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Looking for Tutor Name >> "Respectwriter" Look over professors notes and fix any grammatical, mechanical work. In texted citations, also need to be corrected. Plagiarism will lead to a score of 0 Project title "Applying Sportsmanship in Sports for Youth Athletes "

Date Posted: 21/04/2021
Category: Psychology
Due Date: 22/04/2021
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You are to review and corrected in text citations, fix any grammatical errors. I will attach the application project that will include the professors notes on what I need to do to correct the project. Sources in this project need to be added and some need to be corrected. Also you are to locate one scholarly journal article that pertains to the topic of my project. You are not allowed to re use any of the articles listed in the reference list. Once you have chosen a scholarly journal article, discuss how to apply the topic or skill for use with athletes or individuals. You can also focus on if you're a coach or parent and want to improve sportsmanship. After that please fit it into the application project file. You must include in text citations. Paper due Thursday at 11am
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Thetutor 5 years, 5 months ago
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  • Hello, I will work on it and make it an A grade work
    kingz | Apr 21, 2021, 20:29 PM
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Respectwriter 5 years, 5 months ago
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  • Hello, what is the earliest time you can get this assignment back to me?
    User_33317 | Apr 21, 2021, 21:42 PM
  • Like I mentioned everything is pretty much done. There are just a few things the professor need us to fix. And we need to add one more scholarly journal article and fit it into the project. I need to make this project 9 full pages. We are currently at 8.
    User_33317 | Apr 21, 2021, 21:43 PM
  • I have a meeting with the professor to talk about the paper tomorrow. Thursday April 21, 2021 at 11am. Can you get it to me by then?
    User_33317 | Apr 21, 2021, 21:45 PM
  • I was the one that messaged you on my other assignment wanting your help.
    User_33317 | Apr 21, 2021, 21:50 PM
  • hello, are you there?
    User_33317 | Apr 21, 2021, 22:01 PM
  • you're taking a little too long to respond, if you can't take on the work let me know. I will assign to another bidder.
    User_33317 | Apr 21, 2021, 22:11 PM
  • Another tutor just messaged me and said you were unavailable. I will go ahead and assign to someone else.
    User_33317 | Apr 21, 2021, 22:46 PM
  • Who said I was unavailable. My phone was off and I was charging it
    Respectwriter | Apr 22, 2021, 00:32 AM
  • And am now back. You can go a head and assign me.
    Respectwriter | Apr 22, 2021, 00:33 AM
  • Hello,are you there?
    Respectwriter | Apr 22, 2021, 00:43 AM
  • Another tutor messaged me and said you were unavailable
    User_33317 | Apr 22, 2021, 00:49 AM
  • What's is the user name of that tutor?
    Respectwriter | Apr 22, 2021, 00:52 AM
  • I just assigned so I'm not able to look back and see the tutors name.
    User_33317 | Apr 22, 2021, 00:55 AM
  • Okay
    Respectwriter | Apr 22, 2021, 00:56 AM
  • I don't need it for 11am after all, I will just go ahead at meet with her and ask her questions on my paper. You can turn it in to me tomorrow by 4pm.
    User_33317 | Apr 22, 2021, 00:57 AM
  • Fair enough. Thank you
    Respectwriter | Apr 22, 2021, 00:58 AM
  • Please see her notes on page 2 of the first file I uploaded. I am shutting down my computer and going to bed. Please message me if you have any questions, I will get back to you early tomorrow morning.
    User_33317 | Apr 22, 2021, 01:04 AM
  • Oka
    Respectwriter | Apr 22, 2021, 01:22 AM
  • Please send the work in word version that I will be able to edit. This one is pdf and hard to edit
    Respectwriter | Apr 22, 2021, 05:27 AM
  • I have uploaded another file, please let me know if you can work with that one.
    User_33317 | Apr 22, 2021, 12:06 PM
  • Alright
    Respectwriter | Apr 22, 2021, 14:37 PM
  • Hello, I just met with my professor over the paper that you are currently working on. I am not sure if you went over her notes on pg 2, where she stated that since I have 2 articles with the same author Bolter & Weiss dated 2012. She says one of them has to be (Bolter & Weiss 2012a and the other would be 2012b). She stated since they are the same author same year. Then they would be in the reference listed in alphabetical order by title at that point.
    User_33317 | Apr 22, 2021, 16:47 PM
  • Hello, did you receive my message?
    User_33317 | Apr 22, 2021, 18:40 PM
  • Hello, I still have not received any work. We agreed to 4 o'clock, it is currently 4:01pm.
    User_33317 | Apr 22, 2021, 21:01 PM
  • Uploaded
    Respectwriter | Apr 22, 2021, 21:25 PM
  • This work is incorrect.
    User_33317 | Apr 22, 2021, 21:31 PM
  • all if it is incorrect.
    User_33317 | Apr 22, 2021, 21:39 PM
  • 1) Professor stated in on the notes in page 2 that my entire opening paragraph was missing in text citations. You added a reference to a journal that does not pertain to the subject of project. 2) She stated that I have 2 articles with the same authors in 2012. She stated that one has to be 2012a and the other 2012b so she know exactly which article in came from. 3) The new articles you included do not pertain to my subject at all. She wants then to be strictly over sportsmanship. 4) You added new in text citations to paragraphs that were already included, the ones you used were "Winnick and the other was "Thevis" and those do not pertain to the topic.
    User_33317 | Apr 22, 2021, 22:33 PM
  • Journal article author name Walter does not pertain as well.
    User_33317 | Apr 22, 2021, 22:43 PM
  • I feel like you did not put effort into this work, and did not follow the directions. You also do not communicate in a timely manner. I will go ahead and cancel this work since it was incorrect and assign someone else.
    User_33317 | Apr 22, 2021, 22:45 PM
  • Why would u do that honestly
    Respectwriter | Apr 22, 2021, 22:53 PM
  • Why dont u tell me where to change
    Respectwriter | Apr 22, 2021, 22:54 PM
  • I have been telling you what to do since I assigned this assignment to you, I was very clear on all directions. I was still sending you messages on here on what to do and you still did not follow. You also do not respond to my messages, and you got the assignment back to me late. Which I think is very unprofessional.
    User_33317 | Apr 22, 2021, 23:05 PM
  • This is your job, and I believe that you should definitely understand how to read through everything and follow the directions. Which clearly was not done.
    User_33317 | Apr 22, 2021, 23:06 PM
  • You did not have to add anything else to the project, the project was just fine the way it was in length. The only thing that you DID have to include was ONE more scholarly journal article on Sportsmanship and include it to the paper. Then, you had to fix what the professor noted in the file I uploaded on page 2.
    User_33317 | Apr 22, 2021, 23:52 PM
  • Lete revise accordingly
    Respectwriter | Apr 23, 2021, 03:23 AM
  • I have rechecked the document I uploaded and this is what I conclude. 1. Your draft had about 65 grammatical errors which I fixed 2. The opening paragraph was not cited which I did and included one more source which was instructed by the teacher 3. On page 6, u had more than a page which was not cited, and as such it was a plagiarized content. I fixed it by including two more sources. 4. I arranged paper according to APA guidelines. For instance, I fixed the cover, numbered the paper, arranging intext citation, and fixed the reference alphabetical as required. 5. I never added any content 6. This means I followed all the teachers instructions to the fullest. I therefore suggest, if u have any further instructions or u think I missed one of them, kindly be specific about it and I will act on it accordingly. Thank you
    Respectwriter | Apr 23, 2021, 05:10 AM
  • I have already told you many times what you did incorrect. What you added into my paper was wrong. The articles that you included according to my professor do not pertain to my subject. They must be on SPORTSMANSHIP!! Which I have told you many times already. So the article you cited in the first paragraph cannot go there. The new articles you included cannot go there either. They are not on sportsmanship! You did not fix the in text citation. I only see one in text that has “2012a”, they’re all supposed to be fixed. If it’s the same author. One is 2012a, the other is 2012b. I looked through the paper and only one of them is fixed. All of them need to fixed so she knows exactly where the information is coming from.
    User_33317 | Apr 23, 2021, 11:19 AM
  • So what I’m trying to say is the new scholarly articles that you in included need to be taken out of my paper, because if I use them. I will get a score of 0. Only ONE new scholarly journal article needed to be added. So it needs to be on Sportsmanship. And fix the in text citation that I’ve been telling you about with a&b so she knows exactly what article we are talking about.
    User_33317 | Apr 23, 2021, 11:23 AM
  • It seems like you are not understanding. So since I’ve been waistband too my time explaining this to you over and over again. I will cancel this assignment.
    User_33317 | Apr 23, 2021, 11:26 AM
  • Waisting too much time**
    User_33317 | Apr 23, 2021, 11:38 AM
  • Please check the revised work and tell me if its okay
    Respectwriter | Apr 23, 2021, 14:56 PM
  • I have looked through your recent work. 1)My opening paragraph still does not have an in text citation. 2) It looks like on the paragraph that starts off with "Additionally" there is one Bolter & Weiss 2012 with a or b. 3) Also on that same paragraph that starts with "Additionally" you ended with Bolter & Weiss "2013". My professor had already graded this paragraph through turn it in.com and only thing she told me to add was 2012 a or b. So I believe that "2013" should not be the one.
    User_33317 | Apr 23, 2021, 15:56 PM
  • The paragraph that starts with "Additionally" the first in text citation is missing a or b.
    User_33317 | Apr 23, 2021, 15:59 PM
  • Also on the reference list, on Bolter & Weiss 2012 you also need to include which one is A and which one is B behind "2012"
    User_33317 | Apr 23, 2021, 16:09 PM
  • When she sees the in text citation on the paper with a or b, she will go down to the reference list to see which article the information is from.
    User_33317 | Apr 23, 2021, 16:10 PM
  • Okay
    Respectwriter | Apr 23, 2021, 16:32 PM
  • See the uploaded and advice accordingly
    Respectwriter | Apr 23, 2021, 17:29 PM
  • I have looked thought it. I just have one final question. The in text citation that you included in the opening paragraph. When our professor looks at that journal article you cited. Will make sense? Another words, you are not just adding whatever citation to the paragraph? If she reads up on this article the first paragraph will have information from the article?
    User_33317 | Apr 23, 2021, 17:36 PM
  • Yes..everything is perfect now
    Respectwriter | Apr 23, 2021, 18:01 PM
  • Okay.
    User_33317 | Apr 23, 2021, 18:06 PM
  • Will you kindly release the payment
    Respectwriter | Apr 23, 2021, 18:41 PM
  • Give me a min I have to make changes. I submitted my work on a website for class and a few of your in text citations were incorrect.
    User_33317 | Apr 23, 2021, 19:12 PM
  • I do not believe your work is worth $30 who can I speak to about this? I have been having to make changes on my own.
    User_33317 | Apr 23, 2021, 19:13 PM
  • I dont know what that means but the issue of price should not arise at this juncture. You aught to have rejected my bid in this first place
    Respectwriter | Apr 23, 2021, 22:05 PM
  • After careful consideration, please dont pay anything for this work. Although, I deserve to be paid, let me incur the loss. Assume it's a gift to you. It has been my pleasure working for you sir. Please let me know what the professor will say. In case she requires any adjustment, dont hesitate to reach out.Thank you
    Respectwriter | Apr 23, 2021, 22:14 PM
  • After submitting the work that you helped me on, It was still incorrect. So I had to go in and fix everything again. After reading all of the messages I have sent to you in this thread telling you what to do over and over again. You should understand that I shouldn't of had to do that in the first place. I gave clear information from the start and it was still incorrect. Also, you don't communicate in a timely manner, you take about 20-40 min to reply most of the time. You also turned the work back in to me 20 minutes after the time I asked it for. Now how professional do you think that is?
    User_33317 | Apr 24, 2021, 02:55 AM
  • I understand you very much and am sorry for any inconvenience caused. That's why I humbly suggest you shouldn't pay anything. Just cancel the task. Moreover, I am still available to do any adjustment that the professor would suggest.
    Respectwriter | Apr 24, 2021, 05:43 AM
  • I am no longer to make any adjustments to the paper. I had to use my original paper and make my own corrections. It is already past the time line. I had to turn it in. Now hoping that because of my last min work rushing over the paper. I am able to pass.
    User_33317 | Apr 24, 2021, 17:32 PM
  • You forgot to release the payment. Please do
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