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This draft is about the subject of "Why People Around the World Look Different". For the overall assignment we were supposed to pick a subject based on our major (mine is Anthropology) and do a 8-10 page research argumentative paper with 8-10 sources. My draft along with my works cited is finish but I need the final done which is due today. Please use my draft and works cited as an outline and work off it of based on the comments my professor left for me to make my final paper better. Please help shift the focus towards human migration to make the topic more specific and make the paper stronger by engaging and responding to the information as my professor suggests. Please do not send me offered unless you understand what I am asking!

Date Posted: 23/04/2019
Category: English
Due Date: 23/04/2019
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Comments: You have selected a very interesting topic for your paper and I have no doubt that there is a lot of information on it. However, at this point the scope of your paper exceeds what you can reasonably do in 10 pages. As it is, the terms you are discussing are so broad that your paper reads as a general overview instead of an in-depth analysis on a single topic. I think if you focused on either human migration OR climate change that you would have a much more specific, and therefore much stronger, paper. The other issue we need to address is the body of your paper. Because you are speaking so generally, your voice is getting lost in the paper. Rather than an analysis that is presenting your own argument, it seems as if you are simply summarizing a lot of other people’s information. Remember that you will want to engage with and respond to this information throughout the body of your paper. PAPER IS DUE BY 10 PM in Ohio, United States! If you are in a different time zone PLEASE BE AWARE AND DO NOT TURN IN LATER THAN ASSIGNED PLEASE.
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tectutorz 7 years, 5 months ago
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    tectutorz | Apr 23, 2019, 14:32 PM
  • I have read the job details and I'm fully confident that I can deliver an A in this.
    tectutorz | Apr 23, 2019, 14:33 PM
  • Hello, did you read and understand what I am asking for this assignment?
    User_19035 | Apr 23, 2019, 14:39 PM
  • Hey, I have uploaded the original instructions, final paper outline, and the final paper rubric to reference. If you need any additional information please, let me know as conversation is key. Thank you for taking on the task that is due by 10pm Eastern standard time in Ohio, USA if you need to look up the time zone. Thanks!
    User_19035 | Apr 23, 2019, 14:48 PM
  • Ok. Thank you.
    tectutorz | Apr 23, 2019, 14:52 PM
  • Already working on it.
    tectutorz | Apr 23, 2019, 14:56 PM
  • Hello, I had some power outage. Please give me some more time to have it done. Thank you.
    tectutorz | Apr 23, 2019, 23:52 PM
  • Hi Friend I'm through with ur work. Check it and Please RELEASE THE PAYMENTS.
    tectutorz | Apr 24, 2019, 01:59 AM
  • Um...did you accidently send me the wrong homework because this wasn't my assignment topic?
    User_19035 | Apr 24, 2019, 02:20 AM
  • You there?
    User_19035 | Apr 24, 2019, 02:32 AM
  • Helloo?? I just need you to explain to me how this slavery paper is related to my draft and what my professor suggested I change?
    User_19035 | Apr 24, 2019, 02:39 AM
  • hello, where is your draft?
    tectutorz | Apr 24, 2019, 03:37 AM
  • It has been uploaded when I first put it up for bid.
    User_19035 | Apr 24, 2019, 03:39 AM
  • what you uploaded was two outlines( similar), research paper and fleming taylor
    tectutorz | Apr 24, 2019, 03:40 AM
  • you uploaded 4 docs
    tectutorz | Apr 24, 2019, 03:40 AM
  • Yes, the document with Fleming, Taylor. It's in document 1
    User_19035 | Apr 24, 2019, 03:43 AM
  • what?, I thought that was an example of how similar projects.
    tectutorz | Apr 24, 2019, 03:47 AM
  • I'm very sorry, do we have more time,
    tectutorz | Apr 24, 2019, 03:47 AM
  • I can fix this.
    tectutorz | Apr 24, 2019, 03:48 AM
  • I have about 9 minutes to turn it in
    User_19035 | Apr 24, 2019, 03:52 AM
  • will you mind asking for an extension, I think I got confused.
    tectutorz | Apr 24, 2019, 03:54 AM
  • I'm really sorry.
    tectutorz | Apr 24, 2019, 03:54 AM
  • Yeah
    User_19035 | Apr 24, 2019, 03:55 AM
  • ok. just ask for an extension and let me know. I will perfect on it, this time round.
    tectutorz | Apr 24, 2019, 03:57 AM
  • I have the extension but some points will be taken off but it's fine
    User_19035 | Apr 24, 2019, 03:58 AM
  • I'm really sorry. In future I will give you a discount to compensate for that.
    tectutorz | Apr 24, 2019, 04:00 AM
  • How many hours do we have?
    tectutorz | Apr 24, 2019, 04:00 AM
  • But please read the draft and the comments my professor left at the end of it. The suggestion that I want to take from him is to shift the paper towards human migration. I like the concept of your paper you sent me but put it towards this paper this time.
    User_19035 | Apr 24, 2019, 04:03 AM
  • it's 12:03am my time I have a few hours
    User_19035 | Apr 24, 2019, 04:04 AM
  • yeah.
    tectutorz | Apr 24, 2019, 04:05 AM
  • but I think it's going to be good if we use your topic so that we can fix what the professor had commented on your paper then we make it 8 pages.
    tectutorz | Apr 24, 2019, 04:08 AM
  • Okay. Don't forget the sources as well
    User_19035 | Apr 24, 2019, 04:12 AM
  • ok. thank you.
    tectutorz | Apr 24, 2019, 04:13 AM
  • Hello, Before you go. should I just fix your draft paper and add some content to be 8-10 pages?
    tectutorz | Apr 24, 2019, 04:18 AM
  • I don't want to let you down again.
    tectutorz | Apr 24, 2019, 04:19 AM
  • I uploaded the draft because it's supposed to be a refrence on how to make the final paper better
    User_19035 | Apr 24, 2019, 04:23 AM
  • So, if I fix everything following the professor's comment and add more content, will that be fine?
    tectutorz | Apr 24, 2019, 04:26 AM
  • So basically, after reading the draft and his comments on how to make it better, use the draft as an outline and make changes towards his suggestions of shifting it towards the topic of migration and whatever else suggestions he made. Build on to the paper if needed or add or take out sources as long as the final paper is 8-10 pages and sources 8-10
    User_19035 | Apr 24, 2019, 04:26 AM
  • Yes
    User_19035 | Apr 24, 2019, 04:27 AM
  • because that will be an easy way of getting full mark. I think they first look whether you've fixed what they told you to fix.
    tectutorz | Apr 24, 2019, 04:27 AM
  • Wow. Now I have fully understood.
    tectutorz | Apr 24, 2019, 04:29 AM
  • Yeah, are you able to do it still?
    User_19035 | Apr 24, 2019, 04:31 AM
  • Sure. I will submit ASAP!
    tectutorz | Apr 24, 2019, 04:32 AM
  • I will keep on updating you.
    tectutorz | Apr 24, 2019, 04:33 AM
  • Okay, thank you
    User_19035 | Apr 24, 2019, 04:34 AM
  • I want to finish it ASAP so that you can go through it before submitting.
    tectutorz | Apr 24, 2019, 04:34 AM
  • Hey just checking in on the paper?
    User_19035 | Apr 24, 2019, 09:25 AM
  • Uploading in,,,, give me 10 seconds.
    tectutorz | Apr 24, 2019, 09:28 AM
  • You can check out.
    tectutorz | Apr 24, 2019, 09:30 AM
  • Just read it, it's much better thank you
    User_19035 | Apr 24, 2019, 09:46 AM
  • Thank you
    tectutorz | Apr 24, 2019, 09:58 AM
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