This is the homework to revise my essay. I need to revise and edit my essay based on feedbacks given by my professor. The purpose of this essay is to emphasize and insist that GMO products should be labeled. My professor called that the name of this writing assignment is critical thinking assignment, and based on e-mail format I need to write some on-going arguments in the world, given that I'm the new intern who needs to convince director of recruiting by showing that I'm a critical thinker. My Professor's feedback was 1. Need to explore and developing labeling issue more. 2. Must state clearly that evidence is inconclusive -through major organizations like who insist GMO is safe. 3. Need strong bottom line topic stating introduction and hook. 4. Need to fix some grammar issues and awkward sentences. 5. And I highlighted other miscellaneous feedbacks on the attached document. You can add any other resources to this paper as long as it is not being plagiarized. If you add any new paragraph, please provide me the origin of resource and citation. You can also get rid of any of my part if you feel that is unnecessary. Please edit thoroughly based on my professor's feedback. +If the paper turns out really good, then bonus money is guaranteed.

This is the homework to revise my essay. I need to revise and edit my essay based on feedbacks given by my professor. The purpose of this essay is to emphasize and insist that GMO products should be labeled. My professor called that the name of this writing assignment is critical thinking assignment, and based on e-mail format I need to write some on-going arguments in the world, given that I'm the new intern who needs to convince director of recruiting by showing that I'm a critical thinker. My Professor's feedback was 1. Need to explore and developing labeling issue more. 2. Must state clearly that evidence is inconclusive -through major organizations like who insist GMO is safe. 3. Need strong bottom line topic stating introduction and hook. 4. Need to fix some grammar issues and awkward sentences. 5. And I highlighted other miscellaneous feedbacks on the attached document. You can add any other resources to this paper as long as it is not being plagiarized. If you add any new paragraph, please provide me the origin of resource and citation. You can also get rid of any of my part if you feel that is unnecessary. Please edit thoroughly based on my professor's feedback. +If the paper turns out really good, then bonus money is guaranteed.