Feedback Comment: i only get 20% of mark! Section 3. What is the theoretical perspective adopted by the author and what main concepts are used to analyze the data? Section 4. Was the study quantitative or qualitative? Who were the research participants? What tools are used to recruit and gather date? Why do the researchers use these tools? How was the data presented? Section 5. Researchers don't investigate assumptions, unless you mean hypothesis when you use the word assumption. The point of the research is to be sure to have data so we don't make assumptions. Does the analysis discuss behaviour, attitudes, or beliefs? Does it link individual agency to social structure? Is it convincing? Is it data-driven? How is the data used to strengthen the argument? Section 6. While you address all the appropriate elements of the critical review, most of the text is vague and doesn't answer the questions. Does the data justify the arguments and conclusions? You only mention that the authors have data.