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Looking for someone to revise this essay for me.

Date Posted: 08/08/2019
Category: English
Due Date: 16/08/2019
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My professor is giving me the option to revise one of my essays for his course. I originally got a B on it, trying to make it to where I get an A now. Below is his feedback from it... and I also attached my original paper. I'm getting a really big surgery today, so I'll be out for a couple weeks. Thank you. This is a tough topic for a logical argument essay, because it is difficult (impossible?) to 'prove' your major premise. Other points are more supported. Opening sentences could be coordinated better--they seem disconnected from each other. What is the evidence supporting argument that an unborn child is a person? Any support other than assertions?
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