Essay

Thank You.
User_14553 | Mar 06, 2018, 11:34 AM

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Welcome. How many pages?
User_4173 | Mar 06, 2018, 11:36 AM

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You can see in the sample document.
User_14553 | Mar 06, 2018, 11:40 AM

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Saw it thank you. Do you have the topic or I choose?
User_4173 | Mar 06, 2018, 11:42 AM

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I want to see and want to wait some 15 or 20 minutes while I want to login again in my University but this time they are updating there system.
User_14553 | Mar 06, 2018, 11:44 AM

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Okay, once you are able to log in, get the information and let me know
User_4173 | Mar 06, 2018, 11:46 AM

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Develop ideas through effective use of thesis statements, paragraph structure, topic sentences, and supporting details. Apply critical thinking skills to the writing process. Recognize the importance of purpose and audience. Model writing as a process through drafting, revising, and editing. Demonstrate appropriate use of sentence structure, grammar, syntax, and mechanics. Demonstrate rhetorical awareness of writing environments requiring informal or formal writing. Deliverable Length: 1 paragraph and 2 peer responses
User_14553 | Mar 06, 2018, 12:44 PM

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My professor give this also if this help you than its good.
User_14553 | Mar 06, 2018, 12:45 PM

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Hi Class, I see many of you struggling to create a thesis statement. Don't worry. This is just a first draft of it. Think of like a starting point. But your work will be easier if you start with a good persuasive mindset, which is why I taught these ideas extensively in Chat #1 and soon in CHAT #2. SEE THE ARCHIVE plus associated notes files in LEARNING MATERIALS. Persuasive essays work best when you are able to DEFINE A PROBLEM about your subject and then argue for a solution. Because of this structure, I have created a thesis format called BECAUSE-SHOULD THESIS FORMAT. This form was discussed some in Chat #1 and will be discussed extensively in chat #2 and in the file Chat #00-paper writing chat notes file in LEARNING MATERIALS - UNIT TWO. BASICS ON CREATING THESIS THESIS is usually the last sentence of the introduction. THE BECAUSE- SHOULD THESIS - because - in thesis - give reasons problem-solution = should- because/ because-should
User_14553 | Mar 06, 2018, 12:48 PM

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HESIS FORMAT. This form was discussed some in Chat #1 and will be discussed extensively in chat #2 and in the file Chat #00-paper writing chat notes file in LEARNING MATERIALS - UNIT TWO. BASICS ON CREATING THESIS THESIS is usually the last sentence of the introduction. THE BECAUSE- SHOULD THESIS - because - in thesis - give reasons problem-solution = should- because/ because-should BECAUSE PART OF THE SENTENCE lists claim - reasons for PROBLEM SHOULD part of the sentence gives the call to action for the solution 1. because of problem x, so and so should do Y 2. so and so should do X because of problems y and z Not all thesis statements need to use this formula, but they will be better for it
User_14553 | Mar 06, 2018, 12:52 PM

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BENEFITS OF BECAUSE-SHOULD FORMULA - Describes problem AND solution - Creates a complex sentences as your thesis - USES DETAIL IN YOUR THESIS STATEMENT - preview SUBJECT & topic sentences = essay map YOU could Google search "because should thesis statements" nothing specific comes up because I invented the because-should thesis format. but there is this: http://www.cws.illinois.edu/workshop/writers/tips/thesis/ EXAMPLE PROBLEM - office politics - affecting a company SOLUTION - trainings EXAMPLE THESIS : Because office politics can damage employee morale, destroy productivity, and even ruin a company's reputation, companies should provide team building programs and interpersonal communications training twice a year. Let me know if you have questions. best wishes, chris PS: I have been writing about this format on my blog. Here's the link to all the posts; dial backwards for the ones about thesis:
User_14553 | Mar 06, 2018, 12:56 PM

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http://sensedoubt.blogspot.com/search/label/persuasive essays
User_14553 | Mar 06, 2018, 12:57 PM

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So there is no specific topic? I cannot it mentioned in the instructions
User_4173 | Mar 06, 2018, 12:58 PM

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What do you mean no specific topic. Its showing Unit: Developing your Introduction.
User_14553 | Mar 06, 2018, 13:00 PM

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I mean the topic for writing the thesis. I understand all the other parts of the essay. I am asking about the main topic of the essay
User_4173 | Mar 06, 2018, 13:02 PM

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opic Choices Characteristics of a good parent, effective leader, or successful public servant: For your essay, you will select a good parent, effective leader, or successful public servant and define his or her values, qualities, and behaviors in your own words. After defining, you will then argue which 3 characteristics are the most necessary to be a good parent, effective leader, or successful public servant. Characteristics of a successful student in an online classroom: For your essay, you will explain what values, habits, and characteristics contribute to a student’s successful experience in an online class, and then you will argue which 3 characteristics or habits are the most essential for students to achieve success in an online classroom. Select your own topic: .
User_14553 | Mar 06, 2018, 13:03 PM

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For your essay, you may choose a topic of interest to you that is not listed above, but your topic must be approved by your instructor. Keep in mind that your essay must make an argument, and it must come from your own original ideas, so avoid a topic that requires research. The topic cannot be too broad, and it must be arguable.
User_14553 | Mar 06, 2018, 13:03 PM

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This is 2 where he wrote: Using the topic that you selected from the list in the Unit 1 Discussion Board that was approved by your instructor, post the following: Introduction paragraph: Your introduction is the first paragraph in your essay. Your first sentence and the supporting lines should grab the reader’s attention, provide an overview of the topic, and end with your thesis statement. Thesis statement: Your thesis statement should clearly make a claim and describe the central argument or idea of your essay.
User_14553 | Mar 06, 2018, 13:04 PM

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Now you understand or not.
User_14553 | Mar 06, 2018, 13:05 PM

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I do. Thank you
User_4173 | Mar 06, 2018, 13:09 PM

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My Instructor showed you an example on Word.
User_14553 | Mar 06, 2018, 13:10 PM

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You can see Download file 2 there is an some examples.
User_14553 | Mar 06, 2018, 13:11 PM

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And in our University there is Original Verification also I don't know they got your information or not.
User_14553 | Mar 06, 2018, 13:13 PM

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As you know other things also as Turnitin or Plagiarism.
User_14553 | Mar 06, 2018, 13:14 PM

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I got it. Everything is clear
User_4173 | Mar 06, 2018, 13:15 PM

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One time I submit one essay in our University but Original Report got my information and showed that my report has % 80 OV score so they said that you need to submit your work again.
User_14553 | Mar 06, 2018, 13:16 PM

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Don't worry. I will send you a plagiarism report as well. I offer original work. You will like my work.
User_4173 | Mar 06, 2018, 13:27 PM

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You offer original work but in what % did full % 100 as turnitin or % 0 or some % 20 or % 30 also ok.
User_14553 | Mar 06, 2018, 13:29 PM

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If my Original Report is % 0 or % 10 also and my professor like my work and give points and not got me than I give you more $ and than I choose only you.
User_14553 | Mar 06, 2018, 13:33 PM

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I get you. You will get a quality paper
User_4173 | Mar 06, 2018, 13:34 PM

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Thank you and my University is CTU I think you know Colorado Technical University and this subject is ENG104.
User_14553 | Mar 06, 2018, 13:36 PM

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Hello friend how are have you done or you need my help.
User_14553 | Mar 07, 2018, 01:03 AM

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Hi friend. Everything is OK. I will upload it today
User_4173 | Mar 07, 2018, 04:08 AM

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I have uploaded the work. The originality report is the pdf file. Its 0%. Don't forget to rate me a 10 star and release the funds.
User_4173 | Mar 07, 2018, 11:32 AM

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Hey friend my University have Turnitin and Originality Report and I submitted your report and you won't believe they showed % 43 Originality Report and Turnitin showed % 43 submitted to Thomas Edison State College and after that its showing many websites name and there % like Submitted to London School of Science and Technology % 43, % 43 Submitted to University of Reading. These all are called Plagiarism and you did these all these are very danger many Universities said if we saw Plagiarism in your report than we can take you out from our University and you said that there is no Internet Source, Publications, Similarity Index, Student papers are not there. You didn't do good its very bad I don't like you.
User_14553 | Mar 07, 2018, 12:26 PM

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Here you see your report yourself. https://ev.turnitin.com/app/carta/en_us/?o=926609065&lang=en_us&u=1033705299&student_user=1
User_14553 | Mar 07, 2018, 12:27 PM

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Its with Turnitin.
User_14553 | Mar 07, 2018, 12:28 PM

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Its ok now when I submitted through pdf than its showed so many Institutions name and % 43 Original Report but when I submitted through Microsoft Word its showing only % 10 Original Report or Turnitin and what is Running Head: Characteristics of Good Parent because Turnitin choosing this only and giving % 10 and they showing 3 Universities where they submitted this Character not report I think we need to delete this character because the 3 Universities who submitted this character are 1 my which is CTU 2 is Corinthian Colleges and 3 Columbia Southern University.
User_14553 | Mar 07, 2018, 13:35 PM

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https://ev.turnitin.com/app/carta/en_us/?u=1033705299&lang=en_us&student_user=1&s=&o=926619484
User_14553 | Mar 07, 2018, 13:36 PM

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Not that this one. https://ev.turnitin.com/app/carta/en_us/?o=926619484&lang=en_us&u=1033705299&student_user=1
User_14553 | Mar 07, 2018, 13:38 PM

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Hi friend, I cannot access the links because I will need to log in. Please if possible download the turnitin report and send to me so I can remove all the words that are similar.
User_4173 | Mar 07, 2018, 14:04 PM

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No you don't need to login you can copy this and paste in website than you can see the report I am sure. I am doing this without login you try again here paste this.
User_14553 | Mar 07, 2018, 14:07 PM

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https://ev.turnitin.com/app/carta/en_us/?o=926619484&lang=en_us&u=1033705299&student_user=1
User_14553 | Mar 07, 2018, 14:08 PM

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Its telling me my session has expired and I need to login
User_4173 | Mar 07, 2018, 14:11 PM

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How this possible
User_14553 | Mar 07, 2018, 14:17 PM

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Are you fully copied http and than pasting in website.
User_14553 | Mar 07, 2018, 14:18 PM

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https://ev.turnitin.com/app/carta/en_us/?o=926619484&lang=en_us&u=1033705299&student_user=1
User_14553 | Mar 07, 2018, 14:18 PM

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I even don't know. You will have to download it. Or take screenshots of the report since I cannot access
User_4173 | Mar 07, 2018, 14:19 PM

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Yea I just copy pasted the link you sent
User_4173 | Mar 07, 2018, 14:20 PM

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You can see the report if I download it that's it other things you can't see.
User_14553 | Mar 07, 2018, 14:20 PM

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And it says my session has expired. I need to login to continue
User_4173 | Mar 07, 2018, 14:21 PM

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You can see only normal report report with words if I download it but if you see in website than you can see everything.
User_14553 | Mar 07, 2018, 14:21 PM

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When downloading, click current view. I will see the details
User_4173 | Mar 07, 2018, 14:22 PM

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You don't know in right side there is match overview which is showing % 10 and websites name and if I download it only report download but not them.
User_14553 | Mar 07, 2018, 14:24 PM

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Take screenshots of the report. Have you scrolled up to the last page of the downloaded file?
User_4173 | Mar 07, 2018, 14:27 PM

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Ohh now I understand you are correct Turnitin working in Google Chrome but when I used that in other site as in AOL it showed me same thing which you said because I am a member of Turnitin and I saved username and password in Google so I think Google is opening Turnitin in there website without login.
User_14553 | Mar 07, 2018, 14:28 PM

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Yea that is it
User_4173 | Mar 07, 2018, 14:30 PM

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https://www.dropbox.com/s/bgzx1sd68bs4cgw/Screenshot%202018-03-07%2009.33.22.png?dl=0
User_14553 | Mar 07, 2018, 14:33 PM

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https://www.dropbox.com/s/jba4lu1kovwpn5p/Screenshot%202018-03-07%2009.34.52.png?dl=0
User_14553 | Mar 07, 2018, 14:35 PM

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Are you seeing something.
User_14553 | Mar 07, 2018, 14:35 PM

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Yea
User_4173 | Mar 07, 2018, 14:38 PM

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So what do you think how it is.
User_14553 | Mar 07, 2018, 14:39 PM

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Its 3 Universities and % 10.
User_14553 | Mar 07, 2018, 14:40 PM

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I have edited the topic. Check the new file and let me know if it still shows plagiarism
User_4173 | Mar 07, 2018, 14:44 PM

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Where is the document.
User_14553 | Mar 07, 2018, 14:46 PM

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I got it.
User_14553 | Mar 07, 2018, 14:47 PM

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Thank god its % 0.
User_14553 | Mar 07, 2018, 14:51 PM

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https://www.dropbox.com/s/bsdirqo7259i3ei/Screenshot%202018-03-07%2009.51.45.png?dl=0
User_14553 | Mar 07, 2018, 14:52 PM

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Great!
User_4173 | Mar 07, 2018, 14:53 PM

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I want to do my other work you can wait just one day.
User_14553 | Mar 07, 2018, 14:55 PM

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Your time is different our time is different.
User_14553 | Mar 07, 2018, 14:56 PM

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I will be glad to work with you again friend. Yea our time is different. When you post you can always notify me on this thread and address the assignment to Greatcontentcreator
User_4173 | Mar 07, 2018, 14:58 PM

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I can.
User_14553 | Mar 07, 2018, 14:59 PM

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Thank you
User_4173 | Mar 07, 2018, 15:00 PM

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Hello friend thank you for that homework I gave you the money but my future is not good because my professor said that I said you many times to submit this discussion 2 worked but you didn't submit and now you submitted so now you can't able to get any points you need to do other discussion 3. OV score is % 0 its good they saw but they said now its nothing because you violated your previous discussion 2 so now you can't get any points.
User_14553 | Mar 07, 2018, 23:30 PM

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Only and only that professor is bastard other professors are good you won't believe after seeing Turnitin % 100 score they gave full points other professors. But this bastard ENG103 professor not giving any points rascal saying to re-do the homework or he complaint to Academic Administration Office.
User_14553 | Mar 07, 2018, 23:33 PM

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After not doing discussion 2 he complaint to Academic Administration Office so now they didn't accept new discussion 2 essay with % 0 OV score.
User_14553 | Mar 07, 2018, 23:34 PM

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I'm sorry about that friend
User_4173 | Mar 08, 2018, 00:48 AM

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You see what they said.
User_14553 | Mar 08, 2018, 00:51 AM

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You were told you could resubmit the assignment for up to 7 days after it was due. As a result of that you never completed within that time frame. The Unit 2 was then submitted to academic honesty and it was declared a plagiarized assignment. You are NOT eligible to get a grade on this at this point. Although, you just turned it in today with an OV score of 0% Academic Honesty has stated that it has to remain an F. You cannot appeal this grade, and you cannot get grade on it. When Academic Honesty rules on a plagiarism violation work for that assignment cannot be approved. The professor has stated that the Unit 2 DB which is an essay introduction can be built off of in Unit 3 and he will review that portion along with the body of the essay which is what you should be building into for Discussion Board 3. This will just be a grade for DB 3, you cannot get a new grade for DB 2 due to the violation. Best Regards,
User_14553 | Mar 08, 2018, 00:51 AM

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Hey friend where are you.
User_14553 | Mar 08, 2018, 22:59 PM

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Hey friend I am posting discussion 3 question can you helped me that doing that because that was also past due now I don't want to loose points in that.
User_14553 | Mar 08, 2018, 23:06 PM

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Hi friend, Sorry I was away
User_4173 | Mar 08, 2018, 23:12 PM

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I submitted new question and there are 8 peoples came to got that question.
User_14553 | Mar 08, 2018, 23:25 PM

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Now I need to choose 1 from them because you are not there.
User_14553 | Mar 08, 2018, 23:27 PM

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Tell me what I do.
User_14553 | Mar 08, 2018, 23:27 PM

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I already sent my bid friend
User_4173 | Mar 08, 2018, 23:37 PM

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