and you did not note the author sources of information in ethos. Did you follow my points ?
    User_8124 | Dec 11, 2015, 05:55 AM
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    User_8124 | Dec 11, 2015, 05:56 AM
  • Yes i followed friend,i will fix the source of information in Ethos
    User_5293 | Dec 11, 2015, 06:22 AM
  • You need summary of the article as well?
    User_5293 | Dec 11, 2015, 06:23 AM
  • yes please add source and summary. After you upload the essay , I will release the money. I will assign you my other Homeworks soon.
    User_8124 | Dec 11, 2015, 06:28 AM
  • Okay,don't worry now fixing that.
    User_5293 | Dec 11, 2015, 06:29 AM
  • Now,check it friend
    User_5293 | Dec 11, 2015, 07:49 AM
  • Incase of further corrections,or addition.Kindly let me know
    User_5293 | Dec 11, 2015, 07:50 AM
  • Thank you
    User_8124 | Dec 11, 2015, 07:56 AM
  • Always welcome friend
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