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Revise, add sentences, and fix the mistakes.

Date Posted: 20/04/2016
Category: English
Due Date: 21/04/2016
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Revise, add sentences, and fix the mistakes.
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corose 10 years, 5 months ago
Rated 8.67 earned 1930.00 around 82 assignments.
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$15.00
  • Hello, I am asking for $7 because I have already written my essay, so it just revise, add sentences, and fix the mistakes. That is all.
    User_8946 | Apr 20, 2016, 08:00 AM
  • make it $10 i will work on it now
    User_5558 | Apr 20, 2016, 08:24 AM
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  • Hello, I am asking for $7 because I have already written my essay, so it just revise, add sentences, and fix the mistakes. That is all.
    User_8946 | Apr 20, 2016, 07:20 AM
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Augustine24 10 years, 5 months ago
Rated 9.28 earned 42861.36 around 1428 assignments.
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  • Hello, I am asking for $7 because I have already written my essay, so it just revise, add sentences, and fix the mistakes. That is all.
    User_8946 | Apr 20, 2016, 08:00 AM
  • Okay.... Just assign it then. I agree your price
    Augustine24 | Apr 20, 2016, 08:13 AM
  • Okay.... Just assign it then. I agree your price
    Augustine24 | Apr 20, 2016, 08:13 AM
  • Sorry my offer is $7.
    User_8946 | Apr 20, 2016, 08:18 AM
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    Augustine24 | Apr 20, 2016, 08:20 AM
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    Augustine24 | Apr 20, 2016, 08:20 AM
  • Accept my bid so that I can work on it immediately before I leave my study room
    Augustine24 | Apr 20, 2016, 08:21 AM
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    Augustine24 | Apr 20, 2016, 08:21 AM
  • I just need to get a great paper. I have written (Introduction, One body paragraph, and Conclusion), so I don't need to add new paragraph. I just need to revise the same paper, try your best to add sentences, and fix the mistakes. Thank you very much.
    User_8946 | Apr 20, 2016, 08:31 AM
  • Okay
    Augustine24 | Apr 20, 2016, 08:33 AM
  • Okay
    Augustine24 | Apr 20, 2016, 08:33 AM
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brainiac 10 years, 5 months ago
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  • Hello, I am asking for $7 because I have already written my essay, so it just revise, add sentences, and fix the mistakes. That is all.
    User_8946 | Apr 20, 2016, 07:20 AM
  • Hello, I am asking for $7 because I have already written my essay, so it just revise, add sentences, and fix the mistakes. That is all.
    User_8946 | Apr 20, 2016, 07:20 AM
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keenwriter 10 years, 5 months ago
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    User_8946 | Apr 20, 2016, 07:18 AM
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Academicresearchpro 10 years, 5 months ago
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  • Hello, I am asking for $7 because I have already written my essay, so it just revise, add sentences, and fix the mistakes. That is all.
    User_8946 | Apr 20, 2016, 08:00 AM
  • How many words do you want it to be?
    Academicresearchpro | Apr 20, 2016, 08:18 AM
  • How many words do you want it to be?
    Academicresearchpro | Apr 20, 2016, 08:18 AM
  • It is up to you. I just need to get a great paper. I have written (Introduction, One body paragraph, and Conclusion), so I don't need to add new paragraph. I just need to revise the same paper, try your best to add sentences, and fix the mistakes.
    User_8946 | Apr 20, 2016, 08:22 AM
  • okay, make it $8 then, and lat us seal the deal, pleas
    Academicresearchpro | Apr 20, 2016, 08:24 AM
  • I have revised my bid to fit your budget, kindly assign me this job.
    Academicresearchpro | Apr 20, 2016, 08:27 AM
  • Sorry my friend. My offer is $7.
    User_8946 | Apr 20, 2016, 08:30 AM
  • okay, I have made it to $7
    Academicresearchpro | Apr 20, 2016, 08:32 AM
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smasakari 10 years, 5 months ago
Rated 9.17 earned 25004.00 around 1007 assignments.
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$7.00
  • Hello, I am asking for $7 because I have already written my essay, so it just revise, add sentences, and fix the mistakes. That is all.
    User_8946 | Apr 20, 2016, 08:00 AM
  • okay..how many pages if add information?
    User_5293 | Apr 20, 2016, 08:12 AM
  • I don't need pages. Only sentences.
    User_8946 | Apr 20, 2016, 08:17 AM
  • i mean..okay..and the length should remain constant?
    User_5293 | Apr 20, 2016, 08:18 AM
  • It is up to you. I just need to get a great paper. I have written (Introduction, One body paragraph, and Conclusion), so I don't need to add new paragraph. I just need to revise the same paper, try your best to add sentences, and fix the mistakes.
    User_8946 | Apr 20, 2016, 08:23 AM
  • okay friend..i will surely do that..please assign me so that i can start working.
    User_5293 | Apr 20, 2016, 08:24 AM
  • My offer is $7.
    User_8946 | Apr 20, 2016, 08:25 AM
  • I have others offer with $7, so if you need it. Revise your bit with $7 please. Thank you
    User_8946 | Apr 20, 2016, 08:28 AM
  • i usually deliver quality work..The best that you would love..i do not mean to hurt you with my price..But i want you to have nice,quality and excellent work for 3$ more..just 3$
    User_5293 | Apr 20, 2016, 08:29 AM
  • okay i will do it at $7 friend
    User_5293 | Apr 20, 2016, 08:34 AM
  • Okay. Thank you very much.
    User_8946 | Apr 20, 2016, 08:37 AM
  • you are welcome
    User_5293 | Apr 20, 2016, 08:38 AM
  • please check the attachment friend,i have fixed the mistakes and added some few words.i will appreciate if you Release the payment.Thanks
    User_5293 | Apr 20, 2016, 13:58 PM
  • Oh GOD. You didn't even try to download the files that I attached. You didn't try to read and follow the teacher's instruction. I accepted to get a great job. Anyway, please again, open the files, fix all the mistakes that the teacher write about. And please add sentences (SENTENCES).
    User_8946 | Apr 20, 2016, 19:29 PM
  • The first paragraph, the teacher said, "You have 3 ideas in your thesis, yet you can only develop 1 (rest). This tells us that due to time, we need to have only one idea that we develop next time".
    User_8946 | Apr 20, 2016, 19:32 PM
  • The second paragraph, the teacher said, "This doesn't mention anger at all". So, you should change all the paragraph in order to fix the mistake.
    User_8946 | Apr 20, 2016, 19:33 PM
  • The last paragraph, the teacher said, "You really need to have a narrow thesis and then focus, develop it, not something else. So, you should fix the conclusion again.
    User_8946 | Apr 20, 2016, 19:35 PM
  • okay i will
    User_5293 | Apr 20, 2016, 19:36 PM
  • Please see the file that I attached and follow most of the instruction.
    User_8946 | Apr 20, 2016, 19:37 PM
  • ok
    User_5293 | Apr 20, 2016, 19:38 PM
  • Thank you so much ...
    User_8946 | Apr 20, 2016, 19:38 PM
  • please check the work bro,i will also appreciate if you Release payment.Thanks
    User_5293 | Apr 21, 2016, 07:40 AM
  • Amazing, thank you for your help.
    User_8946 | Apr 21, 2016, 07:46 AM
  • Welcome friend
    User_5293 | Apr 21, 2016, 07:47 AM
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