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Hello, I have an assignment done but needs to be revised and altered. The assignment is about the discourse community of Nutrition groups. Where I have been part of it. I already have a draft but I need it to be improved. Note: The assignment has to be in 4-5 pages but my draft is 3 pages long. I have provided two links, one that illustrates what needs to be said and questions to answer in the essay, and the other is my draft. It needs to be done by 10:30PM today.

Date Posted: 23/02/2018
Category: English
Due Date: 23/02/2018
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    User_14327 | Feb 24, 2018, 05:00 AM
  • I see its already time? Do you need it now? I have edited and added a few paragraphs
    komatsu | Feb 24, 2018, 05:02 AM
  • Shouldn't the spacing be double space? Or the instructions instruct you to use single-spaced.
    komatsu | Feb 24, 2018, 05:03 AM
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    User_14327 | Feb 24, 2018, 05:17 AM
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