Instruction
Need someone to review the paragraph and edit it using persuasive words. I'm sending this to someone who'll decide whether I get the forte or the Rio and my personal preference is the KIA forte. You can read from your own resources and compare between them without inflating and exaggerating the KIA forte same time I need it to be persuasive.
Check the paragraph below
I went to several dealerships and tried several cars and found that the KIA is the most suitable cars. I tried the KIA Rio the one that I've mentioned in the table before and I tried also the KIA forte to, they are different models with different price of $880.The forte is bigger and wider and it's much smoother when it comes to driving.
Rio LX WITH POWER PACKAGE tax and DMV $16,800.
Forte LX tax and DMV $17,680