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Communication/Writing correction Work correction Write 3 paragraphs using Parts II, III, and IV of your outline as a guide. Use at least one in-text citation for each paragraph. Upload your Word document

Date Posted: 09/11/2019
Category: Communications
Due Date: 10/11/2019
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Teacher feedback is in parentheses: Working from home has some important benefits in modern life. First, work-life balance is one of the most positive gains with which someone can reconcile time between projects and family (Kiss, 2019). (This is only the in-text citation. Where is your discussion?) Second, the employees are more likely to be healthier since, at home, they avoid unnecessary stress like uncomfortable meetings, disturbing noises, and unpleasant distractions (White,2019). (Your first sentence should be your own argument. Insert the in-text citation in the middle of your discussion to provide evidence to your argument.) Third, working from home can save money for both the worker and the company. saving money can be profitable. All the funds saved by a worker that would be spent on transportation, lunches, and coffees can turn to spend it with the loved ones in an enjoyable circumstance (Hunkeler,2018). (Where are your discussions? You were supposed to write whole paragraphs.)
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  • much better but third paragraph, the support ideas are not related to the statement which in save money to spend with family
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  • Third, working from home can save money for both the worker and the company. All the funds saved by a worker that would be spent on transportation, lunches, and coffees can turn to spend it with the loved ones in an enjoyable circumstance. As well as in the case, workers could use the money, making an order that would be met with more work. Some workplace environments seek to take the place of faith and mutual respect. Through flexible business policies, like flexible schedules and telecommute choices, corporations can create a trust for both the worker and the organization. Employees seem independent when given the freedom to make a flexible plan, and in turn, employers are able to gain from faithful employees (Lyonette, 2015).
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  • I am sorry but I had to redo most of the letter because the support sentences aren't good and directly related to the statement, I gonna send you what I have done, also the last paragraph
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