hi, the attachment is a complete paper, but it has some notes and comments from my professor, so i want someone to fix that and the important thing is the ( in text citation) and the reference page. i want it in 2 hours from now

Date Posted: 06/12/2015

Category: English
Due Date: 07/12/2015

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Excellencetutor 11 years, 3 months ago
Rated 8.68 earned 3178.00 around 86 assignments.

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User_6563 | Jun 12, 2015, 20:57 PM
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User_6563 | Jun 12, 2015, 20:57 PM
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User_6563 | Jun 12, 2015, 20:58 PM
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User_6563 | Jun 12, 2015, 20:58 PM
thats mean you did not read my instruction!! I did not ask for writing !!
User_6889 | Jun 12, 2015, 20:59 PM
this is a revision
User_6563 | Jun 12, 2015, 21:01 PM
and i have seen the instructions and the ares that need to be changed
User_6563 | Jun 12, 2015, 21:01 PM
yeah it just fixing some citation problems
User_6889 | Jun 12, 2015, 21:02 PM
okey how long it will take to be done ?
User_6889 | Jun 12, 2015, 21:02 PM
sure i have seen all that
User_6563 | Jun 12, 2015, 21:02 PM
i can fix that immediately
User_6563 | Jun 12, 2015, 21:03 PM
only a few minutes
User_6563 | Jun 12, 2015, 21:04 PM
how long ? how many hours ?
User_6889 | Jun 12, 2015, 21:04 PM
okey deal
User_6889 | Jun 12, 2015, 21:04 PM
an hour or so
User_6563 | Jun 12, 2015, 21:05 PM
the work is not that much
User_6563 | Jun 12, 2015, 21:06 PM
you said few minutes
User_6889 | Jun 12, 2015, 21:06 PM
yes a few minutes
User_6563 | Jun 12, 2015, 21:10 PM
working on it immediately, i have already started
User_6563 | Jun 12, 2015, 21:11 PM
Hello, i have submitted the work. Kindly go through it and in case of any issue please feel free to contact me. if the paper is good kindly remember to release payments
User_6563 | Jun 12, 2015, 23:14 PM
i request you give me a good review, i will be much humbled thank you in advance
User_6563 | Jun 12, 2015, 23:15 PM
hi, the reference page looks good. but the in text citation it dose not look good. please, use APA style
User_6889 | Jul 12, 2015, 00:47 AM
hello, kindly check the work i have just sent you. its complete now. thank you in advance
User_6563 | Jul 12, 2015, 01:21 AM
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User_6563 | Jul 12, 2015, 01:26 AM
bro that is not APA style in text citation.
User_6889 | Jul 12, 2015, 01:32 AM
hey it is APA style in text citation
User_6563 | Jul 12, 2015, 01:34 AM
i cannot do what is not right my friend..
User_6563 | Jul 12, 2015, 01:34 AM
no it's not true, the APA style never be like ( in 2009 by ..... and .....) !! APA is like this ( ..... and ....., 2001) or .... and ... (2000)
User_6889 | Jul 12, 2015, 01:36 AM
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User_6563 | Jul 12, 2015, 01:38 AM
it is what every professor use for citations and reference and also teach students
User_6563 | Jul 12, 2015, 01:38 AM
i am a professor and i cannot fail you
User_6563 | Jul 12, 2015, 01:39 AM
not true
User_6889 | Jul 12, 2015, 01:41 AM
well how do you want me to do whatever you say i will do
User_6563 | Jul 12, 2015, 01:46 AM
kindly tell me how to put it, i will do everything you want
User_6563 | Jul 12, 2015, 01:47 AM
but that is the correct method
User_6563 | Jul 12, 2015, 01:47 AM
apa be like (author's name & author's name, 2001) not like what you did
User_6889 | Jul 12, 2015, 01:48 AM
apa be like (author's name & author's name, 2001) not like what you did
User_6889 | Jul 12, 2015, 01:48 AM
no dont do anything i will do it my self and i will release the mony
User_6889 | Jul 12, 2015, 01:48 AM
have you seen the file written corrected?
User_6563 | Jul 12, 2015, 01:50 AM
have you seen the file written corrected?
User_6563 | Jul 12, 2015, 01:51 AM
dont get angry please i beg, from the first reference its one author so i put (Andrade, 2006)
User_6563 | Jul 12, 2015, 01:52 AM
kindly check
User_6563 | Jul 12, 2015, 01:53 AM
the second its (Galloway, and Jenkins, 2009)
User_6563 | Jul 12, 2015, 01:55 AM
the third is (McLachlan and Justice, 2009)
User_6563 | Jul 12, 2015, 01:56 AM
i have done all that my friend
User_6563 | Jul 12, 2015, 01:57 AM
and the third i have put (Zhou, Jindal-Snape,Topping and Todman, 2008)
User_6563 | Jul 12, 2015, 01:59 AM
when you start a sentence with an authors name the only thing that you put in bracket is the year
User_6563 | Jul 12, 2015, 02:01 AM
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User_6563 | Jul 12, 2015, 02:03 AM
i promised quality work and and i can not fail you my friend
User_6563 | Jul 12, 2015, 02:04 AM
are you here my friend?
User_6563 | Jul 12, 2015, 02:06 AM

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Elmessi 11 years, 3 months ago
Rated 10.0 earned 810.00 around 15 assignments.

Hello. Kindly allow me to take the assignment and I promise to deliver according to the given instructions. I guarantee a well presented A graded paper, plagiarism free and of timely delivery. Thanks in advance for your faith in me.

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