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This week we will be working through the next stage writing the final paper). Here we will be doing a similar essay as last week only you need to annotated/summarize the sources in the body. Do not evaluate them like last week. Summarize them in a few sentences. And, the sources not have to be from the South library, and they may not be the sources you use for the final paper should you decided to use another topic during the process. Do know you are free to choose that topic any time you like if you feel your research is not moving in the right direction. . Introduction- 1 paragraph. Start with a broad statement of your subject in a sentence or two, explain, list the thesis statement summarize your topic and explain, then use transitional sentence or two to move the reader to the body (one paragraph, 8-10 LONG, FLOWING sentences in length, 80-100 WORDS). II. Body- 4 paragraphs total. In EACH of your FOUR body paragraphs introduce your 2 sources, SUMMARIZE it in a few sentences (a 2-3 sentence summary of each source), support it with a direct quote from your source, comment without using an opinion or `I`, announce your next source, evaluate it in a few sentences, quote, comment without using `I`, then conclude with a transitional sentence that moves the reader to the next paragraph (2 sources per paragraph, 4 paragraphs, 8-10 LONG, FLOWING sentences per paragraph, 80-100 WORDS). III. Conclusion- 1 paragraph. Restate your topics, LIST your sources with a sentence each, 2 sources per sentences (the sources you listed in the intro and the ones your explained in your body), state an attitude about your sources, then provide the reader with closure in this order (one paragraph, 8-10 LONG, FLOWING sentences per paragraph, 80-100 WORDS). Here more details Submit the rough draft of your Bibliographic Essay with your references page in Discussion 1. Then by the end of the week, provide feedback to two peers in response to their rough drafts including commenting on their references pages. In Week 2, you decided on your topic for your final essay, and you located eight credible sources and presented your evaluation of those sources in a short essay in which you convinced your readers that your sources are indeed credible. In Week 3 you will present what your sources have to say in relation to your topic in a short bibliographic essay. no plagiarism

Date Posted: 29/05/2013
Category: English
Due Date: 31/05/2013
Instruction
Submit the rough draft of your Bibliographic Essay with your references page in Discussion 1. Then by the end of the week, provide feedback to two peers in response to their rough drafts including commenting on their references pages.


In Week 2, you decided on your topic for your final essay, and you located eight credible sources and presented your evaluation of those sources in a short essay in which you convinced your readers that your sources are indeed credible. In Week 3 you will present what your sources have to say in relation to your topic in a short bibliographic essay.


Start by rereading the information presented by your sources and taking notes following the methods outlined in the lectures on note-taking in Weeks 2 and 3. As you take notes, also work to capture important ideas and words from your sources using the techniques of quoting, paraphrasing, and summarizing as shared in the lecture this week on that subject. For each source, represent the main point the author is making in the article, being sure to use quotation marks for exact words and to note the position of the cited passage by taking down the page or paragraph number which you will use in your in-text citation. Once you feel that you have a good idea of the information presented by each of your sources, try to organize the information you have gleaned from them in a logical way. You can start by putting all notes with similar points of view in groups together. Notice what your sources share in common and what makes them different from one another.


At this time, you should be able to create a thesis statement for this short essay that will share with your readers the broad scope of the contents of the articles you have located through your research work. However, at this point, you still will not present your point of view on your topic. The work of this essay is simply to present the information that you have found from the various sources. Your thesis statement might say something like this if you were writing on school voucher programs: Research shows divergent opinions on the effectiveness of school voucher programs; and these differences seem to rest on issues of funding, representation of parents on school boards within school districts, and location of the schools in urban, suburban, or rural areas. Within this example, we can see that the divisions of opinion can be used as categories which suggest a potential organizational strategy for the bibliographic essay that you will submit this week.


As you compose your essay, be conscious about its organization and make sure to represent accurately the main points of information you have gotten from each source. You must present to your readers the information which you will use to inform your research work for the final project, including information from eight sources. Be sure to use accurate in-text citations and to include a references page. You can start with the materials that were corrected in Week 2 and make further refinements to ensure that your references page is perfect according to APA style. Also, be sure to conclude your essay with a paragraph which sums up your bibliographic essay and indicates your readiness to proceed to the next step in the research process.

post the rough draft of your short bibliographic essay including a complete references page in Discussion 1. By the end of the week respond to the rough drafts of your peers using the criteria below:

Evaluate the thesis statement: note whether the authors thesis and overall representation of these particular articles are clearly stated. Make suggestions to help with the wording if you think it will help the authors clarity.

Share any concerns you have about the accuracy of the authors sources. You can also suggest other sources that would help the author to have the most comprehensive understanding of his or her particular topic.

Note whether the organization of the essay is effective. Suggest an alternate organizational strategy if you think one is needed or would be useful.

Note whether this short essay convinces you that the author has located sufficient materials to be knowledgeable about his or her topic for the final essay and, therefore, is ready to proceed to taking a stand on the issue, which is our next step in the research process.

Offer corrections to errors in in-text citations and references. We want to have a discussion about how to correctly format citations and references so that this aspect of writing is also made clear in the process of writing.


here more details

This week we will be working through the next stage writing the final paper). Here we will be doing a similar essay as last week only you need to annotated/summarize the sources in the body. Do not evaluate them like last week. Summarize them in a few sentences. And, the sources not have to be from the South library, and they may not be the sources you use for the final paper should you decided to use another topic during the process. Do know you are free to choose that topic any time you like if you feel your research is not moving in the right direction.

Be sure to respond to two classmates with the peer feedback list/form, and two others in a dialogical form where you just add comments but do not have to fill out the aforementioned feedback form, that is if you want the full points for responding to 4 people.

Please keep the participation days in mind when doing this one.


THIS SHOULD BE A COMPLETELY DIFFERENT PAPER FROM LAST WEEK. THIS MEANS YOU WOULDN'T USE LAST WEEK'S PAPER AND JUST CHANGE THE BODY AROUND. IT'S A SIMILAR PAPER IN REGARDS TO WRITING A SUMMARY OF EACH SOURCE AND OF COURSE YOU CAN USE THE SAME SOURCES BUT DO NOT USE THE SAME PAPER AS LAST WEEK WITH JUST A FEW WORDS CHANGED AROUND.

Please keep the participation days in mind when doing this one.

Again folks, be sure to follow these guidelines each week. :)

1. This essay would be 6 paragraphs of roughly 8-10 sentences per paragraph (to meet the 400-500 word count), using Times New Roman font at 12, typed in Word, attached in Word. DO NOT TYPE THEM IN THE THREADS.

2. Indent 5-7 spaces at the beginning of each paragraph.

3. Any borrowed work (in body of essays only) should be in the form of direct/indirect quotes only, 1 per body paragraph per source only (no quotes in the intro or conclusion:) if you decide to quote.

4. All papers should be double spaced, including between paragraphs.

5. There should be a good working title on the title which summarizes your topic, all major words capitalized, along with a running header. Be as creative as possible but make sure your title is a good indicator of your subject.

6. There should be no `your` or `we` or `us` or `I` used here nor should there by any type of storytelling with personal references, questions to the reader or any conversation with the reader. Write objectively and impersonal, not subjectively and personal

7. Proper reference and title pages are required (quotes from each source are needed).


TIPS FOR STRUCTURING THE PAPER

I. Introduction- 1 paragraph. Start with a broad statement of your subject in a sentence or two, explain, list the thesis statement summarize your topic and explain, then use transitional sentence or two to move the reader to the body (one paragraph, 8-10 LONG, FLOWING sentences in length, 80-100 WORDS).

II. Body- 4 paragraphs total. In EACH of your FOUR body paragraphs introduce your 2 sources, SUMMARIZE it in a few sentences (a 2-3 sentence summary of each source), support it with a direct quote from your source, comment without using an opinion or `I`, announce your next source, evaluate it in a few sentences, quote, comment without using `I`, then conclude with a transitional sentence that moves the reader to the next paragraph (2 sources per paragraph, 4 paragraphs, 8-10 LONG, FLOWING sentences per paragraph, 80-100 WORDS).

III. Conclusion- 1 paragraph. Restate your topics, LIST your sources with a sentence each, 2 sources per sentences (the sources you listed in the intro and the ones your explained in your body), state an attitude about your sources, then provide the reader with closure in this order (one paragraph, 8-10 LONG, FLOWING sentences per paragraph, 80-100 WORDS).

no plagiarism please

navigill added on 05/30/13 at 03:26 PM (PST):

Working with your notes, create an outline to share the structure of your final paper. Using that outline, prepare a PowerPoint presentation of your final essay. By Saturday, June 8, 2013, submit the PowerPoint slides of your final paper to the Discussion Area. By the end of the week, respond to the rough drafts of two of your peers, using the criteria in the Evaluation Criteria for Preliminary PowerPoint checklist that you used to guide you in designing your own slides.

To start, make an outline of your paper, using the thesis statement for the first paragraph and including one sentence for each paragraph of the body of your paper. Include one sentence for your conclusion as well. Here is a model to help you design the working outline of your slides.

Thesis Statement

First Main Idea
First subordinate idea
First example or illustration
Second example or illustration
Second subordinate idea
First example or illustration
Second example or illustration

Second Main Idea
First subordinate idea
First example or illustration
Second example or illustration
Second subordinate idea
First example or illustration
Second example or illustration

Conclusion

For additional information and a complete breakdown about outlines and their formats, review your textbook and this week's lecture about planning the research essay, creating an outline, and writing the paper.


Working from your outline, create a presentation of your final paper on a series of slides. Use the Evaluation Criteria for Preliminary PowerPoint checklist as a guideline in creating your slides. You will also use this checklist to provide feedback to your peers on their slides.


When you complete your presentation, post it as an attachment to the Discussion Area below for critique by your peers. You should comment on the slides presented by at least two of your classmates by the end of the week.

Below is a sample diagram or how a standard outline for a paper should look, and how your your PPL outline should look, or a rough idea. I'm pretty fair here so just keep things nice and simple with an INTRO, BODY AND CONCLUSION WITH TWO SUPPORTING EXAMPLES PER MAIN POINT in the body, as shown in BOTH THE OUTLINE AND PPL SAMPLE. Use Power Point as the subject heading. The feedback can be done in paragraph form, without cutting or pasting a criteria list. I attached an outline so show you what one looks like. It's not part of the assignment so do not attach one. The assignent is just the PPL. The outline is to help you organize your ideas. :).

Thesis Statement (one sentence)
Introduction- list your 6-7 main points of defense.
Body- list your 6-7 main points of defense as shown in the intro, same order and basic wording, with 2 supporting examples per main point.
Conclusion- list your 6-7 main points as shown in the intro and body, same order and basic wording.

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  • i can do 55$
    User_2385 | May 29, 2013, 11:16 AM
  • make it 60,i will do some good work
    User_3133 | May 29, 2013, 11:21 AM
  • ok but no no plagiarism please thank you
    User_2385 | May 29, 2013, 11:23 AM
  • i did asign my work to you thank you i will add some bonus if the work is perfect
    User_2385 | May 29, 2013, 11:24 AM
  • thank you let me work on it
    User_3133 | May 29, 2013, 11:25 AM
  • before you go i would like to ask if i will have to choose any topic or i be specific
    User_3133 | May 29, 2013, 11:30 AM
  • not really i did my last one on women descrimination but you can choose any researchable topic
    User_2385 | May 29, 2013, 11:48 AM
  • i upload a attachment That is sample of essay which my provider sent me so iit would be something like that.. with our own sources and own topic that is just a sample how we going to do it.
    User_2385 | May 29, 2013, 12:07 PM
  • i cannot open your attachment i don't know why
    User_3133 | May 29, 2013, 23:07 PM
  • so this is draft which so upload or you still working on it also if this is correct there is other assignment beased on that it will be a powerpoint can you do that also.
    User_2385 | May 30, 2013, 11:18 AM
  • it is based on the same topic?
    User_3133 | May 30, 2013, 11:24 AM
  • yes
    User_2385 | May 30, 2013, 11:33 AM
  • yes it is but i'll get more information and let you know today or tomm if that is fine with you
    User_2385 | May 30, 2013, 11:35 AM
  • that is a draft which entail both week one and two am only working on the main week 3 essay
    User_3133 | May 30, 2013, 11:35 AM
  • yep i can do it
    User_3133 | May 30, 2013, 11:37 AM
  • okay i'm going to send this to my teacher for corrections i will get respond by end of the day then ill let you knw about the powerpoint and also release you the payment thank you for the help
    User_2385 | May 30, 2013, 11:39 AM
  • thank you too,let me wait for the response
    User_3133 | May 30, 2013, 11:42 AM
  • i need more then tht its only 600 words i need 8 to 9 pages without counting the titile page and references page and i need eight references
    User_2385 | May 30, 2013, 15:13 PM
  • how did the teacher say? i thought it was a 400-500 word as per the instructions
    User_3133 | May 30, 2013, 15:16 PM
  • yes that is correct but i need this to make final paper on the same topic with eight to 9 pages with eight references
    User_2385 | May 30, 2013, 15:21 PM
  • that is more work than i thought but with the money we agreed it will be a bit unfair
    User_3133 | May 30, 2013, 15:24 PM
  • i know okay final paper we will talk about this latter there is powerpoint information i added if you want to start work on that and then after you done i will add final paper information i will pay you 150 all together with final paper and powerpoint and this paper you did if that is okay with you
    User_2385 | May 30, 2013, 15:29 PM
  • for powerpoint i need eight slides i will add expamle of the powerpoint
    User_2385 | May 30, 2013, 15:31 PM
  • the power point will be a different paper or it will be included on the final paper?
    User_3133 | May 30, 2013, 15:33 PM
  • power point will be same topic you wrote on then final paper will be same topic again but more information as i told you 8 to 9 pages
    User_2385 | May 30, 2013, 15:34 PM
  • and when do you need this work of 8-9 page?
    User_3133 | May 30, 2013, 15:38 PM
  • i thought i was writing 400-500 word, 8-9 page you should give more time
    User_3133 | May 30, 2013, 15:39 PM
  • yes you have time to write you have 7 days if that is fine with you but i need power point before that well let me ask my teacher if powerpoint we can use same topic. then ill let you know so don't start anything i will let you know i;m sorry
    User_2385 | May 30, 2013, 15:42 PM
  • 7 days is a lot i will give it to you by tomorrow,8-9 page you give me 100 and the power power point will negotiate about it, is that okay with you?
    User_3133 | May 30, 2013, 15:47 PM
  • before the final paper i need the powerpoint but i sent a email to my teacher if we can use the same topic to write the final paper and powerpoint once i recive the respond i will let you knwo then you can start doing the power point the the final paper and i will pay 150 all togehter. after the powerpoint i will send you more instructions for the final paper.
    User_2385 | May 30, 2013, 15:51 PM
  • so i wait not even continue with the final paper?
    User_3133 | May 30, 2013, 15:57 PM
  • yes please i will let you know soon as i get respond back from my teacher
    User_2385 | May 30, 2013, 15:58 PM
  • okay
    User_3133 | May 30, 2013, 16:00 PM
  • Hello, sorry for that can you start working on powerpoint i add the details i need eight to 9 slides on same topic with references
    User_2385 | May 31, 2013, 14:16 PM
  • slide background can you make something releated to the topic.
    User_2385 | May 31, 2013, 14:19 PM
  • are you there
    User_2385 | May 31, 2013, 20:13 PM
  • Hello the assignment you did i got respond back from my teacher this is what we are missing can you please fix the exsting paper accourding to the teacher respond here what i got back Your paper is going in the right direction in regards to the topic Navdeep but on this essay you need to introduce and summarize 8 sources (2 per body paragraph) for a total of 6 paragraphs. Review the assignment, week 2 announcements, the guidelines, sample paper, and tips for structuring the paper found on the announcement board and the posts at the top of the thread for more visuals. :) I saw your note. The running header on the second copy was fine. :) In the introduction you would want to introduce and explain the topic using 8-10 sentences. Start the paper with a general statement of your subject, explain it, list the thesis/argument, summarize your topic, explain it, then use transitional sentence or two to move the reader to the body. In the body you would need to have 4 paragraphs total, without using headers like summary and discussion (see guidelines, tips and sampler paper) introduce each source/title, not the author, and you do not Try this pattern when revising: Introduce your source `Article Title`, summarize it in a few precise sentences, support it with a direct quote from your sources (optional), comment, announce your next source, summarize it in a few sentences, quote (optional), comment, then conclude with a transitional sentence or two that moves the reader to the next paragraph. In the conclusion restate the topic, relist your sources with a sentence each (2 sources per sentence) (the sources you listed in your body), state an attitude about your topic and sources,, then provide the reader with closure in this order. It's 8-10 sentences here as well. The ref list is alll 8 sources with last name, first initial, year in parenthesis, title of book in italics and only the first word capitalized, city, state and publisher. See the Purdue OWL for more samples. Last, review the assignment, announcements and notes at the top of the thread more ideas on the specifics of the final copy.
    User_2385 | Jan 06, 2013, 11:56 AM
  • i need this paper done by 06/03/13 so you can first do is fix the exsting paper by adding more sources because teacher want 8 sources can you please do it i didn't got any respond back so i don't know if you are still interested in my paper if not can you please let me know thank you
    User_2385 | Jan 06, 2013, 13:43 PM
  • sorry have been away for a while,,,, am interested but honestly your work is more and involving than i thought imagine writing such a draft with all that information,then a final copy of 8-9 pages then the power point with that amount you offered!!!! that offer is not fair i cant take it.
    User_3133 | Jan 06, 2013, 14:20 PM
  • okay i understand the first draft you did i summit to my teacher and he respond me back that this need to be 8 sources 2 per peragraph and then intro and conclusion. can you finsh this first and about pay how much you want fixng this then powerpoint and then final darft on same topic
    User_2385 | Jan 06, 2013, 14:59 PM
  • okay,
    User_3133 | Jan 06, 2013, 19:00 PM
  • Can u do this by june 3rd And doing all these agisnment how much you want
    User_2385 | Jan 06, 2013, 21:42 PM
  • i will do it by 3rd don't worry,,give me 250 and you will get the value for your money
    User_3133 | Feb 06, 2013, 01:55 AM
  • Ok
    User_2385 | Feb 06, 2013, 07:27 AM
  • are you there
    User_2385 | Mar 06, 2013, 10:30 AM
  • Working with your notes, create an outline to share the structure of your final paper. Using that outline, prepare a PowerPoint presentation of your final essay. By Saturday, June 8, 2013, submit the PowerPoint slides of your final paper to the Discussion Area. By the end of the week, respond to the rough drafts of two of your peers, using the criteria in the Evaluation Criteria for Preliminary PowerPoint checklist that you used to guide you in designing your own slides. To start, make an outline of your paper, using the thesis statement for the first paragraph and including one sentence for each paragraph of the body of your paper. Include one sentence for your conclusion as well. Here is a model to help you design the working outline of your slides. Thesis Statement First Main Idea First subordinate idea First example or illustration Second example or illustration Second subordinate idea First example or illustration Second example or illustration Second Main Idea First subordinate idea First example or illustration Second example or illustration Second subordinate idea First example or illustration Second example or illustration Conclusion For additional information and a complete breakdown about outlines and their formats, review your textbook and this week's lecture about planning the research essay, creating an outline, and writing the paper. Working from your outline, create a presentation of your final paper on a series of slides. Use the Evaluation Criteria for Preliminary PowerPoint checklist as a guideline in creating your slides. You will also use this checklist to provide feedback to your peers on their slides. When you complete your presentation, post it as an attachment to the Discussion Area below for critique by your peers. You should comment on the slides presented by at least two of your classmates by the end of the week. Below is a sample diagram or how a standard outline for a paper should look, and how your your PPL outline should look, or a rough idea. I'm pretty fair here so just keep things nice and simple with an INTRO, BODY AND CONCLUSION WITH TWO SUPPORTING EXAMPLES PER MAIN POINT in the body, as shown in BOTH THE OUTLINE AND PPL SAMPLE. Use Power Point as the subject heading. The feedback can be done in paragraph form, without cutting or pasting a criteria list. I attached an outline so show you what one looks like. It's not part of the assignment so do not attach one. The assignent is just the PPL. The outline is to help you organize your ideas. :). Thesis Statement (one sentence) Introduction- list your 6-7 main points of defense. Body- list your 6-7 main points of defense as shown in the intro, same order and basic wording, with 2 supporting examples per main point. Conclusion- list your 6-7 main points as shown in the intro and body, same order and basic wording.
    User_2385 | Mar 06, 2013, 10:31 AM
  • am there
    User_3133 | Mar 06, 2013, 10:31 AM
  • this include 8 slides with title page and also i need other slide with resources and i'll try to attach a sample so can look through and make background something related with abortion thank you
    User_2385 | Mar 06, 2013, 10:32 AM
  • i sent the draft did you see it?
    User_3133 | Mar 06, 2013, 10:33 AM
  • i cant' upload the sample i dont know so try to open this link if that might help you to create the slides http://threadcontent.next.ecollege.com/pub/content/b0d3e261-8c1d-45e0-b62b-621ce95ef28a/SUO_ENG2001_W5_L14_S1_G1a.pdf
    User_2385 | Mar 06, 2013, 10:36 AM
  • have you seen the rough draft have just sent
    User_3133 | Mar 06, 2013, 10:38 AM
  • yes you did great job.. and for next assignment i want no plagiarism please
    User_2385 | Mar 06, 2013, 10:47 AM
  • it is good if you could pay me then we move to the next assignment
    User_3133 | Mar 06, 2013, 10:50 AM
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