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Date: 22/05/2017
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Project Status: Completed
This work has been completed by: wittywriter
Total payment made for this project was: $15.00
Project Summary: Paper editing: As you know, business people are busy. Often, our job is to write messages that are highly readable and accessible, so that our readers can understand our messages as quickly and easily as possible. In this exercise, you will work to edit a piece of writing to make it easier for fast reading. Your challenge: Reduce this message by at least 50% while still conveying the meaning. Then copy and paste your version into a discussion forum post. Reduce this message: 50% Editing Activity.docxPreview the documentView in a new window It will help to: Vary sentence length Keep paragraphs short (125 words or fewer) Focus on one concept per paragraph Place key ideas at the beginning Use lists, headings and subheadings for fast reading. Eliminate redundant words and phrases