Feedback Comment: FROM THE PROFESSOR: First of all, this is way too close to Nietzsche's exact words; it borders on plagiarism. Either quote Nietzsche directly or use your own words/style/sentence structure: "entirety of human relations which have been wonderfully and logically heightened, exchanged, and adorned, and which, after long utilization, appear to an individuals to be altered, accepted, and tying." -5 points: in-text citations are incorrectly formatted. Make sure your Works Cited page is double spaced, like the rest of the paper -15 points: grammar/punctuation: commas, apostrophes, various typos, and a few convoluted, non-idiomatic sentences plagiarism is not accepted, next time it will be reported and you may risk suspension. Other than that, from what I ewad it was a good essay. Contentwriter delivers in time. He or she is very responsive and is willing to fix the work when need be. I would give him or her a perfect 10, but plagiarism was found or as the professor said it was in the borderline. I was able to slip through this time, but I will not have a second chance. Contentwriter, I have you assigned for another paper, please don't plagiarize.