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For my assignment you have to do this : - Rewriting my essay based on the comment from my teacher. - Add more sentences for each paragraph. - For the three bodies you have to write a conclusion. - I want you to highlight every sentence based on compound, complex, or simple sentences. for example, the first sentence is complex I want form you to highlight it in red. after you finish I want to write a comment on what the color belongs to. use three colors because I want just the three types. please avoid plagiarism. - You can delete any sentence that not suitable for the essay and replace it with another.

Date Posted: 04/12/2020
Category: English
Due Date: 06/12/2020
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  • Hello, there is no much to do for my assignment if you accept 15$ I will pay for it.
    User_33206 | Dec 04, 2020, 17:05 PM
  • let's have a deal then
    flavian77 | Dec 04, 2020, 17:07 PM
  • how due is the work?
    flavian77 | Dec 04, 2020, 17:11 PM
  • my budget is 15$ not more than.
    User_33206 | Dec 04, 2020, 17:14 PM
  • 15 its well
    flavian77 | Dec 04, 2020, 17:16 PM
  • What's your deadline? how many hours from now
    flavian77 | Dec 04, 2020, 17:16 PM
  • what to you main?
    User_33206 | Dec 04, 2020, 17:18 PM
  • this sunday
    User_33206 | Dec 04, 2020, 17:20 PM
  • the task has how many hours to the deadline?
    flavian77 | Dec 04, 2020, 17:21 PM
  • 40 H from now .
    User_33206 | Dec 04, 2020, 17:22 PM
  • ok, thank you. I will submit the task before the 40H
    flavian77 | Dec 04, 2020, 17:24 PM
  • agreed
    User_33206 | Dec 04, 2020, 17:25 PM
  • thanks
    flavian77 | Dec 04, 2020, 17:26 PM
  • How I will pay 15 $ while your offers appear as17$?
    User_33206 | Dec 04, 2020, 17:26 PM
  • bid changed to 15
    flavian77 | Dec 04, 2020, 17:29 PM
  • I couldn't pay 15$, still 17$
    User_33206 | Dec 04, 2020, 17:32 PM
  • at 15 now, we are good to go, right?
    flavian77 | Dec 04, 2020, 17:33 PM
  • yes..
    User_33206 | Dec 04, 2020, 17:36 PM
  • thank you
    flavian77 | Dec 04, 2020, 17:37 PM
  • there are two files, right ?
    User_33206 | Dec 04, 2020, 17:40 PM
  • Yes there two files attached.
    flavian77 | Dec 04, 2020, 17:41 PM
  • Thank you for assigning me the work, I will submit before your deadline
    flavian77 | Dec 04, 2020, 17:42 PM
  • I understand we are in different time zones, what's the time there?
    flavian77 | Dec 04, 2020, 17:43 PM
  • 8:45pm
    User_33206 | Dec 04, 2020, 17:44 PM
  • thank you. as soon as the work is done I will let you know
    flavian77 | Dec 04, 2020, 17:46 PM
  • the title of my essay about "Different types of online learning platforms".
    User_33206 | Dec 04, 2020, 17:47 PM
  • okay, thank you. if you have any questions I'm here.
    User_33206 | Dec 04, 2020, 17:49 PM
  • thank you for that, it was very essential.
    flavian77 | Dec 04, 2020, 17:49 PM
  • hello dear, i have already completed the work. check and let me know
    flavian77 | Dec 05, 2020, 21:28 PM
  • If no concerns, please release payment and mark all the 10 stars and leave a positive review. Thanks in advance
    flavian77 | Dec 05, 2020, 21:30 PM
  • Yes hello, I have questions. Why you are not correct my mistakes in the file? , it seems to me like a new essay . I told you I want to correct my mistakes and add sentences on it . also, my essay about 5 paragraphs. sorry but I don’t want something new!
    User_33206 | Dec 05, 2020, 21:40 PM
  • just give me a few minutes i will be doing the corrections
    flavian77 | Dec 05, 2020, 21:54 PM
  • how much time do i have
    flavian77 | Dec 05, 2020, 21:55 PM
  • 3 H
    User_33206 | Dec 05, 2020, 21:56 PM
  • the requirements is to rewrite the essay if the sentence is correct I keep it, if wrong I have to rewrite it in a different structure.
    User_33206 | Dec 05, 2020, 21:59 PM
  • For the three bodies, you have to write a conclusion. just 1 sentence
    User_33206 | Dec 05, 2020, 22:01 PM
  • okay check after 3 hours
    flavian77 | Dec 05, 2020, 22:03 PM
  • okay
    User_33206 | Dec 05, 2020, 22:04 PM
  • one more thing you did not highlight the sentence!.
    User_33206 | Dec 05, 2020, 22:06 PM
  • after when you correct the essay, can you do it, please?
    User_33206 | Dec 05, 2020, 22:07 PM
  • which is to highlight every sentence based on compound, complex, or simple sentences. for example, the first sentence is complex I want form you to highlight it in red. after you finish I want you to write a comment on what the color belongs to. use three colors because I want just the three types.
    User_33206 | Dec 05, 2020, 22:11 PM
  • Noted and working on it
    flavian77 | Dec 05, 2020, 22:14 PM
  • thank you again.
    User_33206 | Dec 05, 2020, 22:15 PM
  • Hello, I have made the changes
    flavian77 | Dec 06, 2020, 00:42 AM
  • Ar you able to see the revised work I have sent?
    flavian77 | Dec 06, 2020, 00:42 AM
  • I know everything is clear now. Please release the payment now and give me a 10-star rating. It was awesome working with you,
    flavian77 | Dec 06, 2020, 00:48 AM
  • Are you there?
    flavian77 | Dec 06, 2020, 04:15 AM
  • I checked it is very clear, thank you
    User_33206 | Dec 06, 2020, 09:10 AM
  • I will release the payment.
    User_33206 | Dec 06, 2020, 09:11 AM
  • thank you for realizing the payment. do not forget to mark all the 10 stars and leave a positive review on my profile
    flavian77 | Dec 06, 2020, 09:41 AM
  • it was nice working with you
    flavian77 | Dec 06, 2020, 09:41 AM
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    tutorVictoria | Dec 04, 2020, 17:00 PM
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