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I need my essay to be revised. I need a better thesis statement and the rest of the essay to be organized. I need their to be a topic sentence that links back to the thesis statement. The last paragraph before the conclusion needs to be a refutation paragraph. Each paragraph needs to be at least 250 words to 400 words. It must be APA Format 7th Edition. I need an annotated bibliography, a reference page, and abstract. The essay must be from 1000 to 1100 which only includes the references. I need evidence to be provided in each paragraph backing up my thesis, my topic, and topic question. This is my topic "Straight out of college with a degree, where is my job?" and this is my topic question, "Is college education in line with the job market?" I need to make an Evaluation Claim throughout my essay. An evaluation claim its a type of argumentative claim. It means what is the worth or value of this thing.

Date Posted: 27/07/2020
Category: English
Due Date: 27/07/2020
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I have provided my essay and what comments it had from a tutor. This was my original thesis statement, "The disconnection between higher education and the workforce has created a gap, due to the lack of experience, the misconception that people with higher education are fully prepared and ready to take upon the position of their major, spending hundreds of hours studying subjects that are irrelevant to the modern labor market." If you can add this or fix this thesis statement into my paper.
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