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for Frank_Pro ................... Topic: evolution 1) Since you already know the outline form of the speech, I want you first to read what I've done so far. 2) dots mean it needs to be filled. 3) in the first misconception, I want you to tell the audience that there are two meanings of theory. See this link to understand what I mean: http://biologos.org/common-questions/scientific-evidence/what-is-evolution 4) See these links for the other misconceptions: Evolution and religion are incompatible: http://evolution.berkeley.edu/evolibrary/misconceptions_faq.php#h1 Evolution results in progress; organisms are always getting better through evolution: http://evolution.berkeley.edu/evolibrary/misconceptions_faq.php#a3 5) since there are many evidences of evolution I want you to only choose 3 or 4 good ones and describe them in an easy way. Since Engilsh is my second language, I have a strogn accent. So, please try to make it as simple as possible. Thank you so much!

Date Posted: 19/07/2016
Category: General
Due Date: 20/07/2016
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for Frank_Pro ...................

Topic: evolution
1) Since you already know the outline form of the speech, I want you first to read what I've done so far.
2) dots mean it needs to be filled.
3) in the first misconception, I want you to tell the audience that there are two meanings of theory. See this link to understand what I mean:

http://biologos.org/common-questions/scientific-evidence/what-is-evolution

4) See these links for the other misconceptions:

Evolution and religion are incompatible:
http://evolution.berkeley.edu/evolibrary/misconceptions_faq.php#h1
Evolution results in progress; organisms are always getting better through evolution:
http://evolution.berkeley.edu/evolibrary/misconceptions_faq.php#a3

5) since there are many evidences of evolution I want you to only choose 3 or 4 good ones and describe them in an easy way.

6) Write a short introduction and conclusion.

Since Engilsh is my second language, I have a strogn accent. So, please try to make it as simple as possible.

Thank you so much!
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Frank_Pro 10 years, 2 months ago
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  • Please assign
    Frank_Pro | Jul 19, 2016, 05:34 AM
  • Let me know if there is any question. Thank you for your help!!
    User_7806 | Jul 19, 2016, 05:36 AM
  • Feel free to correct any mistake or change any awkward sentence
    User_7806 | Jul 19, 2016, 05:39 AM
  • Ok, I will
    Frank_Pro | Jul 19, 2016, 05:40 AM
  • I sent you the file
    Frank_Pro | Jul 19, 2016, 13:00 PM
  • Hey! Thank you for your help. Can you please make these changes? 1) the supporting sentences of the first misconception "portraying evolution as only a theory" do not have anything to do with the misconception. Please read this section (Evolution as a scientific theory) in the link above and also read the PDF file I just uploaded it. 2) The intro and conclusion are quite long. Can you please shorten them? Also, I want you to reinforce the central idea (the main points) I'm going to rewrite the whole evidence section. The first two were not explained very well. I mean, If i heard of the fossil record or layers for the first time, I won't understand how it is an evidence from what you wrote.
    User_7806 | Jul 20, 2016, 05:07 AM
  • Also, in the second misconception, the supporting sentences were not clear. All what I wanted to say is that evolution could go either direction to the better or the worse. What you wrote is correct, natural selection determines which way to go. But I think we have to define natural selection in the first section before using it.
    User_7806 | Jul 20, 2016, 05:12 AM
  • Ok, I will be reviewing them.
    Frank_Pro | Jul 20, 2016, 07:33 AM
  • I made the changes as requested
    Frank_Pro | Jul 20, 2016, 14:51 PM
  • You didn't restate the thesis in the conclusion
    User_7806 | Jul 20, 2016, 18:05 PM
  • Ooh! I must have missed that. Sending it shortly
    Frank_Pro | Jul 20, 2016, 18:26 PM
  • I sent it, I hope its now meets all your expectations.
    Frank_Pro | Jul 20, 2016, 19:29 PM
  • You didn't restate the thesis in the conclusion (the three main points,which are what it is, the three misconceptions and the evidence). there is no time to change now. So, I'm going to release the payment and give you 10/10.
    User_7806 | Jul 21, 2016, 03:00 AM
  • Thank you for your understanding. I appreciate and look foward to working with you in the future.
    Frank_Pro | Jul 21, 2016, 03:03 AM
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