Instruction
- correct the grammar and sentences structures with adding more sentences on it to enhance it.
- every paragraph should be free from plagiarism. Fix the grammar mistakes. I have program shows me all that, could grammarly.
- add more information to what I already have done, then highlight them so I know what you added
- the pictures should be explained underneath of it not just copy and paste.
Note that I need it in no more than 3 hours from now