Instruction
Teacher feedback is in parentheses:
Working from home has some important benefits in modern life.
First, work-life balance is one of the most positive gains with which someone can reconcile time between projects and family (Kiss, 2019). (This is only the in-text citation. Where is your discussion?)
Second, the employees are more likely to be healthier since, at home, they avoid unnecessary stress like uncomfortable meetings, disturbing noises, and unpleasant distractions (White,2019). (Your first sentence should be your own argument. Insert the in-text citation in the middle of your discussion to provide evidence to your argument.)
Third, working from home can save money for both the worker and the company. saving money can be profitable. All the funds saved by a worker that would be spent on transportation, lunches, and coffees can turn to spend it with the loved ones in an enjoyable circumstance (Hunkeler,2018). (Where are your discussions? You were supposed to write whole paragraphs.)