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i want someone to edit my paper

Date Posted: 02/05/2016
Category: English
Due Date: 03/05/2016
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truewriter 10 years, 7 months ago
Rated 9.26 earned 20430.87 around 562 assignments.
i will do it for you
$30.00
  • okay but i will somethings i want you to do
    User_9339 | Feb 05, 2016, 18:17 PM
  • i have some issues with my paper and i hope you can change it. this what the teacher told me. and chick if something need to change You are not supposed to be summarizing articles. You need a better frame. and there are NO citation, you've been writing without putting any sources? Evidence? You need materials. MTBI, who are these people? and Evidence? Citation? You can't make such claims without quoting and citing a source. "The government and leaders must come up with strategies that promote innovation to make a difference in both the society and institutions", where did this idea come from? I think you need more materials. And you must cite sources. You can not just summarize. (Landrigan, Christopher P. et al. "Temporal Trends In Rates Of Patient Harm Resulting From Medical Care". New England Journal of Medicine 363.22 (2010): 2124-2134. Web. 15 Mar. 2016.) And what does this source have to do with CTE? I don't see you using this source? (Laskas, Jeanne. "UPDATE: Game Brain". GQ. N.p., 2009. Web. 15 Mar. 2016.) there is a publisher.
    User_9339 | Feb 05, 2016, 18:21 PM
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brainiac 10 years, 7 months ago
Rated 9.77 earned 3817.00 around 149 assignments.
What exactly do you want edited? If you could furnish me with the instructions I would be happy to help.
$40.00
  • it is a research paper. i have some issues with my paper and i hope you can change it. this what the teacher told me. and chick if something need to change, because i want to get A in this. You are not supposed to be summarizing articles. You need a better frame. and there are NO citation, you've been writing without putting any sources? Evidence? You need materials. MTBI, who are these people? and Evidence? Citation? You can't make such claims without quoting and citing a source. "The government and leaders must come up with strategies that promote innovation to make a difference in both the society and institutions", where did this idea come from? I think you need more materials. And you must cite sources. You can not just summarize. (Landrigan, Christopher P. et al. "Temporal Trends In Rates Of Patient Harm Resulting From Medical Care". New England Journal of Medicine 363.22 (2010): 2124-2134. Web. 15 Mar. 2016.) And what does this source have to do with CTE? I don't see you using this source? (Laskas, Jeanne. "UPDATE: Game Brain". GQ. N.p., 2009. Web. 15 Mar. 2016.) there is a publisher.
    User_9339 | Feb 05, 2016, 18:28 PM
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Javawriter 10 years, 7 months ago
Rated 8.81 earned 69150.66 around 2092 assignments.
HI,Concerning the homework that you want done for you, am the right person to do it. I am an American native and I have a PHD in sociology also PHD in business administration which i got from Alberta university based in Canada and am currently working as an auditor for Reserve Bank Australia for four years now and u have probably seen it in the top 30 companies in Australia also working at a non governmental organization dealing with women negligence and mistreatment. I assure you a content homework and nothing less than an A. I have written various articles and be rest assured i will deliver a timely,quality,substantial and PLAGIARISM free work. Thanks in advance
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  • it is a research paper. i have some issues with my paper and i hope you can change it. this what the teacher told me. and chick if something need to change You are not supposed to be summarizing articles. You need a better frame. and there are NO citation, you've been writing without putting any sources? Evidence? You need materials. MTBI, who are these people? and Evidence? Citation? You can't make such claims without quoting and citing a source. "The government and leaders must come up with strategies that promote innovation to make a difference in both the society and institutions", where did this idea come from? I think you need more materials. And you must cite sources. You can not just summarize. (Landrigan, Christopher P. et al. "Temporal Trends In Rates Of Patient Harm Resulting From Medical Care". New England Journal of Medicine 363.22 (2010): 2124-2134. Web. 15 Mar. 2016.) And what does this source have to do with CTE? I don't see you using this source? (Laskas, Jeanne. "UPDATE: Game Brain". GQ. N.p., 2009. Web. 15 Mar. 2016.) there is a publisher.
    User_9339 | Feb 05, 2016, 18:23 PM
  • so what did you say??
    User_9339 | Feb 05, 2016, 18:25 PM
  • ok sure
    Javawriter | Feb 05, 2016, 18:44 PM
  • okay can i get your email, because i have other works
    User_9339 | Feb 05, 2016, 18:49 PM
  • I have uploaded it u can get me on whatsapp +254725612718 we are not allowed to give out emails
    Javawriter | Mar 05, 2016, 05:12 AM
  • thanks. can you show me the project (thesis statement)
    User_9339 | Mar 05, 2016, 16:37 PM
  • when will the payment be released
    Javawriter | Oct 05, 2016, 20:31 PM
  • hey please respond
    Javawriter | Nov 05, 2016, 22:00 PM
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    Javawriter | May 16, 2016, 21:02 PM
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    Javawriter | May 24, 2016, 16:12 PM
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