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Date Posted: 08/03/2017
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1stclasshonour 9 years, 1 month ago
Rated 9.22 earned 30856.96 around 773 assignments.
hi
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  • Kindly release payment
    User_10376 | Aug 03, 2017, 21:00 PM
  • please release the payment
    User_10376 | Aug 03, 2017, 21:08 PM
  • ??
    User_10376 | Aug 03, 2017, 21:14 PM
  • Pls reduce to $50
    User_10881 | Aug 03, 2017, 23:01 PM
  • done , kindly release the payment , rate me 10/10 and leave a positive feedback
    User_10376 | Sep 03, 2017, 02:30 AM
  • done , kindly release the payment , rate me 10/10 and leave a positive feedback
    User_10376 | Sep 03, 2017, 10:11 AM
  • kindly release the payment rate me 10/10 and leave a positive feedback
    User_10376 | Sep 03, 2017, 18:08 PM
  • Hi l have look at the paper and l can say that l am going to fail big time. It's a good paper well written but it's way above the college limit of 12000 and also the text some is in columns and some isn't. I appreciate the hard work you did on this paper but please summarise some of the information like the introduction my tutor says that information is readily available online. I need 12000 words not 14900.. I have paid all l can at this moment and I am frustrated coz l missed the deadline now l have nothing to submit coz l can't submit 15000 words .the language is US l wanted UK. Don't get me wrong it's a very good paper but needs a bit of summarising
    User_10881 | Sep 03, 2017, 19:17 PM
  • ok
    User_10376 | Sep 03, 2017, 19:18 PM
  • have you handed over the assignment to the lecture please
    User_10376 | Sep 03, 2017, 19:21 PM
  • I am looking at the paper and struggling to reduce the words because if l send it like this l will fail
    User_10881 | Sep 03, 2017, 19:26 PM
  • I will hand it over tonight l want to change the language
    User_10881 | Sep 03, 2017, 19:27 PM
  • From US to Uk
    User_10881 | Sep 03, 2017, 19:28 PM
  • Are you helping?
    User_10881 | Sep 03, 2017, 19:34 PM
  • Chapter summaries they repeat what you have already written above in some cases word for word
    User_10881 | Sep 03, 2017, 19:40 PM
  • Don't worry much l have sent my tutor the research will let you know feedback tomorrow. I think that's fair to wait before you amend.
    User_10881 | Sep 03, 2017, 20:59 PM
  • The only thing that's missing is a personal reflection statement...please kindly help with a brief of this
    User_10881 | Sep 03, 2017, 22:27 PM
  • let us wait bro , like i always do in case of anything will be ready to fix it
    User_10376 | Oct 03, 2017, 02:07 AM
  • Ok
    User_10881 | Oct 03, 2017, 09:57 AM
  • Tutor wants commentary against his comments that l sent previously just a few words pls if you can send it
    User_10881 | Oct 03, 2017, 11:23 AM
  • For continuation purposes coz if l write it won't match ur writing
    User_10881 | Oct 03, 2017, 11:24 AM
  • Pls help
    User_10881 | Oct 03, 2017, 11:24 AM
  • This is the message from Tutor Can you please highlight all new updates in say RED? Can you now provide a commentary against each of the points in my last email? This will help me to assess your logic and understanding better, and also help with tracking
    User_10881 | Oct 03, 2017, 11:29 AM
  • Hi a u there
    User_10881 | Oct 03, 2017, 13:47 PM
  • hello, was offline
    User_10376 | Oct 03, 2017, 15:04 PM
  • Can you help it's urgent and the personal reflection statement as well
    User_10881 | Oct 03, 2017, 15:52 PM
  • ok
    User_10376 | Oct 03, 2017, 15:52 PM
  • am driving home
    User_10376 | Oct 03, 2017, 15:53 PM
  • OK thanks
    User_10881 | Oct 03, 2017, 16:25 PM
  • uploaded , kindly have a look at it
    User_10376 | Oct 03, 2017, 17:53 PM
  • Have seen the highlighted changes thanks
    User_10881 | Oct 03, 2017, 18:43 PM
  • Pls help This is the message from Tutor Can you please highlight all new updates in say RED? Can you now provide a commentary against each of the points in my last email? This will help me to assess your logic and understanding better, and also help with tracking
    User_10881 | Oct 03, 2017, 18:43 PM
  • Sorry this is the bit like need help Can you now provide a commentary against each of the points in my last email? This will help me to assess your logic and understanding better, and also help with tracking
    User_10881 | Oct 03, 2017, 18:44 PM
  • Can you help it's urgent and the personal reflection statement as well
    User_10881 | Oct 03, 2017, 18:44 PM
  • my friend ,,, i think have done that,,, have just highlted
    User_10376 | Oct 03, 2017, 18:53 PM
  • Can you help it's urgent and the personal reflection statement as well
    User_10881 | Oct 03, 2017, 20:07 PM
  • have yo forwarded the paper please
    User_10376 | Oct 03, 2017, 20:09 PM
  • I did and he replied with the instructions above he wants a personal reflection statement asap.
    User_10881 | Oct 03, 2017, 20:29 PM
  • Hello
    User_10881 | Nov 03, 2017, 17:01 PM
  • hello bro
    User_10376 | Dec 03, 2017, 12:39 PM
  • The only thing that's missing is a personal reflection statement...please kindly help with a brief of this....for continuation purposes...your writing is professional
    User_10881 | Dec 03, 2017, 13:10 PM
  • this is the message from the lecturer
    User_10376 | Dec 03, 2017, 15:57 PM
  • He wants a personal reflection statement
    User_10881 | Dec 03, 2017, 16:27 PM
  • how many pages/words please
    User_10376 | Dec 03, 2017, 16:30 PM
  • I would say 300 or so
    User_10881 | Dec 03, 2017, 16:49 PM
  • Upladed , KINDLY RELEASE PAYMENT
    User_10376 | Dec 03, 2017, 20:56 PM
  • Hi the paper uploaded is a summary of the research the tutor wants a personal reflection statement... I have pasted example questions below of how it should be written... (Here are some more guiding questions. Answering these questions are optional.) What challenged you? How did you meet the challenge? What would you do differently if you have a chance to do this project again? Why? What have you discovered about yourself as a learner? Regarding the _______ assignment, I discovered that I .... How did this learning relate to your goals (personal, academic, or professional)? How have I grown as a student this semester
    User_10881 | Mar 13, 2017, 00:45 AM
  • Hi
    User_10881 | Mar 13, 2017, 10:28 AM
  • hello , will uploaded the reflection statement soon
    User_10376 | Mar 13, 2017, 11:20 AM
  • Thank you so much
    User_10881 | Mar 13, 2017, 11:30 AM
  • check the uploaded file
    User_10376 | Mar 13, 2017, 16:58 PM
  • Have seen the upload let me forward it
    User_10881 | Mar 13, 2017, 17:32 PM
  • Will recommend my friends to you
    User_10881 | Mar 13, 2017, 17:32 PM
  • will appreciate , kindly release the money
    User_10376 | Mar 13, 2017, 17:36 PM
  • ??
    User_10376 | Mar 13, 2017, 17:45 PM
  • Have uploaded the statement to my tutor just waiting for feedback l double checked the words and if l include abstract total is 12289 . So l guess no panic..... will you still help me if l release the money? The tutor hasn't reviewed the amendments yet l am waiting for his feedback. Once again thank you so much for your help and professionalism
    User_10881 | Mar 13, 2017, 19:48 PM
  • why not , will make sure is perfect
    User_10376 | Mar 13, 2017, 19:51 PM
  • and dont forget to leave a positive feedback
    User_10376 | Mar 13, 2017, 19:57 PM
  • Ok
    User_10881 | Mar 13, 2017, 20:05 PM
  • Thanks alot
    User_10376 | Mar 13, 2017, 23:30 PM
  • Tutor has responded he is happy with a lot of the research Please see below his comments and kindly help me.
    User_10881 | Mar 14, 2017, 00:07 AM
  • You have used alot of historical text and explanations, particularly in your Litt Review. Have you made good use of para-phrasing? Will the Turtitin rating be low? - I already mentioned the need to correct references for Harvard referencing. - You could make more comparison with Thompsons.
    User_10881 | Mar 14, 2017, 00:08 AM
  • Introduction - 1.3 Your Objectives should be 4 or 5 points and in bullet point format. Repeat them at the start of the LR, Methodology and Data Analysis, to show that you are on-track. - " On the cost side business process redesign strategies like Business Process Reengineering (BPR), are aimed at minimizing costs. Business costs also include Finance". Add a reference for BPR.
    User_10881 | Mar 14, 2017, 00:09 AM
  • will get back to you
    User_10376 | Mar 14, 2017, 00:10 AM
  • May I comment as follows: General - You overall text is now much improved and has better shape and balance. - I have reviewed all your new text as highlighted, they all seem OK. - What is your overall word count? It should be around 10,000 words.
    User_10881 | Mar 14, 2017, 00:10 AM
  • Methodology - This chapter is now much improved. Conclusions - This chapter is now much improved. Recommendations - This chapter is now much improved. - Aim for around 500 words or so.
    User_10881 | Mar 14, 2017, 00:12 AM
  • Recommendations he wants around 500 words but it's ok
    User_10881 | Mar 14, 2017, 00:12 AM
  • are you serious , overall 10,000 words and he said i add 2000 more
    User_10376 | Mar 14, 2017, 00:13 AM
  • anyway will have a look at and get back to you
    User_10376 | Mar 14, 2017, 00:14 AM
  • Lit Review - " At the time, the company had a placement of 87million shares that were priced at 137p per share which indicated a 5.3% discount in the share price. This move was anticipated to raise the company 120 million euros while 305 million euros was expected to come from the rights issue of two-for-five of the 401 million ordinary shares priced at 76p each. The plan". In places you discuss issues using significant amounts of very descriptive text, when a summary would be more beneficial., - You should provide your overview/summary of these details. What do they mean? - Start the chapter with an Introduction title.
    User_10881 | Mar 14, 2017, 00:14 AM
  • Ignore the 10000 it's ok
    User_10881 | Mar 14, 2017, 00:15 AM
  • College wants 12000 ignore the word count just follow the comments about literature review helpful needs summaries in some parts
    User_10881 | Mar 14, 2017, 00:17 AM
  • ok, will get back to you shortly
    User_10376 | Mar 14, 2017, 00:19 AM
  • Thanks
    User_10881 | Mar 14, 2017, 10:37 AM
  • Hi
    User_10881 | Mar 14, 2017, 12:56 PM
  • hello
    User_10376 | Mar 14, 2017, 14:00 PM
  • Methodology he likes it no change and conclusions as well
    User_10881 | Mar 14, 2017, 15:42 PM
  • Data Analysis and data presentation he didn't say anything l guess it's ok as well.
    User_10881 | Mar 14, 2017, 15:44 PM
  • Do you have any questions
    User_10881 | Mar 14, 2017, 15:45 PM
  • incase of anything will let you know
    User_10376 | Mar 14, 2017, 17:47 PM
  • OK thanks
    User_10881 | Mar 14, 2017, 18:40 PM
  • Hi when can. I expect the amendments since its not much my tutor likes my paper
    User_10881 | Mar 14, 2017, 20:55 PM
  • i have deleted as much as i could. The rest of the corrections are done. Io part ya recommendations have seen the teacher needed more words but you have said it should remain the same. so i have left it as it is
    User_10376 | Mar 15, 2017, 00:19 AM
  • Recommendations l meant he wants 500 words otherwise the current text he likes it but wants more
    User_10881 | Mar 15, 2017, 07:57 AM
  • so i add 2 more pages in recommendation
    User_10376 | Mar 15, 2017, 07:58 AM
  • The fields highlighted in red are those the ammendments
    User_10881 | Mar 15, 2017, 08:00 AM
  • yes
    User_10376 | Mar 15, 2017, 08:01 AM
  • Yes pls if you can pls add just a few words to make it 500
    User_10881 | Mar 15, 2017, 08:07 AM
  • Literature review did u follow his instructions coz it's worth 30% of my marks
    User_10881 | Mar 15, 2017, 08:08 AM
  • sure i will , i promised you will never let you down
    User_10376 | Mar 15, 2017, 08:08 AM
  • yes i did , the paper is perfect , why get worried my friend ??
    User_10376 | Mar 15, 2017, 08:09 AM
  • Thank you so much
    User_10881 | Mar 15, 2017, 08:17 AM
  • Thank you so much
    User_10881 | Mar 15, 2017, 08:17 AM
  • Hi any luck
    User_10881 | Mar 15, 2017, 13:43 PM
  • cool down
    User_10376 | Mar 15, 2017, 14:31 PM
  • Ok
    User_10881 | Mar 15, 2017, 17:09 PM
  • I have to submit the final research paper by tomorrow morning
    User_10881 | Mar 15, 2017, 20:02 PM
  • noted, will never let you down
    User_10376 | Mar 15, 2017, 20:05 PM
  • noted, will never let you down
    User_10376 | Mar 15, 2017, 20:06 PM
  • I am supposed to submit today
    User_10881 | Mar 16, 2017, 08:16 AM
  • Hi
    User_10881 | Mar 16, 2017, 12:04 PM
  • My tutor wants the final paper
    User_10881 | Mar 16, 2017, 12:04 PM
  • let me arrive and send you the paper please
    User_10376 | Mar 16, 2017, 12:07 PM
  • Thanks
    User_10881 | Mar 16, 2017, 12:13 PM
  • uploaded paper
    User_10376 | Mar 16, 2017, 13:47 PM
  • Have seen the paper thank you so much...fingers crossed Tutor says it's ok finally
    User_10881 | Mar 16, 2017, 15:09 PM
  • i am pleased to hear that
    User_10376 | Mar 16, 2017, 15:59 PM
  • hopes you will refer your friends to me
    User_10376 | Mar 16, 2017, 17:32 PM
  • Hi thank you so much for all your help
    User_10881 | Mar 18, 2017, 20:54 PM
  • wellcome , hopes you will refffer your friends to me
    User_10376 | Mar 19, 2017, 01:47 AM
  • Hi message from Tutor below..final review
    User_10881 | Mar 20, 2017, 13:42 PM
  • May I make my final feedback comments on your text: General - Thanks for making these latest changes. - I have made a few smaller suggestions. - Have you now addressed all my concerns? There is no commentary from you. - What is your latest word count, as you have more additions? - Pay attention to paragraph indents. Be consistent. - I note your updates in RED. - (Hamscher 1994) Address Harvard referencing. Place only the date in brackets. I have already mentioned this to you.
    User_10881 | Mar 20, 2017, 13:43 PM
  • Objectives - This is a small point, can you re-phrase to: "To evaluate...To assess, to review...
    User_10881 | Mar 20, 2017, 13:43 PM
  • Methodology - 3.10 & 3.11. Add references. Data Presentation - Add an Introduction sub title. - 5.1 Be wary of long lists of bullet points without supporting analysis.
    User_10881 | Mar 20, 2017, 13:45 PM
  • Conclusions - I am not sure that you are using your Objectives as the sub titles that I mentioned? This is required to help with marking. Have you met your Objectives?
    User_10881 | Mar 20, 2017, 13:45 PM
  • Introduction ....sentence starting with ....Thomas Cook Group plc has a strong............... You have repeated this text in RED earlier.
    User_10881 | Mar 20, 2017, 13:51 PM
  • Hi Can you help pls it's just minor later revisions he wants
    User_10881 | Mar 20, 2017, 17:35 PM
  • hello
    User_10376 | Mar 20, 2017, 20:20 PM
  • am sorry for rate reply
    User_10376 | Mar 20, 2017, 20:20 PM
  • as i promised you will assist you till the end
    User_10376 | Mar 20, 2017, 20:21 PM
  • I have dealt with the objectives pls help with the rest it's just minor....he wants commentary l don't know wat that means
    User_10881 | Mar 20, 2017, 20:22 PM
  • dont worry will fix it and get back to you
    User_10376 | Mar 20, 2017, 20:23 PM
  • Pls help particularly with the paragraph indents he is talking about don't worry about word count l will sort that out
    User_10881 | Mar 20, 2017, 20:27 PM
  • Thank you so much
    User_10881 | Mar 20, 2017, 20:28 PM
  • clarify 1. Introduction ....sentence starting with ....Thomas Cook Group plc has a strong............... You have repeated this text in RED earlier. (what exactly am I expected to do?) 2. Conclusions - I am not sure that you are using your Objectives as the sub titles that I mentioned? This is required to help with marking. Have you met your Objectives?(i have already used the objective as subtitles and i have met the objectives, now what?) 3. There is no commentary from you (what does this mean?)
    User_10376 | Mar 20, 2017, 21:02 PM
  • Introduction part l have dealt with it Conclusion that's were he wants objectives as subtitles as well to show that l have met them Commentary ignore that
    User_10881 | Mar 20, 2017, 23:22 PM
  • understood
    User_10376 | Mar 21, 2017, 01:49 AM
  • Hi any progress
    User_10881 | Mar 21, 2017, 12:48 PM
  • will send you shortly
    User_10376 | Mar 21, 2017, 12:52 PM
  • check the uploaded file please
    User_10376 | Mar 21, 2017, 13:27 PM
  • References for 3.10 and 3.11 aren't there on bibliography
    User_10881 | Mar 21, 2017, 14:59 PM
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