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i need someone to edit my essay and apply the prof comment

Date Posted: 30/10/2013
Category: General
Due Date: 02/11/2013
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i need to edit my essay by applying the prof comments and feed back from my previous essay ..
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A1homeworkexpert 12 years, 11 months ago
Rated 9.3 earned 1604.00 around 55 assignments.
can perform mention task and you will get an A for sure if you are interested please contact me or accept my down-payment so that i will be able to start your work asap. thanks regards.
$10.00
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    User_3751 | Oct 30, 2013, 16:36 PM
  • Hi, am an expert in writing equipped with vast knowledge. Can I help you with this assignment? My work is original and of high standard. I assure you that you will not regret entrusting me with your work
    User_3751 | Oct 30, 2013, 16:36 PM
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expert4u 12 years, 11 months ago
Rated 9.0 earned 77109.21 around 2331 assignments.
Please assign this assignment to me and rest assured that you will get quality, plagiarism free and timely delivered work. Please consider my bid. Thank you.
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committedwriter 12 years, 11 months ago
Rated 9.14 earned 89563.32 around 3017 assignments.
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  • man u wrote that essay do u remember ??
    User_2435 | Oct 30, 2013, 17:10 PM
  • and u wrote me the previous one abut the hart locker
    User_2435 | Oct 30, 2013, 17:11 PM
  • so i get that feedback for the hart locker and i want to apply the comments to Kindred
    User_2435 | Oct 30, 2013, 17:12 PM
  • i will assign it write now and i will post an ew homework as well
    User_2435 | Oct 30, 2013, 17:13 PM
  • right* now.........
    User_2435 | Oct 30, 2013, 17:25 PM
  • Thank you.
    committedwriter | Oct 30, 2013, 17:27 PM
  • Please the picture with the feedback is not clear. would you mind uploading it in another clear version?
    committedwriter | Oct 30, 2013, 17:30 PM
  • yes
    User_2435 | Oct 30, 2013, 17:33 PM
  • Ok. Thank you.
    committedwriter | Oct 30, 2013, 17:35 PM
  • im trying to up lode since ever
    User_2435 | Oct 31, 2013, 00:52 AM
  • write for me an email address AND i will send it to u
    User_2435 | Oct 31, 2013, 00:53 AM
  • Please the website does not allow this and it can be risky to me. Because the assignment is not due today, please just keep on trying and am sure you will succeed.
    committedwriter | Oct 31, 2013, 00:58 AM
  • i cant uplode my friend
    User_2435 | Jan 11, 2013, 11:42 AM
  • okay i will write it
    User_2435 | Jan 11, 2013, 12:19 PM
  • Hello, can you send it to the support team to fo9rward it to me?
    committedwriter | Jan 11, 2013, 12:26 PM
  • ................................................................................................................ your introduction presents some compelling and promising ideas, but the thesis statment is too vague to be workable. You do not identify which soldiers are addicted to was (all three of them ?) how does that account for how different their characters are and how differently they respond to dangerous situations?) and you do not identify exactly what aspescts of war function as an addiction. Many of your claims are confusing because you do not cite evidence and explain the reasoning behind such a claims. You seem to claim that James, Sanborn, and Eldrige are all addicated to war because thier jobs require them to put thier lives art risk . Many diffrent types of jobs, including that of a soldier, are dangerouse . Dose that mean everyone who performs such jobs is suffering from an addication?
    User_2435 | Jan 11, 2013, 12:34 PM
  • Throughout paper , you make arguable claims without explaining the logical reasoning behind them . You need to provide critical analysis to support your claims, rather than simply presenting a series of unexplained assertions. You also make arguable claim without citing evidence to support them .
    User_2435 | Jan 11, 2013, 12:38 PM
  • Remember and work to apply the three step rule :1) make an arguable claim relevant to the thesis, 2): cite specific evidence (a quotation, dialogue, reference to or very brief description plot point 3): engage critical thinking analysis of the evidence to demonstrate its interpretive significance in relation to the arguable claim made in step one
    User_2435 | Jan 11, 2013, 12:45 PM
  • Vague language is another recurring weakness in the essay. Try to be as clear as precise as possible so readers can fully comprehend your meaning
    User_2435 | Jan 11, 2013, 12:47 PM
  • i will give a 5$ extra if u do a good job so total 15$
    User_2435 | Jan 11, 2013, 12:47 PM
  • I assure you the job will be good.
    committedwriter | Jan 11, 2013, 13:00 PM
  • I am really sorry the long delay. I experienced a technical problem and I was unable to work on the assignment in time and I request that if possible, please extend the deadline so that I may be able to perfectly fix the comments of the professor. Please bare with me the situation and hope that all would be well in future.
    committedwriter | Feb 11, 2013, 20:34 PM
  • dude i need it in 10 hrs
    User_2435 | Mar 11, 2013, 22:45 PM
  • my class is 2mro at lease fix it a little a bid
    User_2435 | Mar 11, 2013, 22:46 PM
  • Am sorry please, i would have given it to you its only that I had technical issues, but i am working on it right away.
    committedwriter | Mar 11, 2013, 22:47 PM
  • okay u dont have fix everything or a lot of thing ,,,,, just try to apply some of the profs comment that's it and my class after 9 hrs exactly
    User_2435 | Mar 11, 2013, 22:54 PM
  • OK. Thanks.
    committedwriter | Mar 11, 2013, 22:55 PM
  • do i can get it in 2 hrs
    User_2435 | Apr 11, 2013, 06:59 AM
  • Yes please.
    committedwriter | Apr 11, 2013, 07:32 AM
  • okay
    User_2435 | Apr 11, 2013, 09:01 AM
  • i need now in 50 mnts plz
    User_2435 | Apr 11, 2013, 09:36 AM
  • I am trying to upload but having an error
    committedwriter | Apr 11, 2013, 09:43 AM
  • thats what happen to me before
    User_2435 | Apr 11, 2013, 09:51 AM
  • plz send to email dhm_8888athot....com
    User_2435 | Apr 11, 2013, 09:51 AM
  • i need it no one ASAP dhm_8888at hotmail
    User_2435 | Apr 11, 2013, 09:52 AM
  • Please I will keep on trying to upload it once. you receive it release the payment through the website.
    committedwriter | Apr 11, 2013, 09:56 AM
  • dude i did that so many times
    User_2435 | Apr 11, 2013, 09:58 AM
  • my class will start soon i need it
    User_2435 | Apr 11, 2013, 09:59 AM
  • Have you got it?
    committedwriter | Apr 11, 2013, 09:59 AM
  • yup thx
    User_2435 | Apr 11, 2013, 10:14 AM
  • How about the bonus you promised?
    committedwriter | Apr 11, 2013, 10:16 AM
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