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Paper review. Very basic compare paper to rubric. Example: Development: 4 Grammar: 4 Style guide: 4 Audience: 3 Sources/citations: 4 Joint mechanics: 3, go a little more in depth and describe the (muscles, ligaments, etc.) Joint stability: 2, I would go more in depth by listing and labeling the job of each ligament Joint mobility: 3 I think you can combine some of your paragraphs to make your paper flow just a little better and maybe go in depth about the ligaments they play a huge roll in the knee. Over all I think you did a really good job and the resources you found made your paper sound better!

Date Posted: 04/02/2017
Category: General
Due Date: 05/02/2017
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Paper review. Very basic compare paper to rubric.
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Development: 4
Grammar: 4
Style guide: 4
Audience: 3
Sources/citations: 4
Joint mechanics: 3, go a little more in depth and describe the (muscles, ligaments, etc.)
Joint stability: 2, I would go more in depth by listing and labeling the job of each ligament
Joint mobility: 3
I think you can combine some of your paragraphs to make your paper flow just a little better and maybe go in depth about the ligaments they play a huge roll in the knee. Over all I think you did a really good job and the resources you found made your paper sound better!
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  • Do you understand what I am asking for? My example was from another paper but it should look something like that just different remarks according to the paper I attached
    User_10496 | Apr 02, 2017, 17:25 PM
  • Yes I got your point and for sure I will follow exactly to deliver it for you accordingly
    WBURO | Apr 02, 2017, 17:27 PM
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  • Yep! I just want to make sure you are understanding what I want, nothing complex just a rating and a few comments
    User_10496 | Apr 02, 2017, 17:26 PM
  • Now I get it. Initially I thought of it as a response to a discussion board. Now it will be easier for me
    kelvinrotich | Apr 02, 2017, 17:28 PM
  • Yes sir, and youre welcome to add extra details if youd like and maybe a small amount is recommended but for the most part it should look similar to the example. But please grade and comment according to the correct paper assigned
    User_10496 | Apr 02, 2017, 17:29 PM
  • Okay, I will do that. Thanks
    kelvinrotich | Apr 02, 2017, 17:30 PM
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    User_10496 | Apr 02, 2017, 17:31 PM
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  • Ok so Im most likely now no going to be able to get many points if any on the first paper I assigned you so I need that one ASAP. Was due 2 days ago. The second review I absolutely need today or I will not get points
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  • Hello, I sent it and notified you in that thread. I have posted this one too
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