QUICK FIX on Research Paper Hello! I submitted a research paper and received the score of 16/25. I'm looking for someone who can edit this paper by reading the comment below and adding corrections to improve the score. You have decent start here, but need to work on adding some evidence and clarity. First, it's not clear what the problem is, which then makes it difficult to figure out how you are substantiating the problem. You provide some good information about what play is, and how it contrasts with academically based programs, but that information by itself doesn't contribute to an argument about the importance of your study. You need to provide a rationale for why the problem is meaningful (i.e., why there is a need for research).

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contentwriter | Apr 25, 2016, 01:00 AM

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User_8331 | Apr 25, 2016, 01:23 AM

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Proposal: Introduction (Part 1) Proposal: Introduction (Part 1) Criteria Ratings Pts Clearly identifies problem Full Marks 5 pts The problem is identified, but is somewhat vague 4 pts The problem is not clearly identified, but instead is written as a topic or purpose 3 pts No Marks 0 pts 4 / 5 pts Provides evidence with citations that substantiate problem's existence Full Marks 5 pts Evidence is good, but no citations are provided 4 pts Evidence mostly substantiates problem's existence, but is lacking in depth or clarity 4 pts Evidence does not substantiate the problem; the evidence appears to relate to a different problem 3 pts No Marks 0 pts 4 / 5 pts Present rationale for conducting study Full Marks 5 pts Rationale is lacking in depth or clarity 4 pts Rationale is not related to the problem 3 pts No Marks 0 pts 4 / 5 pts Purpose statement describes how problem will be addressed Full Marks 3 pts Purpose statement is only somewhat aligned to the problem 2 pts Purpose statement is not aligned to the problem, or does not describe the purpose of the study 1 pts No Marks 0 pts 3 / 3 pts APA margins and headings Full Marks 1 pts No Marks 0 pts 1 / 1 pts APA citations Full Marks 1 pts No Marks 0 pts 0 / 1 pts Grammar and structure No more than one grammatical mistake is made, structure is logical and supports the argument 3 pts More than one grammatical mistake is made 2 pts Structure could be improved to better support the argument 2 pts More than one grammatical mistake is made, AND structure could be improved to better support the argument 1 pts No Marks 0 pts 3 / 3 pts References Full Marks 2 pts No Marks 0 pts 0 / 2 pts Total Points: 19 Kayla, you have decent start here, but need to work on adding some evidence and clarity. First, it's not clear what the problem is, which then makes it difficult to figure out how you are substantiating the problem. You provide some good information about what play is, and how it contrasts with academically based programs, but that information by itself doesn't contribute to an argument about the importance of your study. You need to provide a rationale for why the problem is meaningful (i.e., why there is a need for research). Jake B , Mar 31 at 9:35pm Add a Comment: Teachers and submitter will be notified of all comments. Media CommentAttach File Save By Instructure User Research Help Privacy policy Terms of service Facebook Twitter
User_8331 | Apr 25, 2016, 01:24 AM

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contentwriter | Apr 25, 2016, 01:25 AM

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I apologize I tried to copy and paste the rubric but it came out very confusing ^ Here's what I need to work on Clearly identifying the problem Providing evidence with citations that show problems existence Present rationale for conducting study APA citations and references
User_8331 | Apr 25, 2016, 01:28 AM

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contentwriter | Apr 25, 2016, 18:02 PM

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contentwriter | Apr 26, 2016, 01:59 AM

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Thank you! Will do!
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User_8331 | Apr 27, 2016, 01:23 AM

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contentwriter | Apr 27, 2016, 03:32 AM

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