As you see my first draft and how i did bad in my first draft, so can you please follow the correction that he made it. Also, you can see the outline i made, just follow it and correct my mistakes and improves it as a perfect essay essay with what can you see the comments in the bottom of the first draft.

Date Posted: 05/05/2017

Category: General
Due Date: 06/05/2017

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User_10336 | Aug 05, 2017, 17:29 PM
Can you check to my attachment please
User_10336 | Aug 05, 2017, 17:45 PM
But i did according to the initial instructions
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superbwriter | Oct 05, 2017, 04:38 AM
could you rewrite the same as the from that I attached 1st, the driver's behavior is one of'' as a main point - using phone by calling or texting - drinking or eating - pick whatever 2ed, speeding is the other major of traffic accidents - young drivers - pick whatever 3ed, weather can be causes of traffic accidents - rain - tornado and whatever and each body paragraph must have at least 5 sentences.
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