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i already wrote an essay and i want to revised it with teacher's comments. i am going to attach the essay ,the slides,and the article.

Date Posted: 22/10/2016
Category: English
Due Date: 22/10/2016
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i already wrote an essay and i want to revised it with teacher's comments. i am going to attach the essay ,the slides,and the article.
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Brilliant Answers 9 years, 11 months ago
Rated 9.71 earned 31218.94 around 1280 assignments.
Hello
$20.00
  • Hey. Did you see all the attachments and the comments above ?
    User_10535 | Oct 22, 2016, 05:08 AM
  • Yes, I did
    Brilliant Answers | Oct 22, 2016, 05:09 AM
  • and I can do a perfect work for you
    Brilliant Answers | Oct 22, 2016, 05:12 AM
  • why did you raise your bid from 10 to 30 !
    User_10535 | Oct 22, 2016, 05:12 AM
  • But it is like repeating the whole paper my friend
    Brilliant Answers | Oct 22, 2016, 05:13 AM
  • I already wrote the essay i just need someone to revise not to rewrite it again so 30$ is too much
    User_10535 | Oct 22, 2016, 05:15 AM
  • How much will you pay then?
    Brilliant Answers | Oct 22, 2016, 05:15 AM
  • from 10 to 20 max
    User_10535 | Oct 22, 2016, 05:17 AM
  • Kindly make it 25 because even if it is revising, it is almost everything in the paper
    Brilliant Answers | Oct 22, 2016, 05:18 AM
  • Come man I just can do 20 max. Maybe next time will do for that rate. Can you do it for 20 for this time?
    User_10535 | Oct 22, 2016, 05:21 AM
  • It is okay
    Brilliant Answers | Oct 22, 2016, 05:22 AM
  • Okay bro, i will assign you now
    User_10535 | Oct 22, 2016, 05:23 AM
  • Okay, thanks
    Brilliant Answers | Oct 22, 2016, 05:24 AM
  • Where is the article?, I can only see the slides
    Brilliant Answers | Oct 22, 2016, 05:30 AM
  • could you finish it before 9 pm US eastern time because i need to look at it and see if it needs more work on it
    User_10535 | Oct 22, 2016, 05:30 AM
  • How many hours from now?
    Brilliant Answers | Oct 22, 2016, 05:31 AM
  • Where is the article?, I can only see the slides
    Brilliant Answers | Oct 22, 2016, 05:35 AM
  • i just attached it
    User_10535 | Oct 22, 2016, 05:44 AM
  • 12 hours
    User_10535 | Oct 22, 2016, 05:44 AM
  • Okay
    Brilliant Answers | Oct 22, 2016, 05:46 AM
  • Completed
    Brilliant Answers | Oct 22, 2016, 13:00 PM
  • it should be 3 responses paragraph. to show what i am agree or disagree.
    User_10535 | Oct 22, 2016, 17:35 PM
  • you just wrote one response paragraph.
    User_10535 | Oct 22, 2016, 17:36 PM
  • was i not revising what you had written?
    Brilliant Answers | Oct 22, 2016, 17:37 PM
  • also there is no theses statement
    User_10535 | Oct 22, 2016, 17:38 PM
  • yes, i wrote 3 response paragraph but i see you revised just one
    User_10535 | Oct 22, 2016, 17:41 PM
  • Okay, anything else you want me to revise?
    Brilliant Answers | Oct 22, 2016, 17:42 PM
  • can you tell me where is the theses statement
    User_10535 | Oct 22, 2016, 17:43 PM
  • I will indicate that
    Brilliant Answers | Oct 22, 2016, 17:43 PM
  • ok
    User_10535 | Oct 22, 2016, 17:44 PM
  • do you what are my response paragraph?
    User_10535 | Oct 22, 2016, 17:45 PM
  • do you know what are my response paragraph?
    User_10535 | Oct 22, 2016, 17:46 PM
  • yes I do
    Brilliant Answers | Oct 22, 2016, 17:46 PM
  • when you will finish it?
    User_10535 | Oct 22, 2016, 18:03 PM
  • I will not take long, in the next one hour or so
    Brilliant Answers | Oct 22, 2016, 18:05 PM
  • Check now
    Brilliant Answers | Oct 22, 2016, 18:46 PM
  • Hi
    User_10535 | Oct 25, 2016, 04:22 AM
  • Hi my friend
    Brilliant Answers | Oct 25, 2016, 04:24 AM
  • Kindly release payment for this one
    Brilliant Answers | Oct 25, 2016, 05:18 AM
  • Thanks
    Brilliant Answers | Oct 25, 2016, 05:51 AM
  • Check now
    User_10535 | Oct 25, 2016, 05:51 AM
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    contentwriter | Oct 22, 2016, 05:15 AM
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