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easy work guys. I have an easy essay with thesis, but, my thesis is not match with my essay. also, I have a comment from my professor about my conclusion. What i need is that 1) make all my grammar in the present perfect 2) my thesis include 3 points and I want to make my thesis into 3 bodys match with my 3 body's. In addition, the thesis should have an argument. 3) in each body, it should have These steps in the order a- my point b- more information about the point c- example with the page number after the information.( I already chose examples with number page) d- your argument after the example. 4) for conclusion , i attached what you have to write in the conclusion. i need the work after 6 hours. it is final Exam. note, if you can not do these correctly , do not give me a hand because if you did not do these steps i am going to complaint in the management of the site. the reasons why I said that because i tried to give this work for more then 4 people and nobody do it correctly , they all just want the money Thank you so much I uploaded my thesis and what my professor wants to write in the conclusion on PDF filed My thesis (( As a result, there are dire dangers of totalitarian control people. Furthermore, it is dehumanizing effects thoroughly demonstrated through three steps; the monitoring of the government, limitation of their pleasures and domination over the emotions of the people)

Date Posted: 14/11/2015
Category: English
Due Date: 15/11/2015
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easy work guys. I have an easy essay with thesis, but, my thesis is not match with my essay. also, I have a comment from my professor about my conclusion. What i need is that 1) make all my grammar in the present perfect 2) my thesis include 3 points and I want to make my thesis into 3 bodys match with my 3 body's. In addition, the thesis should have an argument. 3) in each body, it should have These steps in the order a- my point b- more information about the point c- example with the page number after the information.( I already chose examples with number page) d- your argument after the example. 4) for conclusion , i attached what you have to write in the conclusion. i need the work after 6 hours. it is final Exam. note, if you can not do these correctly , do not give me a hand because if you did not do these steps i am going to complaint in the management of the site. the reasons why I said that because i tried to give this work for more then 4 people and nobody do it correctly , they all just want the money Thank you so much I uploaded my thesis and what my professor wants to write in the conclusion on PDF filed My thesis (( As a result, there are dire dangers of totalitarian control people. Furthermore, it is dehumanizing effects thoroughly demonstrated through three steps; the monitoring of the government, limitation of their pleasures and domination over the emotions of the people)
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ExcellentTutor 10 years, 10 months ago
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  • too much
    User_8116 | Nov 14, 2015, 20:11 PM
  • how much are planning to pay for this?
    ExcellentTutor | Nov 14, 2015, 20:18 PM
  • to be honest, all what i have $20 , you know i'm student
    User_8116 | Nov 14, 2015, 20:28 PM
  • i already write my essay, but i want you to do the few things that i wrote above. the all thing that you have to do is these 1) make all my grammar in the present perfect 2) my thesis include 3 points and I want to make my thesis into 3 bodys match with my 3 body's. In addition, the thesis should have an argument. 3) in each body, it should have These steps in the order a- my point b- more information about the point c- example with the page number after the information.( I already chose examples with number page) d- your argument after the example. 4) for conclusion , i attached what you have to write in the conclusion. i need the work after 6 hours. it is final Exam. note, if you can not do these correctly , do not give me a hand because if you did not do these steps i am going to complaint in the management of the site. the reasons why I said that because i tried to give this work for more then 4 people and nobody do it correctly , they all just want the money Thank you so much I uploaded my thesis and what my professor wants to write in the conclusion on PDF filed My thesis (( As a result, there are dire dangers of totalitarian control people. Furthermore, it is dehumanizing effects thoroughly demonstrated through three steps; the monitoring of the government, limitation of their pleasures and domination over the emotions of the people)
    User_8116 | Nov 14, 2015, 20:29 PM
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phoniextutor 10 years, 10 months ago
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  • no no, i think i will take a pass on this assignment. kindly dont assign me please
    phoniextutor | Nov 14, 2015, 19:27 PM
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Srkik 10 years, 10 months ago
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i can do for you this work perfectly as this is the area of my specialization
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  • too much
    User_8116 | Nov 14, 2015, 20:10 PM
  • please just consider this price because of the nature of work and the quality work i want to offer
    User_3973 | Nov 14, 2015, 20:36 PM
  • can you do it perfectly. i need to have it after 6 hours. what do you think.
    User_8116 | Nov 14, 2015, 20:46 PM
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  • too much
    User_8116 | Nov 14, 2015, 20:10 PM
  • How many pages?
    User_3188 | Nov 14, 2015, 20:11 PM
  • i already write my essay, but i want you to do the few things that i wrote above
    User_8116 | Nov 14, 2015, 20:13 PM
  • the all thing that you have to do is these 1) make all my grammar in the present perfect 2) my thesis include 3 points and I want to make my thesis into 3 bodys match with my 3 body's. In addition, the thesis should have an argument. 3) in each body, it should have These steps in the order a- my point b- more information about the point c- example with the page number after the information.( I already chose examples with number page) d- your argument after the example. 4) for conclusion , i attached what you have to write in the conclusion. i need the work after 6 hours. it is final Exam. note, if you can not do these correctly , do not give me a hand because if you did not do these steps i am going to complaint in the management of the site. the reasons why I said that because i tried to give this work for more then 4 people and nobody do it correctly , they all just want the money Thank you so much I uploaded my thesis and what my professor wants to write in the conclusion on PDF filed My thesis (( As a result, there are dire dangers of totalitarian control people. Furthermore, it is dehumanizing effects thoroughly demonstrated through three steps; the monitoring of the government, limitation of their pleasures and domination over the emotions of the people)
    User_8116 | Nov 14, 2015, 20:16 PM
  • oky 30$ final
    User_3188 | Nov 14, 2015, 20:22 PM
  • thank you for you kind, but you know i'm student
    User_8116 | Nov 14, 2015, 20:27 PM
  • all what i have $20
    User_8116 | Nov 14, 2015, 20:27 PM
  • I have changed to 30$.. there are many mistakes. accept the bid and assign it
    User_3188 | Nov 14, 2015, 20:31 PM
  • thank you. ok you got it. but please you have to follow the 4 steps correctly. and the grammar should be in present perfect .
    User_8116 | Nov 14, 2015, 20:38 PM
  • i need to have it, after 6 hours.
    User_8116 | Nov 14, 2015, 20:39 PM
  • ok
    User_3188 | Nov 14, 2015, 20:39 PM
  • 15 hours man!!
    User_3188 | Nov 14, 2015, 20:42 PM
  • no,
    User_8116 | Nov 14, 2015, 20:42 PM
  • i said above 6 hours even in the assignment not 15 hours!!
    User_8116 | Nov 14, 2015, 20:43 PM
  • what do you thing??
    User_8116 | Nov 14, 2015, 20:45 PM
  • above 6 hours!!! that means I should send it before the end of date 15th tommow
    User_3188 | Nov 14, 2015, 20:47 PM
  • no, i told you before i assing to you
    User_8116 | Nov 14, 2015, 20:47 PM
  • if you can't . let me know in order to cencel it
    User_8116 | Nov 14, 2015, 20:49 PM
  • You need it before 6 hours?
    User_3188 | Nov 14, 2015, 20:54 PM
  • no, i need it after 6 hours. right now the time in our state is 12:55 pm i need it at 7:00 pm in this night ? can you do it .
    User_8116 | Nov 14, 2015, 20:56 PM
  • because there is another one who can do it .
    User_8116 | Nov 14, 2015, 20:57 PM
  • You mean when 6 hours are over.. i submit the work?
    User_3188 | Nov 14, 2015, 20:57 PM
  • i'm mean right now the time in our state is 12:55 pm i need it at 7:00 pm in this night ? after 6 hours from now i need the work submit.
    User_8116 | Nov 14, 2015, 21:00 PM
  • ok.. I will correct it then
    User_3188 | Nov 14, 2015, 21:04 PM
  • Thank you for your Patience
    User_8116 | Nov 14, 2015, 21:14 PM
  • cool
    User_3188 | Nov 14, 2015, 21:18 PM
  • hey... RELEASE PAYMENT
    User_3188 | Nov 15, 2015, 21:12 PM
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