Please read the essay that is in the attachment carefully and respond thoughtfully. Your insights will assist the writer in crafting a thought proving and well-structured essay. Answer by typing directly below each question, and use as much space as needed as responses must be substantial and detailed in order to be effective.

Date Posted: 20/11/2013

Category: English
Due Date: 20/11/2013

Instruction

Please read the essay that is in the attachment carefully and respond thoughtfully. Your insights will assist the writer in crafting a thought proving and well-structured essay. Answer by typing directly below each question, and use as much space as needed as responses must be substantial and detailed in order to be effective. The questions are: 1. How does the introduction get your attention? What elements could be strengthened?
2. What is the thesis statement (be specific)? Does it answer a question? How can it be more specific? How is it debatable? Does it accurately function as a roadmap for the paper? How can the thesis statement be improved?
3. Does the essays organization (both overall and individual paragraphs) flow logically? How can it be improved?
4. What claims need to be supported by more substantial evidence?
5. What prevalent grammar issues have you identified? Be specific.
6. How does the conclusion leave you thinking? What elements of the conclusion can be strengthened so that the essay leaves a deeper impact?
7. What does the author successfully accomplish in this essay?
8. Are there any essay related questions that you have for the writer? If so, list the questions.

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User_3720 | Nov 20, 2013, 03:07 AM
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committedwriter | Nov 20, 2013, 03:09 AM
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