correct my narrative essay

hi
User_8952 | Apr 15, 2016, 14:15 PM

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can you do it in 3 hours
User_8952 | Apr 15, 2016, 14:15 PM

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yes , kindly upload it
User_4173 | Apr 15, 2016, 14:17 PM

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40 is very high price for correction
User_8952 | Apr 15, 2016, 14:19 PM

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30
User_4173 | Apr 15, 2016, 14:19 PM

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promise high quality output
User_4173 | Apr 15, 2016, 14:20 PM

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can you make it 20
User_8952 | Apr 15, 2016, 14:20 PM

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okay but you gonna write the essay with the correction
User_8952 | Apr 15, 2016, 14:23 PM

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please let it be 30 promise high quality out,,,upload the file
User_4173 | Apr 15, 2016, 14:24 PM

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where is the essay please
User_4173 | Apr 15, 2016, 14:28 PM

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hello , kindly upload the essay so that i can start working on it
User_4173 | Apr 15, 2016, 14:29 PM

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are you there
User_4173 | Apr 15, 2016, 14:30 PM

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yeh but i don't have good wi-fi
User_8952 | Apr 15, 2016, 14:31 PM

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ok, kindly upload it as soon as possible so that i can help you,,,
User_4173 | Apr 15, 2016, 14:32 PM

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seriously, kindly upload the essay
User_4173 | Apr 15, 2016, 14:55 PM

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pleas, can you add more information to my essay after you fix it
User_8952 | Apr 15, 2016, 15:02 PM

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can you do it in one hour
User_8952 | Apr 15, 2016, 15:05 PM

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i add how many words
User_4173 | Apr 15, 2016, 15:07 PM

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any thing that make the essay good. don't forget to correct
User_8952 | Apr 15, 2016, 15:10 PM

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ok bro
User_4173 | Apr 15, 2016, 15:10 PM

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i have class now i will check the upload after my class pleas don't be later
User_8952 | Apr 15, 2016, 15:11 PM

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i'm a girl :)
User_8952 | Apr 15, 2016, 15:12 PM

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ok bro,
User_4173 | Apr 15, 2016, 15:12 PM

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looking forward working together
User_4173 | Apr 15, 2016, 15:12 PM

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lo!, hi cute
User_4173 | Apr 15, 2016, 15:13 PM

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kindly specify what you want to be corrected
User_4173 | Apr 15, 2016, 15:15 PM

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all the essay . are you done
User_8952 | Apr 15, 2016, 15:56 PM

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yes dear, 4 minutes
User_4173 | Apr 15, 2016, 15:57 PM

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essay uploaded. KINDLY RELEASE THE PAYMENT
User_4173 | Apr 15, 2016, 16:00 PM

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are you there my dear
User_4173 | Apr 15, 2016, 16:02 PM

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yep i'm here
User_8952 | Apr 15, 2016, 16:05 PM

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you go the essay girl,,, KINDLY RELEASE THE MONEY, looking forward working together
User_4173 | Apr 15, 2016, 16:08 PM

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i see the essay you add in the begging of the essay but it's a narrative essay that you shouldn't write about people just about yourself and you didn't add anything for the body that i have
User_8952 | Apr 15, 2016, 16:09 PM

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kindly take you time ,, i have added some parts inside,,, also you essay had a lot of grammatical errors , kindly confirm
User_4173 | Apr 15, 2016, 16:11 PM

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so now the essay has tow intro
User_8952 | Apr 15, 2016, 16:12 PM

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so now the essay has tow intro
User_8952 | Apr 15, 2016, 16:12 PM

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so now the essay has tow intro
User_8952 | Apr 15, 2016, 16:12 PM

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what do you mean by tow please
User_4173 | Apr 15, 2016, 16:15 PM

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you write this in the begging of the essay Music is an art of arranging sounds in systematic ways so as to come up with flow, United and reminiscent composition in forms of rhythm, melody, and harmony. Artist composes songs to get the attention of the audience depending on the occasion, time, and season. and this just in general i have this for the intro before and you fix it Nowadays, poets and writers tend to sing their words they wrote, which make me feel love. As I know, there are many people who love to listen to different kind of music owing to the fact that music makes us influence our feeling and our behavior. Also, music has an ability to take my mind from the real world to imagine the world, which makes me use it for relaxing such as yoga gives the motivation to do what I want. There are three main effects of listening to music, and it makes me feeling loved, changing my feeling, and give me a psychological comfort.
User_8952 | Apr 15, 2016, 16:18 PM

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you write this in the begging of the essay Music is an art of arranging sounds in systematic ways so as to come up with flow, United and reminiscent composition in forms of rhythm, melody, and harmony. Artist composes songs to get the attention of the audience depending on the occasion, time, and season. and this just in general i have this for the intro before and you fix it Nowadays, poets and writers tend to sing their words they wrote, which make me feel love. As I know, there are many people who love to listen to different kind of music owing to the fact that music makes us influence our feeling and our behavior. Also, music has an ability to take my mind from the real world to imagine the world, which makes me use it for relaxing such as yoga gives the motivation to do what I want. There are three main effects of listening to music, and it makes me feeling loved, changing my feeling, and give me a psychological comfort.
User_8952 | Apr 15, 2016, 16:18 PM

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yes , that is just an introduction dear
User_4173 | Apr 15, 2016, 16:19 PM

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so i think i'm gonna to delete the first one because it's for general
User_8952 | Apr 15, 2016, 16:19 PM

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you have to explain what is the music first
User_4173 | Apr 15, 2016, 16:20 PM

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okay thank you
User_8952 | Apr 15, 2016, 16:20 PM

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you got it, KINDLY RATE ME 10/10 and leave a positive feedback
User_4173 | Apr 15, 2016, 16:21 PM

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do you have another assignment
User_4173 | Apr 15, 2016, 16:25 PM

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