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Read over the essay first, then follow the comments to fix my essay. 15hours

Date Posted: 18/03/2019
Category: Communications
Due Date: 19/03/2019
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Here are my comments on your paper: This is a nice illustration, but it's unclear whether this will be a 2-dimensional ad or a video. It's also not clear how semiotic concepts will construct the message of your advertisement, as it isn't clear what your message is. The "ethos" device isn't appropriate for this assignment- you need to use concepts we've covered in class since the midterm (metaphor, irony, connotation, etc.). You'll have to be much more detailed and explicit about how semiotics from our class functions in your ad.
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tectutorz 7 years, 6 months ago
Rated 9.66 earned 225503.62 around 8114 assignments.
Please assign this to me. I would like to start working on it right away.
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    tectutorz | Mar 18, 2019, 23:30 PM
  • can you finished on time and follow the instruction?
    User_16017 | Mar 18, 2019, 23:31 PM
  • Sure.
    tectutorz | Mar 18, 2019, 23:32 PM
  • I will be through in 15 hours. I will consider the instructions too.
    tectutorz | Mar 18, 2019, 23:33 PM
  • ok thanks
    User_16017 | Mar 18, 2019, 23:35 PM
  • THANK YOU MUCH FOR AWARDING THIS TO ME. I WILL BE WORKING ON IT.
    tectutorz | Mar 18, 2019, 23:36 PM
  • Please add the introduction with discribe this whole picture of advertisment, The advertisment word is "the more beatiful you see the more painful you recived" the texture of the shoes: it is using the Imitation sheepskin(green part), it is more softer. the gray part is using the imitation snakeskins, looks more elegant. this advertisment mean the transformation from a girl to a woman. Every girl have a princess dream.
    User_16017 | Mar 19, 2019, 01:15 AM
  • The picture I just upload to you.
    User_16017 | Mar 19, 2019, 01:15 AM
  • noted, thank you.
    tectutorz | Mar 19, 2019, 01:16 AM
  • Thanks you too!
    User_16017 | Mar 19, 2019, 01:17 AM
  • Hello there?
    tectutorz | Mar 19, 2019, 08:33 AM
  • yes
    User_16017 | Mar 19, 2019, 08:33 AM
  • any problem?
    User_16017 | Mar 19, 2019, 08:34 AM
  • I'm still working on this, but I can't see where you talked about Ad. The paper talks about Two films. and the instructions are Ad or video assignment.
    tectutorz | Mar 19, 2019, 08:35 AM
  • * the instructions are for a 2-dimensional ad or a video assignment. Please clarify on that.
    tectutorz | Mar 19, 2019, 08:37 AM
  • oh!!!!! you are right!
    User_16017 | Mar 19, 2019, 08:38 AM
  • thanks for reading instruction carefully i upload a wrong instrustion for you
    User_16017 | Mar 19, 2019, 08:39 AM
  • I'm very keen on instructions. That's why I'm the best here.
    tectutorz | Mar 19, 2019, 08:40 AM
  • I can still manage in the remaining hours. Just upload the correct instructions.
    tectutorz | Mar 19, 2019, 08:42 AM
  • hey!! do you remember? i just found out that this paper is also written by you. just on my friends account.
    User_16017 | Mar 19, 2019, 08:43 AM
  • Sure. I remember.
    tectutorz | Mar 19, 2019, 08:45 AM
  • that's great! so you can better to fix the essay.
    User_16017 | Mar 19, 2019, 08:46 AM
  • look at the doc and pdf i just upload
    User_16017 | Mar 19, 2019, 08:46 AM
  • Sure. Just let me know what was missing.
    tectutorz | Mar 19, 2019, 08:47 AM
  • Please add the introduction with discribe this whole picture of advertisment, The advertisment word is "the more beatiful you see the more painful you recived" the texture of the shoes: it is using the Imitation sheepskin(green part), it is more softer. the gray part is using the imitation snakeskins, looks more elegant. this advertisment mean the transformation from a girl to a woman. Every girl have a princess dream.
    User_16017 | Mar 19, 2019, 08:49 AM
  • follow this and the comments that i put on the instruction and those pictures to check this essay and add anythings that can make this essay better!
    User_16017 | Mar 19, 2019, 08:49 AM
  • Ok got it.
    tectutorz | Mar 19, 2019, 08:50 AM
  • Hello Friend. I'm through with ur work. Check it and Please RELEASE THE PAYMENTS.
    tectutorz | Mar 19, 2019, 11:01 AM
  • hi, i didnt see a lot of change in Introduction. because the comments said the instruction is unclear can you fix that? and also you need to add "The advertisment word is "the more beatiful you see the more painful you recived" the texture of the shoes: it is using the Imitation sheepskin(green part), it is more softer. the gray part is using the imitation snakeskins, looks more elegant. this advertisment mean the transformation from a girl to a woman. Every girl have a princess dream." all this idea in the introduction
    User_16017 | Mar 19, 2019, 12:03 PM
  • the intro is where having a big issue. you should have big change on it...
    User_16017 | Mar 19, 2019, 12:04 PM
  • are you there? only 6 hours left can you fix that? i need to get some sleep now... you need to somehow add all the idea i give you in the instruction section... and try to make the instruction more clear.!
    User_16017 | Mar 19, 2019, 12:10 PM
  • I will be fixing that.
    tectutorz | Mar 19, 2019, 12:19 PM
  • I think it now looks clear. Check it and RELEASE THE PAYMENTS.
    tectutorz | Mar 19, 2019, 15:03 PM
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    tectutorz | Mar 19, 2019, 20:38 PM
  • Please Remember to Release the Payment. Thank You in Advance!
    tectutorz | Mar 20, 2019, 06:30 AM
  • okay
    User_16017 | Mar 20, 2019, 10:30 AM
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