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Improving an essay. I have written an essay about writing instructions and it needs to be improved. All of the comments of my instructor is attached down bellow and the banner for the actual essay it attached below to so you don't get confused in different files.

Date Posted: 23/06/2018
Category: English
Due Date: 24/06/2018
Instruction
Read the essay first then the comments. There is a check list at the end of the essay please follow it to make the essay perfect.
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ExcellentTutor 8 years, 3 months ago
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  • Did you understand the assignment basically you just have to improve an essay I have written based on the instructors comments
    User_10754 | Jun 23, 2018, 15:49 PM
  • are you there?
    User_10754 | Jun 23, 2018, 15:52 PM
  • yes I can do it. you need it by tomorrow?
    ExcellentTutor | Jun 23, 2018, 15:53 PM
  • yes
    User_10754 | Jun 23, 2018, 15:53 PM
  • when can you finish it ?
    User_10754 | Jun 23, 2018, 15:53 PM
  • by tomorrow morning
    ExcellentTutor | Jun 23, 2018, 15:54 PM
  • how many hours please just to make sure
    User_10754 | Jun 23, 2018, 15:55 PM
  • I can do 20 but 25 is to much for just improving an essay
    User_10754 | Jun 23, 2018, 15:56 PM
  • okay lets make it 20
    ExcellentTutor | Jun 23, 2018, 15:58 PM
  • okay how many hours can you finish it please?
    User_10754 | Jun 23, 2018, 15:58 PM
  • in 12 hours i will be done
    ExcellentTutor | Jun 23, 2018, 15:59 PM
  • okay great
    User_10754 | Jun 23, 2018, 16:00 PM
  • Assigned!
    User_10754 | Jun 23, 2018, 16:02 PM
  • just please make sure you read the banner of the essay first then the essay and then the instructors comments and improve the essay please
    User_10754 | Jun 23, 2018, 16:02 PM
  • okay, I have started working on it
    ExcellentTutor | Jun 23, 2018, 16:03 PM
  • alright
    ExcellentTutor | Jun 23, 2018, 16:04 PM
  • I have attached a check list below the essay make sure you read it first before doing the improvement and after you are done please go through it again make sure its perfect
    User_10754 | Jun 23, 2018, 16:04 PM
  • okay I got that
    ExcellentTutor | Jun 23, 2018, 16:05 PM
  • hello its been 12 hours are you done?
    User_10754 | Jun 24, 2018, 09:06 AM
  • Yes I am checking grammar and few things I will upload it in a few
    ExcellentTutor | Jun 24, 2018, 09:07 AM
  • no worries take your time
    User_10754 | Jun 24, 2018, 09:45 AM
  • I have uploaded your assignment please check and release the payment. Ragards
    ExcellentTutor | Jun 24, 2018, 10:16 AM
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    ExcellentTutor | Jul 08, 2018, 06:47 AM
  • Did you post it
    ExcellentTutor | Jul 08, 2018, 06:48 AM
  • hey I have an assignment live let me know if you are willing
    User_10754 | Jul 11, 2018, 10:04 AM
  • Of course yes. Upload it and I will do it for tou
    ExcellentTutor | Jul 11, 2018, 10:23 AM
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