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Need help looking over TWO one page essay assignment

Date Posted: 28/02/2019
Category: English
Due Date: 28/02/2019
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I need help within the next hour looking over an assignment for class. They are both one page and opinion pieces. The current paper does not read well and still has grammatical errors. I need to make sure it still refers to the instructions and it is clear which piece i am talking about
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Thetutor 7 years, 7 months ago
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    Thetutor | Feb 28, 2019, 12:24 PM
  • Hi have you been able to look at the homework
    User_18053 | Feb 28, 2019, 12:30 PM
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  • you havent responded to my other message
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  • Hi have you been able to look at the work
    User_18053 | Feb 28, 2019, 12:30 PM
  • Yes sure
    exclusivewriter | Feb 28, 2019, 12:33 PM
  • I’ve checked and I can deliver
    exclusivewriter | Feb 28, 2019, 12:34 PM
  • So you only need some help in editing?
    exclusivewriter | Feb 28, 2019, 12:36 PM
  • You’ve already done the project
    exclusivewriter | Feb 28, 2019, 12:36 PM
  • yes
    User_18053 | Feb 28, 2019, 12:37 PM
  • I can help you to grammar check it and make it look in-order
    exclusivewriter | Feb 28, 2019, 12:38 PM
  • Ok, assigned i have one more after the one I attached. I need it to be done within the next hour. The instructions are on the first attachment and the work i did is the second. Please look over the source i used as well and help me make sure it reads well, it is coherent and makes sense
    User_18053 | Feb 28, 2019, 12:39 PM
  • I’m doing that now
    exclusivewriter | Feb 28, 2019, 12:41 PM
  • Ok, ill attach the second Journal too then. Also please help me edit the title if it is not good
    User_18053 | Feb 28, 2019, 12:42 PM
  • Okay
    exclusivewriter | Feb 28, 2019, 12:50 PM
  • Did you see the other set of instructions and my work?
    User_18053 | Feb 28, 2019, 12:53 PM
  • Yeah, working on both
    exclusivewriter | Feb 28, 2019, 13:03 PM
  • Hello, I've updated the first journal. Let me know if you find it okay. I've used APA guidelines to format. Working on the second on
    exclusivewriter | Feb 28, 2019, 13:16 PM
  • Ok, I have a quick question. in the edited journal you just sent, there is a sentence that reads " I do not think that it is not easy to forget your people as a result of the war, but it calls for memorable events to remember them." Is this grammatically correct? it doesn't read well to me
    User_18053 | Feb 28, 2019, 13:21 PM
  • Okay let me check again, maybe at the end but I'll re-flame it again
    exclusivewriter | Feb 28, 2019, 13:23 PM
  • Please do. A lot of the words don't read well, the sentences are either too long or the words are kind of mixed up and they don't have any point or direction. I need it in 45 mins please!
    User_18053 | Feb 28, 2019, 13:25 PM
  • Okay
    exclusivewriter | Feb 28, 2019, 13:26 PM
  • Updated the second journal. Kindly let me know
    exclusivewriter | Feb 28, 2019, 13:37 PM
  • I read over, you didnt edit the wording. There are still alot of errors. I highlighted them in red for the second journal. The writing is not good but you didn't fix it. i didnt just want you to insert commas, the wording needs to be changed
    User_18053 | Feb 28, 2019, 13:40 PM
  • Please help me re do both. The wording is very wrong in both. Sentences are uncompleted and dont make sense. Please make sure you read it carefully
    User_18053 | Feb 28, 2019, 13:40 PM
  • Hey my friend, do you need me to repeat the two papers afresh or you need them emitted? You wrote the two papers not me who came up with that idea, what I'm just doing is to correct your grammar errors and that's what I have done. You give me one hour to deliver the two but its like you have your issues.
    exclusivewriter | Feb 28, 2019, 13:46 PM
  • ****edited?
    exclusivewriter | Feb 28, 2019, 13:46 PM
  • I can see a situation where you'll eventually cancel this assignment after all the effort I'm making
    exclusivewriter | Feb 28, 2019, 13:47 PM
  • How long will it take to repeat the two papers? if its too long, you dont have to change the idea, i just want it to read smooth. So the sentences should be complete
    User_18053 | Feb 28, 2019, 13:48 PM
  • i cant cancel the assignment. I dont do that. I just want it to be good. i got a D on the last paper, thats why i want it to be perfect
    User_18053 | Feb 28, 2019, 13:48 PM
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    User_18053 | Feb 28, 2019, 13:56 PM
  • I'm editing but I'm scared
    exclusivewriter | Feb 28, 2019, 13:57 PM
  • You have my word. I won't cancel it. I'm in desperate need. i trusted someone else and he didn't do it after id paid. He didnt correct the things that needed to be corrected. Please add the words that need to be added and help me make it read well. I wont cancel
    User_18053 | Feb 28, 2019, 13:59 PM
  • The problem with is that you need the work in 1 hours and you need a perfect assignment! How? I'm under-pressure my friend
    exclusivewriter | Feb 28, 2019, 14:01 PM
  • It can be the same reading or assignment. It can even be what i wrote. i just want it to read well. In what you sent back, some sentences were not complete. thats the problem
    User_18053 | Feb 28, 2019, 14:02 PM
  • I have sent the first on again, let me know
    exclusivewriter | Feb 28, 2019, 14:04 PM
  • The last two docs are my finals. Let me know
    exclusivewriter | Feb 28, 2019, 14:15 PM
  • Sorry for late response - checking now
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