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Hello , I need someone to check the Grammer and spelling and punctuation .. And write the paragraph in perfectly ... The paragraph is 4 sentences ..

Date Posted: 28/08/2017
Category: English
Due Date: 28/08/2017
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Hello , I need someone to check the Grammer and spelling and punctuation .. And write the paragraph in perfectly ... The paragraph is 4 sentences ..
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ESSAYSTAR 9 years, 1 month ago
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annewriter 9 years, 1 month ago
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  • Brother , it's just 4 sentences can you help me with the price ?!?
    User_8651 | Aug 28, 2017, 03:37 AM
  • how much are you willing to pay?
    annewriter | Aug 28, 2017, 03:38 AM
  • 10
    User_8651 | Aug 28, 2017, 03:39 AM
  • okay, i have lowered my bid to $10
    annewriter | Aug 28, 2017, 03:40 AM
  • It's still 15 $
    User_8651 | Aug 28, 2017, 03:42 AM
  • It seems the website has limited users from bidding below $15. I cannot lower it from my side.
    annewriter | Aug 28, 2017, 03:43 AM
  • Lets do $15 and may be in future we can negotiate for a lower price i.e if you will want me to help you in any other assignment.
    annewriter | Aug 28, 2017, 03:45 AM
  • Okay brother .. Here is the paragraph .. I need it in 1 hour please .. Unfortunately , many products such as electronics and USP connectors have at least one defect . However , I phone charging cable are often gets ripped from near charging socket area and resulted into non working of cable . We think The cause of the defect is using a low quality materials for outer cover when manufacturing the product and the design of the charger is not suitable for long-term use . We believe in order to prevent this defect the product must be made of high quality outer cover such as TITAN and redesign the product To be more flexible for long-term use .
    User_8651 | Aug 28, 2017, 03:48 AM
  • Please upload the work you need edited.
    annewriter | Aug 28, 2017, 03:48 AM
  • Unfortunately , many products such as electronics and USP connectors have at least one defect . However , I phone charging cable are often gets ripped from near charging socket area and resulted into non working of cable . We think The cause of the defect is using a low quality materials for outer cover when manufacturing the product and the design of the charger is not suitable for long-term use . We believe in order to prevent this defect the product must be made of high quality outer cover such as TITAN and redesign the product To be more flexible for long-term use .
    User_8651 | Aug 28, 2017, 03:48 AM
  • Sorry, got it.
    annewriter | Aug 28, 2017, 03:49 AM
  • Hi there, find attached. I have eliminated all typos and filler words you had used in your paragraph. Also,the use of punctuation marks is okay and I have reorganized the paragraph to make sure it is flowing appropriately. Thanks
    annewriter | Aug 28, 2017, 04:39 AM
  • bro , i just want you to fix the mistakes thats it ... you changed the grammar and everything ... i want you to use simple grammar and vocabulary
    User_8651 | Aug 28, 2017, 04:48 AM
  • yes, i have removed the mistakes and fixed everything else that was incorrect. Do you want me to revise it for you?
    annewriter | Aug 28, 2017, 04:51 AM
  • No I just want it simple .. Not professional .. And also I need it correct
    User_8651 | Aug 28, 2017, 04:52 AM
  • I have used the word for example at the beginning of the second sentence to differentiate it as one of the many products you have mentioned in the first sentence.
    annewriter | Aug 28, 2017, 04:53 AM
  • Is there any word you do not understand what it means? so I can change it for you?
    annewriter | Aug 28, 2017, 04:54 AM
  • i understand it but the instructor will notice that this is not my way of writing ....
    User_8651 | Aug 28, 2017, 04:56 AM
  • let me see what I can do to it. May be I can try to simplify it for you.
    annewriter | Aug 28, 2017, 04:57 AM
  • Find attached, I have tried to make it sound simpler.
    annewriter | Aug 28, 2017, 05:07 AM
  • Are you okay with it now?
    annewriter | Aug 28, 2017, 05:16 AM
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  • Can you help me with price ?
    User_8651 | Aug 28, 2017, 03:39 AM
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    User_10376 | Aug 28, 2017, 03:41 AM
  • I will be done in less than 30 minutes.I am good in English punctuation and spelling .Thanks
    User_10376 | Aug 28, 2017, 03:44 AM
  • Kindly upload the paragraph to be worked on,thank you as you asset my bid.
    User_10376 | Aug 28, 2017, 03:47 AM
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  • I can do that one perfectly for you and deliver perfect work free from grammar mistakes and plagiarism because I understand the importance of this assignment in your course kindly assign..thank you
    WBURO | Aug 28, 2017, 03:48 AM
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