Instruction
MLA style, You need quotations from the novel in every paragraph: at least one, possibly two depending on how much you cover in each paragraph. You also have format and structural issues.
i need an A on this revision.
Maybe this will help.
F(rancis) Scott (Key) Fitzgerald." Contemporary Authors Online. Detroit: Gale, 2004. Literature Resource Center. Accessed 7 July 2014.
Pelzer, Linda C. Student Companion to F. Scott Fitzgerald. Greenwood P, 1979.
Schneider, Daniel J. “Color-Symbolism in The Great Gatsby.” Critical Insights: The Great Gatsby. Ed. Morris Dickstein. Ipswich, MA: Salem P, 2009. 246-254. Literature Reference Center. Accessed 7 July 2014.
Stocks, Claire. “‘All men are [not] created equal’: F. Scott Fitzgerald's The Great Gatsby.” The English Review 17.3 (Feb. 2007). Literature Resource Center. Accessed 7 July 2014